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Name: Raion Highwind Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: He has blood red hair even though you wouldn't notice because of is winged helmet. He is about 5'5'' and medium build. he has a has a medium sized metal breast plate along with matching shoulder plates and gauntlets. He has red tights...

I was wondering if some one would read my fan fic "Bleach New blade rising" for me and tell me how well i did?

Chapter 1 "Come on! We're gonna be late for work Haru! shouted a boy with shaggy red hair, ripping the blankets off his friends bed. The half-asleep teen grunted and held his pillow firmly over his head, his muffled words coming from under it. "I know, I know! Geeze, I've seen how mad old Mr...

Ryuu woke today feeling a little anxious because today was the day he met his sensai. He put on his Japanese tunic and cargo shorts that he always weres. He tied his head band around his right upper are like always. He didn't realy care about his hair so he just shook his head and called it...

Name: Ryuu Kaguya Nickname: Bone Kid Age: 15 History: Not much is known about his history. Accept that he is part of the Kaguya clan.Ryuu grew up kind of like Naruto all on his own. He whent to the acadamy mostly for something to do and to train. Like the rest of the Kaguya Clan he sort of...

When he was walking to the library he stop a few times to admire the paintings hanging on the wall. They were not like the ones in the creepy mansions he usualy went to when he was hunting a whatever he was hunting that day. They seemed to be places on the island because he hasn't seen any of...

How do you like my sig. i made it my self?

I Know Dude this Feking sucks! But what is your back up Plan

Dart had reached his room his throut still burning from the thirst.He dropped his trench coat on the floor with a *clang* ,from the swords,clenching his throut. He opened up the mini-fridge grabbing one of manypackets of blood terring the top off of it. " Aah, now that hit the spot. Just what I...

"I can't take this any more." I said to myself rubbing the bidge of my nose. " Just call me when this is all over." I anounced walking out of the library. I started to walk out of the mansion when I thought about what Kei said earlyer about Haru and Kenji. "Haru huh thats the kid that looked...

I fallowed Alex into the mansion and as we steped into the mansion I heared someone yell "MY NAME IS TREVOR!". I think Alex heared it to because she started to walk into the direction that the voice came in. So I fallowed her into this big library. In the library every one was seated. She all of...

"Alright found me, lets go." Said Alex walking up to me making an instant u-turn back to the mansion. So I decide I mys well fallow her. Then all of a sudden she trips and hits a rock. "You've GOT to be kidding me!" she screamed getting back up rubbing her face. I run up to her " Are you all...

I find it weird that ThatIinsaneKid's character didn't freak out when he saw he was somewhere he didn't remember going too.....

He left every one on the on the deck to go to the 2nd floor kitchen. On his way there he looked at the paintings. "This is like most of the other mansion I have been to" ( you know he hunt's the damned spooky old mansions)so when he gets there he started raiding the fridge. "No, not here lets...