Recent content by music17

Woo! Thanks again CWTAP! Here is something I wrote probably in February after a lengthy breakup after a 2 1/2 year relationship. It shows closure. My Veins are full of pure hatred My blood is black Cut me open and see That the hatred is within me I feel the pain reality brings I see the joy...

Why thank you CWTAP, it means a lot!

Well here is a new poem...well not new...I wrote it I think in May Warriors of the Wind Well here we are again. Stuck in a whirlwind of hope. Lost in Love and Lust. And never ending hate. We say its fine. We say whatever. But we never say the words that matter. I don’t get why we come back I...

I really do like this poem, I think it could flow a little nicer though. But you do say your feelings very well with your words. Don't worry poetry isn't that much about practice as much as coming from the heart.

That was really good. The flow was nice and I must say you are very talented! Oddly enough all I could think of was the scene in Schindler's List were the kids were playing in the ashes of the burned prisoners of the concentration camps.

Ok, since I don't want to constantly be making new threads on this board, I guess I'll post my poems here in this thread. Here is the first one...It is called Open Open a book and what do you see? Nothing but words that mean nothing to me. Stop trying to make connections because you’re not...

Oddly, enough I like it. I don't exactly like rap as a style of music. As a musician and a poet, I agree with you last line. It leaves a message.

Hey, I'm new to PokeCommunity, but I've been writing for who knows how long. I am also known as llamasshouldfly on DeviantArt. So here is one of my poems, I wrote on a whim! I lay alone across the dead highway Last to remain and Last one to Live I feel my death slowly approaching And yet I do...

I'm here Manaphy! So far the screenshots look really good!