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    [Pokémon] Shattered Crests: Book #1 Lines Broken

    Okay, this is a placeholder for when I properly move things over to incorperate Pokecommunity into the next draft of the story. This draft, while obselete, is fine for an archive. I'll get to moving things over when I do and post the link here once I'm done. Thanks for those that read and hope...
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    [Discussion] How have your characters evolved?

    Ciecro upon first writing was a "muscle for brains" punk. Now, he's a distant, but clearly giving a shit friend who focuses on being strong and capable, while also a hard worker in what he aims for despite the drives for those reasons being obstacles he will have to grow to face in himself...
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    [Discussion] "Mary Sues"

    Many people use the term without really understanding what it honestly means. The attributes that make a Mary Sue are not simply the individual aspects, but the sum of them all in manners that warp the plot around the character. Ways that conflict with the reasonable logic and that drag down...
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    [Discussion] Rewriting

    I'm on the fourth drafting of Shattered Crests. The current version on this site is the third since it's the furthest and the one I want to finish so I can have a complete draft of book 1. The fourth is the improved version plot, scene, and edits wise. I plan to do a fifth and final version for...
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    [Discussion] Why do you write?

    I enjoy it and have really grown personally invested in stories I write, since many hold aspects of my personality in them. I used to do it because it was the first chance for me to actually sort of make stories that I always had been. I've honestly thought of stories for most of my life, but...
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    [Discussion] Breaking the Fourth Wall

    There is but one character in my story that will have potential fourth wall breaks. As for just in general, it would depend to me. Some of my works would thrive under the fourth wall breaks, while others would just take away from trying to integrate you into the world. That's probably the...
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    [Discussion] Character Birthdays

    I have data on birthdays, but whether it actually comes into play (besides for measuring how old one character is) probably would depend on plot. Though, my calendar system is something I made myself and isn't based off of the one we use in the real world.
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    [Pokémon] Shattered Crests: Book #1 Lines Broken

    Chapter 49 Open Mentalities Demetri felt his ears twitch as the grating sound of the clock was starting to become unbearable. Tightening his left fist, Demetri raised it and wanted to swing it down hard badly. He settled for a soft tap on the resting table. Ugh, what is taking that healer so...
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    [Discussion] Urgh, editing

    3 drafts. First: Write it down Second: Plot, character voice, flow, and scene logic edits Third: Grammar, sentence flow, styles, word choice, spelling edits
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    [Discussion] What Education do characters get in your world?

    Mostly depends on where you are in Shattered Crests. Some countries have a good amount of knowledge but even those are different in their own right. I'll do a few examples. Say you're like the protags and are from one of the five groups of original mons, but unlike the protags you were raised...
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    [Discussion] How similar are you to your characters?

    Pretty much every character in Shattered Crests can be linked back to me in some way. Be it things I've felt, experienced, learned, feel, view, am, etc. Some more than others, but even I'm finding new things I can relate or see in similarity each time I focus on the characters of this story...
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    [Discussion] Character Quirks

    For my cast, I try to make them all have their own voice and personality. That may sound basic, but I mean weaving it in for everything they do. Stuff you can sort of think and say "Yeah, that's how Ciecro would react", adding a familiarity to them There's some other quirks too that are...
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    Article: The History of "Sus" Pokémon

    This meme is dead
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    [Discussion] Out of Context Scenes

    Only got two for now. May bother searching for more later and there's some future chapters that'll definitely qualify >:)
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    [Discussion] Antagonists and Villains

    I honestly like writing any kind of villains. The deep complex motivated ones to the campy totes evil ones. Currenlty, SC has a lot of "antagonists" and arguably a couple of key "villain" characters that are spaced around this range with a few outliers in some places. A loose summary is: A...
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