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Chapter Eleven of Feral Game is up! Chapters will come out about every 3-5 days, if all goes well. :)

Chapter Eleven: Light in the Darkness Kyra looked up at the entity addressing her. It had an ebony hourglass body, one that was flowing and graceful like a ballerina’s. But the underlying grace held no favorable signs. Its white, ghostly head covered the right side of its face. A beady blue...

Final Moveset for Yuki: Bite <--- Makes Phoebe useless. Shock Wave <--- Really throws down Glacia and helps majorly with Steven. Ice Beam <--- Turns Drake into a sniveling baby. Which means it rules. <3 Aerial Ace <--- Wrecks Sidney. Bad. And I'm tempted to do updates for the Linoone solo...

I had the fortune of only losing a bunch in the beginning; after Brawly, everyone went down on my first try (thank goodness). I'll happily take my spot on the winner's circle, and I'm gonna go for the first Normal-type solo. Username: Syrynn Game: Sapphire Pokemon: Zigzagoon>Linoone I...

Okay, time for the final home stretch! We last left our hero after his near-disqualification at the hands of Glacia. Note to self: She really doesn't like people "touching her ice." Anyway, let's get going. So I'm done with Absol, and now I think I wanna go with a Zigzagoon-Linoone run...

So I got a little farther before I ducked down for the night.

Not really a literal rule, but more of a principle of "fair play" as far as battles go. If you lose, then you lose. You shouldn't get a "reset state" button. End of story. Meh. *shrug* No but seriously, I still don't think you deserve to be listed. Even the Lv.30 incident is enough to...

Sorry, but it still doesn't really excuse the fact that you started Absol at lv.30, so I say no posting. Also, save states go completely against the rules iirc. An update: Absol is good. Holy cannoli, he is good. So far I have: Yuki (lv.65) @BlackGlasses Bite Shockwave Slash Aerial Ace...

Hmm, I take that back, this isn't quite all that easy. But still, I'm through with Altaria's- I mean WINONA'S gym. Basically it went with this: I spaced for like an hour about where to go after Flannery. Duh'd up and remembered Papa wanted to fight me to the death. Owned all his little...

This is getting interesting. I've just splattered Flannery and Yuki's growing like a freaking weed. Is Absol supposed to be this good? :D Current stats: Absol (Yuki) Lv.43 4 Gym Leaders beaten

Username: Syrynn Game: Ruby Pokemon: Absol (Yuki) I promise I'll play the lupine wonder the proper way. Can I come into the party? Absol wasn't too tough at all to nail inside the Poke Ball. Thank goodness.

Okay, I've looked through the story a few times and come to a few conclusions. The story itself is pretty good, and has an episodic feel to it. It's rare that I equate fan-episode stories with quality, but you seem to pull it off pretty well. The characters are fairly faithful to the animé...

Chapter Ten: Alone No More Noon broke over the skies above Galactic Headquarter building between Floaroma and Jubilife. Just to the north, Raquel dotted at the ground with her weapon, humming happily. The brunette seemed to be planning her routes and passages carefully, as if looking for...

All right, then. As long as it's all meant to be a joke and it's labeled as such, I'll let this slide. It's really not bad for its purpose. Most of my commentary was made from the view of a casual observer that thought he was walking into a real tale. :)

This is pretty much one of the worst stories I've read. (I define story as a coherent set of sentences that appear, more or less, to have a common thread to them.) About the only generous thing I have to say here is that you at least have a decent grasp of spelling and grammar. From there it...