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Recent content by Rentok

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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Hahah, there we go! Finally someone to take the bruiser position. I was getting worried because everyone was taking the non-combat cliques. I mean, Chad can't be expected to take these guys on without backup, can he? Prep- Nerd- Melody Jock- Nick Punk- Chad Rebel- Bookworm- Ryan Slacker- Mark...
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Hmm, well, from my experiences, a punk doesn't care what people think, a rebel wants people to think he's an ass. Punk -> Skaters, Goths, Metalheads Rebel -> Thieves, Vandals, Anarchists It's a fine line, and the only major difference is in the toolkit. Skaters can also fall under the slacker...
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    I like it. Prep- Nerd- Melody Jock- Punk- Rebel- Chad Bookworm- Ryan Slacker- Mark EDIT: One thing though. The character you've made there. He seems more like a Punk than a Rebel. You sure you don't want to rethink that? The rebel is more... the juvenile delinquent. The guy or gal who's overly...
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Hmm, I thought this had died. Good to see there's still SOME enthusiasm. The char looks good, nice and clear. Good grammar and spelling. I think I may just give the places out, seeing as I doubt I'll get enough people as it is. Prep- Nerd- Melody Jock- Punk- Rebel- Bookworm- Ryan Slacker- Mark
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Alright, THAT was a great half-finished character. Mistakes? Uhh... You spelled khaki wrong. Yeah, a nicely done character, from what I see so far. I suppose I ought to show you all my character, huh? Name: Ryan Oswald Frederick Locke Gender: Male Clique: Bookworm Appearance: Ryan is...
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Alright, I'm glad this happened so early so that I could address it now. Go over that a few times and check your spelling and grammar for one thing. I actually wasn't glad that I even had to say that part. Otherwise, you've chosen a Prep, and described a jock from some other setting. Preps...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    "Hmm... I think we'd better let the Pokemon handle this one. I don't know about you, but bullets will kill me. Chances are though that Banette and Magnemite will be relatively unharmed. They should pass right through Banette, and bounce off of Magnemite." He turned to Magnemite, "What do you...
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    When the Dust Clears - [PG-16]

    Setting: The story takes place in a bustling city. Cars have been forsaken, since it was faster to walk than to deal with traffic, though a select few still use them. The buildings are mostly tall apartment buildings downtown, but there is a quiet area on the outskirts of town, by a river, that...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    (OOC: Well, isn't this moving fast now.) Following her through the door, Richard looked around. They were in a small and rather cluttered kitchen. There were the remnants of a table smashed into shreds, and one of the chairs was still intact. Shards of plates and dishes that once would have...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    He glared at her for a moment, putting on his most anger filled face he could, then he smiled. "Heh, Sunalli is it? Interesting name, that. Purple from a ghastly? I suppose that could happen if you were really close to it for long periods of time. They're part poison type I hear." He kept...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    Looks like I made a good choice. "You're pretty observant girlie. I don't actually need the cane. Just don't go spreading it around." He turned to the Banette, "Really now, is that quite necessary? Alright, alright, I'll let it out." He turned back to the girl, "Really now, such a personality...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    (OOC: Well, here's a catching up on what has happened to "Gin") Richard woke with a throbbing pain in his head. Immediately he knew something was wrong. Thoughts raced through his head. Head hurts. Just woke up. Not in my bed. Not in any bed. Shouldn't have passed out. Kidnapped. Then he saw...
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    Chained: A Journey for Suvrival

    Yeah, My question exactly. I just found out about this, and I'd like to join. Here's my character, just in case you allow late joiners. Name: Richard "Gin" Cooper Age: 64 Gender: Male Appearance: Gin is quite old. His face is wrinkled, and his limbs are thin. Though once large and strong...
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