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The Legend of Zelda: Rise of Darkness [PG -13]

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    [PokeCommunity.com] The Legend of Zelda: Rise of Darkness [PG -13]

    Made by JBC Blank

    BACKSTORY
    The cosmos, an endless realm of worlds upon worlds. Things that are considered normal in one world are a mere fantasy in another. This is the base of all legends, of all worlds... of all of us.

    And no realm is more embedded in Legends as the Realm of Hyrule. Created by the three goddesses of Power, Wisdom and Courage. When they left the Realm of Hyrule, they gave this world a celestial gift: the Sacred Triforce, a source of ever lasting power which consists of tree golden triangles in, the upper one symbolises Din's Power, the left one Nayru's Wisdom and the right one Din's Courage. This sacred relic is said to once have been within the reach of any who wished to see them up close. Nowadays however, it is hidden in the Sacred Realm. For this the greatest of all treasures, it has been searched after by mankind for many years….Those of a righteous heart brought the land of Hyrule peace and fortune, but there are those whose hearts have been stolen by darkness. They brought ruin and despair upon the green fields of a world that had never before seen such darkness.
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    One of those men was a man named Ganondorf, he had always tried to get hold of the golden treasures of the goddesses. And for that he has rightfully earned the name of The King of Darkness. And so each time he got a hold of the Triforce the land of Hyrule became a dreadful land, full of monsters and evil beyond human comprehension. Thankfully from the realm of Light came a hero. Clothed in a green tunic and wielding a legendary blade, he defeated the Evil King and sealed him away in the Evil Realmwhere he can do no more harm.

    Hyrule profited from this time of peace and started to flourish. Hyrule became prosperous and the people did their very best to keep it that way. The economy, art, agriculture… every race gave their best. The Goron Tribes dug up minerals and gems which they sold to the Hylians who crafted the most beautiful jewels and ornaments which they in turn sold to far away lands. The Zora's were masters in fishing and guided the fishermen across the waterways of Hyrule so that only the freshest and best fish would be sold in the markets of Hyrule. The Gerudo's brought supplies that only the dessert could provide things such as coconuts, dates, knifes, satin and the like….

    But beneath that golden glimmer of wealth, something had started to move…. Within the darkness, the power of the Evil King had started to increase…. He would be back…and this time it would take more than one hero to stop him in his search for the Ulimate Power.

    His minions, evil creatures with no eyes for Hyrule's beauty,had no other purpose than to serve the one that they belived to be the only one worthy to rule the Realm of Hyrule. They were gathering, leeching together. Like a swarm of gnats, they began to devour the land with a pace set by their own need to find their true master. Following their leader's command, they swept the cities dry of everything it once called its own.

    Monsters, with their gnashing fangs and blood encrusted claws, set out to fulfill their order. Taking anyone who stood in their way hostage, they began to dominate. The residents of the towns and societies dropped like flies as they were attacked. If one had not lost his life, the only fate he could dream of was becoming a slave to the Evil King himself. The monsters were too great for one man to destroy. Many tried to fight back, but their efforts were in vain. He and his minions were in a league of their own. Darkness proved to be more over powering than anticipated. Their desire to rule Hyrule, and obtain the golden delicacy known as the Triforce proved far too much.

    But... there was something these heartless beasts did not have.

    Hope.


    Though the circumstances grieved hopelessness, a vague, dim light was beginning to pick up momentum, and shine. The Dark King was building his power of darkness, but a group of rebels were going to prevent that. No one was entirely sure how it started, or whose idea it even was, but an underground group of elite citizens was beginning to grow. This group had their hearts bent on righteousness, and aimed to return their home to its once prosperous state. They came from all lands alike with the same heroic desire; stop the Dark King and free Hyrule of its evil.


    PLOT

    It is said that every being is born with a purpose, some are destined for greatness, the best example of greatness was the one known as Link, the Hero of Time. He single handedly defeated the Dark King and his minions by using the Legendary Master Sword along with ancient weapons that he found on his journey. The great Link is long gone, and the only legacy left of him resides in the ancient stories and almost forgotten legends that were told about him. The Dark King is said to have started causing distress to the residents of Hyrule the day that Link died, could it possibly be that Link was the reason why the Dark King had not attacked until now?


    It was seen that one morning the gate to the Realm of Darkness opened and darkness spilled over into the land of Hyrule. This caused those people who were sensitive to it, to become just as evil as the Dark King himself. Those people became the King's generals, powerful they began to control the different regions of Hyrule. And yet there seemed to remain the glimmer of hope within the hearts of the people of Hyrule, the hopeful return of the one who defeated the King before.

    What luck of those few with Hope, if only they knew that it would be more then one person who shared in the light, who would vow to defeat the Dark King and his minions. Let the Darkness be destroyed.


    CHARACTERS

    Everyone (Ganondorf can be used by everyone when he is needed (or if you want to give a turn to the story, just don't over use him...)
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    Mudkipblader:
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    JBCBLank

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    Vanilla Kitsune
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    Lo-Chan

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    Sabaku no Gaara

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    SlashVorlex
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    Prism

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    Uzumaki_Naruto

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    AnimeGuy113

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    F.A.Q.'s

    How do I sign up?
    Post your form in the Legend of Zelda Fanclub, you will there be told if you can join or not.

