Recent content by shishiou

First of all, thank you Slayr231 for your detailed criticism. It's very appreciated. I'm afraid several of the points you raise are conscious stylistic choices (like the supression of commas for a flowing, stream-of-consciousness effect, or the use of line breaks to suggest a slow, deliberate...

Chapter 2: A world we must defend On the dirt of the village ground, framed by the creeping claws of half-withered, thorny weeds, two small snotty children were playing Pocket Monsters. The game was like this. Each child carried with them some kind of critter, typically a horned beetle, which...

Hi community, I registered because I wanted to crosspost my story. Hope it's ok! It's kind of a crossover with Monster Hunter, and, as such, has violent depictions of Pokémon being hunted. Sorry. It's somewhat "literary" with unironically purple, melodic prose, and resulted angstier than I...