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Old April 25th, 2006 (1:11 PM).
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    Originally Posted by Deathspector
    However, the one thing that bothered me slightly, was the abrupt way you sort of told us that the Charizard died. I suppose it made the fanfiction better, but it was still sad to me, and I found it odd. Not wrong, but just odd.
    It was an odd stylistic choice, but I wanted to make it abrupt - as this just wasn't some thing the Trainer had been expecting. It was just that, abrupt, unexpected. I suppose I could've gone into more detail, but I didn't want to do that.

    Thanks for your review! I appreciate your comments.


    I also liked the fact that you made it a battle.
    Its rare to see Pokemon Fanfics with actual battles in them..
    I had never really thought battles were rare, but now that you mention it, I guess they kind of are. o.o Thanks for your review!

    Battle ye not with a monster, lest ye become one.

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