    Can I give comments, ideas, ....
    Yes, you can do so. Post them in the Legend of Zelda fanclub

    What do I need to post?
    You need to post your characters part in the story. When posting make sure to write at least 6 lines or more. It's really not that hard to write that much if you include enough detail and interaction with other characters and the story.

    Can I borrow other people's character(s)?
    -Direct Interaction: Only if you got permission of that person. ;) PM them or ask them in TheLegend of Zelda fanclub

    -Indirect Interaction: (Noticing, talking to, ect.) This is always allowed as long as the person you're interacting with doesn't have a big personality, relationship, or event change. If you do this even by accident, the owner of the character will probably get mad.

    RULES

    1. ALL Rules of PC are still valid in this RP.
    2. Don't double post.
    3. Don't Argue with the moderators
    4. Enjoy your time...xD

    OTHER
    Credit for the ideas, plot, background story goes to the members of the Legend of Zelda-fanclub. We've been working on it for quite a while.
    This rp is PG-13 rated because there'll be violence (Fighting is common sence in the Zelda universe) and possibly blood.
    Members who are already listed are members of the Legend of Zelda fanclub. ;)

    FORM


    Name
    : First and Last Name(s) of your character
    Race: Which race is your character (Helian, Kokiri, Zora, Goron, Sheikah, Gerudo...)
    Gender: Male or Female
    Age:
    Physical Appearance
    : Description of how your character looks
    Personality:
    History: What happened before the story
    "Hope": What keeps your character going? Dreams? Hopes?
    Other: Things we need to know
     
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    Dara, officially out on her own, decided to explore the area she was in. Everything seemed so new and different to her. Her perspective was completely changed, once she left the safeness of her home village. Of course, it was no longer safe. She wasn't even sure if it still remained.

    "Wow. Castle Town looks very relaxed today. I haven't seen sight of hardly anyone. Maybe everyone isn't wanting to come out. I wouldn't blame them."

    As she continued walking, she found a stick. Picking it up, she decided to use it as walking stick. Without any hesitation, she hit random rocks down the cobblestone walkway. For a moment, she thought about going shopping. Once she checked her pockets, she decided that wouldn't be the best thing to do.

    "I still need to purchase a weapon. Maybe a generic sword would do. I really don't have any money though. Guess I'll look around for some rupees until then."

    Sighing, Dara continued lingering around the entrance of Castle Town. She reached the center fountain, and stared into her flextion. Her appearance was so different from what it was only a year ago. She was now grown up. Dara could hardly believe it.

    "Well. I better get used to this look."

    Boredly, she continued to stare at her reflextion.
     
    OC: W00T my first Post! *runs like an idiot*

    IC:

    Mosquett shifted his weight ever so slightly, yet the chains that confined him still made protest. yet it was like music to his ears for if he could still hear them, he still lived and that ment, that so far... the King's wish had not been fufilled. With a sigh Mosquett turned his head up slightly servaying the room he had long since memorized, It was a small room roughly ten feet by ten feet it had stone walls as all dungens did yet Mosquett had it on good athority that he was not in a dungen. for one the floors were not wet but dry, and the smell of trees seeped threw the forever open window, a window that allowed all of the elements in making him cold in the winter and sneezing in the summer. As for the rest of the room, Mosquett was quiet sertain that he filled it with the chains that clung to his arms and chest. The chains were attached to the wall forcing him to stand or hang as he was now. Running a long flexible tongue over dry lips he wonders what, if anything was in store for him this day. Would one of the king's elite guards show up to check if he was still alive? It had been over two years since he last saw a living human being, Goasts had travled threw the tower on occasion but most didn't stay long enough for a decent conversation.

    Closing his eyes he tried to find something to think about, What do I miss...? he asked himself and only one thing came to mind, "Jeova..." he whispered the name of his beloved horse the only creature in existance that he had not used and tossed away, the only creature that had never rejected him, never said no, "I hope he's still alive..." he said aloud opening his eyes and looking out his window.

    It was getting dark, the end of yet anouther day with no food or water, I will live... he thought to himself before allowing his long black hair to cover his face, there was no need for him to see the man who opened the door, that guard's footsteps echoed as he made his way towards what he was sure must have been a corpse by now. Once the man was close enough to reach out and touch the lenghth of black hair Mosquett lunged at him making the chains wraped around him strain and clang together making more noise then he had heard in a long time. The guard fell to the floor screaming before he scrambled on all fours out the door, leaving it open as he actualy fell down the tower stairs. Musquett could only laugh full heartedly as the sound of the elite guard hitting the last step met his exepcinaly long ears, it had been the most fun he had experienced in a long time.

    It took the guard aproximitly twenty mintues to summan the curage to climb the tower once more, when he reached the door Mosquett was staring at him, Mosquett's deep brown eyes servayed this BOY they had sent to check on him. The elite guard must have had less then twenty and three summers behind him and scared as he was he looked like the child he was. "M-Mosquett?" he asked all of him shaking, cuasing his armer to clang together as he walked.

