Recent content by sheep261

You know, I was waiting for the moment that you would bring that drapion back into the plot, as ever since it was caught it's been bugging me as to "why has it been forgotten?!?!?" But nevertheless, an excellent chapter as per usual, no mistakes yadyyadaya. Keep up the good work. P.S I've...

Brillain chapter as per usual, I likey indeedy :D I can see the why Marely was chosen, as if I remember correctly, you had to guide her through Iron Island I believe? So now I can see the link...unless I am 100% wrong :P Also, scrap my earlier idea on Ashely being Giratina, I have a new...

Oh my god, I love this story so much! This is my first review for you and your stories, but I've been a secret lurker since The Thinking Man's Guide to Destroying the World, and now this story. Anyways, I think I've clicked on to everything now, and it all comes down to the eyes. Ashley is...

UPDATE* Sorry I haven't posted lately, I'm busy with work experience, so that has taken up m time. I'm just posting to give out a few details. I'm going on a family holiday next week sunday for 3 weeks, so I'm probably not going to be able to post. However, I have managed to get the drafts for...

Thanks for pointing this out Bay. When I mean Ash is going to "hurt" his friends, I don't mean physically, I meant to say mentally, as I putting in Ash wants to make them feel how he felt (which shall be explained soon if you read my chapter XD), but I can understand the confusion. And about...

WOO! A post. I managed to work hard on this, so once again, all reviews, comments etc are welcome. Ash : 24 Professor Oak: 77 Painful Memories Professor Oak was by the kitchen, making himself a cup of tea, whilst getting Ash a glass of water when he asked him if he wanted anything to...

OK, thanks for this, I really needed someone to tell me that, Thanks for telling me about the "our hero" part; I put that in because at the time I thought it suited the whole story, but now looking over it again, I see where you are coming from and I edited them, alongside some other stuff as...

Hi there everyone, I've come here for help with my fanfic, which I've only started and I want to make it be a great story which everyone can enjoy. The plot I'm going along with is this: Ash, who the reader discovers has been away from his friends for a long time, decides to return back home...

Hey there all, I'm writing my first fanfiction, so I need a beta reader for any updates I have in the future Title of Story: The Return of a Legend (13+) Fandom: Pokemon Plot summary: A once old hero that was left for mysterious reasons, who now returns to the world, where much has changed for...

Hehe, this is my first fan fiction EVER, so any criticism is welcomed. In my next post, if i have the chance to do so, I'll begin to include the age's of the characters. The Decision. It was a sunny evening in the middle of Autumn, with a fine mist developing a certain mountain not far from...

YAY! UPDATE XDDD I must, i am certainly enjoying this fanfiction; it is truely interesting. The only thing o my mind now is: What was Riolu's egg move? O.o This i must know. But anyway, good story and keep it up.

No problem for the review; this story is completely different from others i have read before. Anyway, lets go on to the update now shall we. 1) Completely didnt expect the riolu at all; i had a different pokemon in mind (a houndour, but only because i forgot the "standing on its leg" part), so...

I must say; i think that this is actually really good, and for some reason it attracts to me. For a 16 year old; i have always wondered about stories like this, and this one is very intriguing and interesting, and i cant wait until the next update. Good story and keep it up :)

My Pearl team: (All level 100) ??? refers to another move not decided on yet Infernape- flamethrower, close combat, toxic, ??? Torterra- earthquake, leaf storm, energy ball, ??? Empoleon- hydro cannon, surf, metal claw, ??? Salamence- flamethrower, dragon claw, earthquake, ??? Tyranitar-...

"I swear never to desert my post before your throne, I swear never to disobey your orders" Name: Adam Tanner Nickname: AJ Gender: Male Age: 25 Appearance: Past:Just standing at 5'9, Adam has charcoal black hair, which is kept fairly short and spiky, as any long hair tends to annoy him as...