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sorry for being persistant but what if a pokemon leveled up lets say about three times, eg when a lvl 5 pkmn has exp share and you verse the elite for and they lvl up quiet a bit, what would happen then?
heh i just checked my pm inbox then lol, i havent been on for a while lol but im still interested in the story lol, keep it up, i love the way you write... dont stop at this point lol
hey sorry if it has been asked before but i was curious was to what would happen with EV's/IV's still a tad unclear so i will reread the first page, if the pokemon leveled a few times in one go?? thanks
Hmmm i hardly ever pick up any spelling mistakes lol perhaps thats just my bad spelling or maybe im just reading what i want to read.
I want more... Feed my hunger with your delcious/brilliant story lol
I liked it despite what the other people said although i think what they said was still valid, unlike your other chapters this one had less descriptions of emotions, also i don't really notice the spelling mistakes. keep up the good work :)
I agree being dittos we could be any pokemon we want, I'd spend most of my time being a tyranitar, but if i'd have to choose one permenantly i would choose Lugia, flying plus being psychic would be awsome.
Im reading. Im actually a little bit hurt that my opinion doesn't matter to you *sob* *sob* lol still good ;) ps i didn't see the ~ between the chapters so disregard my previous comment about the **** keep up the good work. pps you have had ninety two views on this, i think people are reading...
I like it so far. Good storyline although i did find it a little hard to follow at the start like distinguishing between the two characters storylines was a confusing but i got over it. A suggestion, when you swap scenes you might want to put a sign like ***** or something like that or right...
I like this story as well. Really different to the other fanfics i have read and i mean that in a good way... but then again they have all been different lol. Only criticism i can offer is the gas is spelt wrong. I know it seems petty but you did spell it gass and if im not mistaken it has only...