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Here it comes, Chapter 4! I'm pretty proud of myself that I was able to write a 4404-word chapter in under two days, while the other one took me over a week. I so pose it just depends on how busy I am. Anyway, here it is...
Chapter 4: A Forgotten Acquaintance
The door to the first office...
PokéUpdate!
• today I worked hard with a few hours of nonstop writing, and have finished Chapter Four! I still need to review it thoroughly and decide on a title, so it won't be released until the 28th of September.
• currently, in its raw state, it is just under 4000 words (3908)
• I am...
I had some catching up to do XD
It's getting better and better as the plot develops, so be sure to keep it going (: Oh and try to put spaces in between each quote the character says, it makes the dialogue a lot easier to read in my opinion.
Good luck!
-Syn...
I like the story, your writing style is great and has plenty of potential. Great writing can develop with plenty of practice. But there are two things that I didn't like. The first is simply a personal opinion that I doubt would be very popular, but I think the whole Lucario thing is kinda...
I agree with Aurincha about the originality and the sarcastic view (which brought some humor to the story, always good)
Being an a-hole (a.k.a. criticism):
- it's a lot easier to read dialogue if you put a space between each quote.
- try to lengthen your chapters more. Chapter 2 was just a...
Chapter 3 of Team 27 is up. It's over 4500 words and has a great ending and a pretty amazing Pokémon battle, so check it out! : D
Link's in the sig.
-Syn...
Hey man, I was wondering if you could make me a sprite of some reflective aviator sunglasses... something like this:
http://www.fashion4eyes.co.uk/images/styletips/lady_in_aviator_sunglasses.jpg
Please? (:
-Syn...
PokéUpdate!
• with the release of Chapter 3, I've decided to lengthen my chapters from here on out. I'd say that most, if not all, will be well over 3000 words.
• before each battle scene, there will be a spoiler box that shows the upcoming trainer's party. Only click if you want to know...
Thanks, honestly though I don't really like writing them, although I'll have to do it a lot. It's kind of repetitive, but its nice to see it all come together I guess. No word yet on when I'll have chapter 4 done. Keep posting everyone !
Oh, and today I'll be releasing the first of many...
Well, I said that it would be postponed a few days because of my hand, but I worked through the pain for you all (your welcome) : D Yeah, I worked really hard on this chapter so I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it... well, you know, aside from being slightly delirious...