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Yay! Well, yes a bit fillery, but the plot does move along in upcoming chapters. I just like to put things in like this because I like them. Oh, and if you think I'm rushing things here, you should have seen the garbage that was the original dream segment. Reading back over it made me...

Sorry for the long wait, but I've been having trouble accessing the site for some reason. Anyway, here's the next chapter. Chapter Five: Not-So-Sweet Dreams The pair of trainers woke up early the next morning so that they wouldn't have to climb any more. God knows that was an experience they...

On the contrary you (and Psyanic) are two of the only most helpful reviewers I've met on this site! Yep. The everlasting cliche. It gets some parody elements later on, but starting out, it really wasn't very good. Completely agreed. I should really revise my chapters more before posting...

Well, no new reviews, I see, so here's the next chapter! Chapter Four: Rock Climbing and Mysterious Mallets Jake woke up sitting on the floor of a room in a pokémon center. His back hurt like hell, and he felt like he got no sleep at all. It’s Christy’s fault. If she wasn’t traveling with me...

Thanks. I once again agree completely. I'll try to edit some more information in.

Well, Here's the next Chapter! Chapter Three: Kicking Grass The sun was shining, and the leaves on the trees were fluttering in the breeze. Two trainers stood in the clearing with pokéballs in hand. The battle was about to begin. “Go! Tails!” The tree gecko pokémon flew onto the battlefield...

Thanks! Although I must say, the idea wasn't mine entirely. Something got mentioned in a Tvtropes WMG, and my borderline insane mind did the rest. Ah, my horrible logic failures return. And I should probably put in some form of explanation. Now to think of one. Well, it probably would keep...

Why hello there! This is Treecko’s Awesomeness, or TA for short, and welcome to my second fic. This fic was first posted on Serebii, but I decided to post it here as well. First a few bits of information about the story. 1. No, it's not scientifically accurate. Neither is anything else in this...

Well, I'm glad I saw this, and I'm excited to return the favor of a review! I didn't notice any grammatical errors (although, as I've mentioned, my grammar sucks), and the plot and imagery were great. Like Cutlerine said though, your sentences did seem a bit choppy. Another thing that threw me...

Thanks! The idea was that the crowd was too thick. Also, the toxic TM isn't that hard to find, especially in a more realistic setting than the games where pretty much anything could be found in a store somewhere. Oh, and people were trying to avoid melting their shoes more than getting...

Hello! I've just come over from SpPf, and my comedy jouney fic decided to come with me! It's titled "The Nova Travels", And the first chapter has been posted here, so reviews would be greatly apreciated! The link's in my sig.

What bothers me is mostly when an author contradicts their own established canon. If you say something early on, stick to your story.

Title: The Nova Travels Link: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=272666 Summary: The story of Jake Thomas and Christy Aben's travels through the Unova region fifteen years after Team Plasma was shut down. As they challenge the pokemon league, they also have to deal with solving the...

https://i1107.photobucket.com/albums/h398/BelovedDarkness/Nova.png Hello, and welcome to The Nova Travels. It was originally posted on Serebii forums, where it has been posted up until its thirty eighth chapter, not including my "special chapters". Before you begin reading, you should know a...

In Platinum, the resort area. It had the villa, as well as my underground base.