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    The Wing?d :[Book One]: The Kuraitenshi

    I meant, did you mean to say: "...yet you hold onto what you were born with."? It sounds less difficult than: "...yet you hold onto what you were born." in my opinion....
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    The Wing?d :[Book One]: The Kuraitenshi

    Mistake or intentional? Anyway. I'm having difficulty remembering all these names >< I keep forgetting who's who. If I recall correctly Takeru is the mental patient type guy... Keiji I don't remember...
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    The Wing?d :[Book One]: The Kuraitenshi

    The "Rei Takunei" part seemed too random, though I know it served its purpose you couldv'e reminded us of him in a much less random way. Kurai's speech = Cwute. Brock's reactions and speech = Gold. The battle was decently done, although it had squash match (I.E completely 1-sided and obvious...
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    The Quest for the Legends (version ILCOE)

    Hmm, either way, I would've liked to see aeriel based kill-fest before the maturity kicked in ;;
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    The Quest for the Legends (version ILCOE)

    Well, it was a somewhat intriguing chapter. Long... very long... but intriguing. I liked some of the battle psychology that was in the battles, as well as some of the ways the moves were performed. May had some entertaining moments, being really b*tchy to Mark and pointing out the things to...
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    Pok?mon Master (one-shot, rewrite)

    Well, I read this at SPP in the completed FF, thought this was a rewrite of that version but it wasn't so I just skimmed it. It's a interesting piece, puts things into perspective. I love the stairway metaphor and how you apply the idea of already being at the top and trying to climb imaginary...
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    The Wing?d :[Book One]: The Kuraitenshi

    :surprised Becky *uses this name on assumption that it'll annoy you :P *, how dare you not tell me you'd written another Chapter? I was actually a bit worried from the start that it'd be a repeat of the last one with maybe a teecy (sp?) bit of story development, since from that start it looked...
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    Johnny

    Although I've always struggled getting used to your 1st person POV thing I eventually got used to it on this one. 1stly, I liked it over all. As always, perfect Gramamr & Spelling so I can't poke holes there :'( You know what I thought when reading this ;) Ah, good old reality. Nice to see you...
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    Fanfiction Lounge

    Well, I've chanegd my name from Onimusha to Whisper in the Wind and I updated" The Power Within" as Onimusha with my 3rd chap (and probs last). I'm feeling uninspired etc, anyway, this post is mainly to keep you guys on the up n up that I've changed my name
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