Recent content by Post Office Buddy

Not a bad start to a fic that, to me, looks promising. I felt that there were spots where you could have expanded or explained in a different manner, but overall, it was well written. There were some grammatical oddities that I noticed, mostly pertaining to commas, and I'll do my best to point...

Bah, I forgot about the physical/special split. However, I stand by my assertion that the metagame doesn't need a major change to be interesting. Any new attack/ability combinations that are released in the fifth generation will make it interesting enough. It doesn't, but as that's the only...

You only reinforce my argument when you say that every change to the game can create an imbalance. Also, please be sure to read what I said in the correct context. I did say that it won't necessarily happen again, but it's still a possibility. The first generation wasn't the only generation to...

Everyone always forgets Sneasel. ;_; It was a second generation dark type, too. But anyway, it doesn't really matter. You can say that GameFreak wouldn't create an imbalance in the metagame all you want, but what it boils down to is how the players of the game use the new Pokemon and the new...

Considering that the Bug type was in the first generation and Psychics still destroyed everything, it obviously wasn't a very effective counterpart. When the second generation was released, the Dark type was introduced to limit the power Psychics had in battle, giving the Psychic type its first...

My fiancee and I went on the 31st to get it on our Platinum versions. I also traded in one of my games and used the credits to purchase Pearl while I was there, so I'll be getting a second one to loan to my friends overseas fairly soon.

Category: Language, Grammar, and Proofreading. Genre: A majority of the fics I have reviewed have been OT fics, but I can beta just about every genre except for shipping. Preferred method of contact: Through PM. Examples of writing: Affliction and My Endless Loneliness Examples of...

Hello, and welcome to the insane vast world of fanfiction. I'm here to offer you advice and help you with whatever errors you miss between writing and posting. Please bear in mind that this review's purpose is to help you improve your writing and that it would be best to approach it with an open...

Ninja'd while writing this. >.< I see that you're new to writing fanfiction. As such, I'll address your attacks on your review and tell you what is wrong with your reaction. We don't expect you to use one. We only expect you to proofread what you write and make sure it's coherent. You don't...

There's... not much I can say about this. The prologue isn't long enough to be called a prologue, and the chapter is definitely not long enough to be called a chapter. There really wasn't enough content for it to be a chapter, either. However, there are ways that you can fix this. Firstly, you...

Besides the primary reason of why you write fiction, which has been asked multiple times with the same response, are there any other secondary or tertiary reasons you write fiction? To appease the voices in my head. They get louder each day that I don't write. o.O

Although this bugs me for several reasons, the hasty generalizations in your fiction aren't the only things that troubled me. I'll make this post short and concise. First, you seem to lack the understanding of what a review is. A review is more than just bubbly praise for a fiction. Reviews are...

Any New Year's Resolutions that have to do with writing? I'd like to start writing consistently, and perhaps not disappear for a year again. >.<

I'm not terribly familiar with the original movie, but I will try my best to review this fiction. In fact, it doesn't seem like I'll need too great of a knowledge of the movie to produce a thorough review. However, before I begin, I would like to address your introduction. First of all, welcome...

Hello Astinus. Let's see how long I manage to stay active here. >.< I wouldn't have a clue about this sort of thing. Guess that's what Google is for, eh? Soooooo... Any insanity occur during my absence? I imagine I missed quite a bit.