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Next ep posted today... Chapter 3, Act 1

Name:Jack Davis Age:19 Gender:M Occupation:Gym Leader Appearance: Tall and quite clever,he wears a fasionable Jacket with a skull Peandant round his neck, He also has Brown Hair... Personality:Quite laid back,He is a good thinker and if in a group it will probubly be him who solves the task or...

OK if my Fic is rubbish please say because it helps...I'm only 9...

Just to say...Use the Edit Button to Edit your Post. EDIT:Please because I Rated and Read yours plz could you do the same with "The Journey" in pokemon fan fiction! Thanx!:P

Thanks for that in the future I'll put in more description....

Pokedex Update! 3 Pokemon: Chmchar (Caught) Starly (Seen) Abra (Caught)

Chapter 2, Act 3, Route 1 PT 2 After that battle,Michael thought it was time to run,he had recently discovered that Chimchar had learnt Taunt,and now he found a Abra,Abra's hated the move Taunt,Infact if it was even used just once in a battle with a Wild Abra,it could be caught,Very,Very...

I think if you can continue this in the right way,I'll definately keep an Eye on it....

I Understand... It was Constructive................................

Constructive Critisism is OK but that was definately Not constructive... And Ash does make sence remember that in the other games they have names of trees.........

Chapter 2,Act 2. Route 1 PT 1 Micheal walked down Route 1 with no problems at all until he saw a Trainer with 2 POKE Balls in her hands luckily she never asked for a battle,maybe she thought he was too good or that she was so good that he'd be no match for her....... Anyway moving on...

Arceus Latias Charizard Thanx!

Really Good Artwork,I hope to see more

Chapter 2, Act 1. Ninja Attack! Micheal had spent some more time with Chimchar,but still they had not encounted a Battle or anything along those lines... But all was about to change... Jumping out a tree a Ninja came out with a Pokeball in one hand and a Potion in the other... "I am a Ninja...

Chapter 1,Act 2. The Pokedex! Suddenly the Prof. pulled out what seemed like a High-Tech Device and showed it to Micheal... "This Micheal is the Pokedex,It automatically gives you data on every single different Pokemon you encounter,Fron Pidgey all the way to Ho-Oh! You,I Think are destined to...