Recent content by Team Skull Grunt

^ This is more of how I usually write, so this REALLY gives me an idea of a lot of things I need to fix for what I've already typed up and how I write in the future. Ugh, old habits are going to be hard to break, though. LOL. If Moon is aged up, I personally have zero issue with GuzMoon, but...

Thanks, you guys! OK, so... Honestly those choppy cut-aways were intentional, but obviously didn't work well at all (at least they're pretty fixable). I... Kind of blame Harvey Birdman: Attorney at Law for the abrupt changes and fast pace. I always liked its kind of humor but apparently I was...

YES. THANK YOU. FINALLY. I've shown my stuff to my friends, but all I really got was "No, this is good! It was really funny!" and, like I said, nothing for how to improve on AO3. While of course I love hearing that people enjoyed the read, the mixture of what I need to fix is DIRELY needed...

Hey, guys. So while I've really appreciated the hits I've gotten on AO3, comments can be pretty sparse. My main goal is to improve my writing and be more like some authors I admire. Maybe I'm tooting my own horn too much, but I honestly think that I've got some decent ideas, but it's totally...