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Eriq looked high into the sky. He heard the bushes rustle on the edge of the forest he had just left. He spun, whispering into his com-link. A large orange dragon plummeted to the ground. A yellow dragon shot from the forest. They smashed a giant blue beetle in-between them. Eriq groaned. Not...

Name: Eriq Gamzi Arrow Age: 15 Gender: Male Description: Eriq Arrow is a tall boy with a medium build. He has dark brown, almost black, hair.Suchii has deep blue eyes. His right eye is slightly tinted green while his left is slightly tinted red. He wears a solid blue shirt and slightly baggy...

Chapter One Suchii sat up, running his hands through his dark, almost black, hair. Off the floor, he grabbed a solid red shirt. He’d slept in his blue jeans. As he walked down the stairs he heard his father talking. “He’s got your green eyes and odd hair.” Suchii sped up, entering the...

Prologue The boy slipped on his red helmet that matched his crimson armor. He entered the coliseum. Across the battlefield were four others in green, blue, yellow, and brown armor respectively. Beside him stood three warriors in pink, black, and purple armor respectively. They all charged...

Character's Name:Suchii Arrow Physical Description:Suchii is a tall boy, about six feet, with a medium build.He has dark brown, almost black, hair.Suchii has deep blue eyes.His right eye is slightly tinted green while his left is slightly tinted red.His skin is somewhat tan.He normally wears a...

Chapter Two: The Protégé High in the stands, Mark looked down upon his teacher’s pokemon. He had black eyes and ear-length black hair. He wore blue trousers and a blue shirt with white shoes finishing the outfit. Electivire, no way he’ll lose. Electivire knows Thunder Punch. One...

9.8/10 In paragraph seven matter should be manner Parargraphs should be indented. Keep writing.It's good.

This chapter's real short.Sorry about that.The next ones will be longer. Trainer Isle Here the best trainers from around the world come to train in the many areas. They gain access to the island through achieving certain things. The only other way to even get into the...