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I like your story so far, but don't cheat with simple letters. Like replacing Ok, with K. That just shows that your only in a hurry to get it done quickly. Try to take your time, as this is your story and you should put all your effort into making as close to perfect as you can.
Very good...
I think my greatest LOL moment was when I dropped my DS at one point while I was playing my game, I was like "NO!" but I was in tall grass when I did it, and I ended being in a battle against a Wild/Shiny Sneasel. I was really happy that I dropped my DS then, as it didn't have any problems either.
I usually listen to Linkin Park, sometimes Nickelback, but mostly I will listen to the Pokemon Theme from Movie 1, you know the one by Billy Crawford, it rocks !