    Mosquett nodded alowing the boy to get close, "That is what they call me..." He said his voice low and slightly seductive.

    The guard gulped, "So you are alive... I'll have to report this to the king..."

    He turned to leave and Mosquet spoke once more, "Tell the King...." The boy turned, "That his daughter has grown quite lovely."

    The guard blinked a few times before closing the door and locking it, Mosquett chuckled to himself and settled himself so that he could wait comfortably for the Boy who's name was David to deliver his message to the king in the throne room. He listened carfuly hoping to hear when the king heard what Mosquett had said, yet was disapointed when he only heard the boy explain that he was still alive, "No respect..." Mosquett murmers tilting his head to listen to the lovely Princess Zelda whome he had dreamed of stealing, she was in her room singing to herself as she did whatever it was that she did at this time of night. "You will not wait long..." Mosquett chuckled as he listened to her song, it was a song that he had heard her mother sing, a song of the love that she longed for and the man that she hoped would deliver it. Mosquett sighed to himself the sun was no longer in the sky and there seemed to be no reason for Mosquett to stay awake any longer. "Good night sweet princess..." he whispered making sure that his voice seeped into her girlish dreams, where he would meet her as he did every... single... night.

    OC: Ahahahaha! Mosquett is just awesome I love him! I don't know why I never used him before! You guys be good people and get him out of there plix.


    OC: W00T my first Post! *runs like an idiot*

    IC:

    Mosquett shifted his weight ever so slightly, yet the chains that confined him still made protest. yet it was like music to his ears for if he could still hear them, he still lived and that ment, that so far... the King's wish had not been fufilled. With a sigh Mosquett turned his head up slightly servaying the room he had long since memorized, It was a small room roughly ten feet by ten feet it had stone walls as all dungens did yet Mosquett had it on good athority that he was not in a dungen. for one the floors were not wet but dry, and the smell of trees seeped threw the forever open window, a window that allowed all of the elements in making him cold in the winter and sneezing in the summer. As for the rest of the room, Mosquett was quiet sertain that he filled it with the chains that clung to his arms and chest. The chains were attached to the wall forcing him to stand or hang as he was now. Running a long flexible tongue over dry lips he wonders what, if anything was in store for him this day. Would one of the king's elite guards show up to check if he was still alive? It had been over two years since he last saw a living human being, Goasts had travled threw the tower on occasion but most didn't stay long enough for a decent conversation.

    Closing his eyes he tried to find something to think about, What do I miss...? he asked himself and only one thing came to mind, "Jeova..." he whispered the name of his beloved horse the only creature in existance that he had not used and tossed away, the only creature that had never rejected him, never said no, "I hope he's still alive..." he said aloud opening his eyes and looking out his window.

    It was getting dark, the end of yet anouther day with no food or water, I will live... he thought to himself before allowing his long black hair to cover his face, there was no need for him to see the man who opened the door, that guard's footsteps echoed as he made his way towards what he was sure must have been a corpse by now. Once the man was close enough to reach out and touch the lenghth of black hair Mosquett lunged at him making the chains wraped around him strain and clang together making more noise then he had heard in a long time. The guard fell to the floor screaming before he scrambled on all fours out the door, leaving it open as he actualy fell down the tower stairs. Musquett could only laugh full heartedly as the sound of the elite guard hitting the last step met his exepcinaly long ears, it had been the most fun he had experienced in a long time.

    It took the guard aproximitly twenty mintues to summan the curage to climb the tower once more, when he reached the door Mosquett was staring at him, Mosquett's deep brown eyes servayed this BOY they had sent to check on him. The elite guard must have had less then twenty and three summers behind him and scared as he was he looked like the child he was. "M-Mosquett?" he asked all of him shaking, cuasing his armer to clang together as he walked.

    Mosquett nodded alowing the boy to get close, "That is what they call me..." He said his voice low and slightly seductive.

    The guard gulped, "So you are alive... I'll have to report this to the king..."

    He turned to leave and Mosquet spoke once more, "Tell the King...." The boy turned, "That his daughter has grown quite lovely."

    The guard blinked a few times before closing the door and locking it, Mosquett chuckled to himself and settled himself so that he could wait comfortably for the Boy who's name was David to deliver his message to the king in the throne room. He listened carfuly hoping to hear when the king heard what Mosquett had said, yet was disapointed when he only heard the boy explain that he was still alive, "No respect..." Mosquett murmers tilting his head to listen to the lovely Princess Zelda whome he had dreamed of stealing, she was in her room singing to herself as she did whatever it was that she did at this time of night. "You will not wait long..." Mosquett chuckled as he listened to her song, it was a song that he had heard her mother sing, a song of the love that she longed for and the man that she hoped would deliver it. Mosquett sighed to himself the sun was no longer in the sky and there seemed to be no reason for Mosquett to stay awake any longer. "Good night sweet princess..." he whispered making sure that his voice seeped into her girlish dreams, where he would meet her as he did every... single... night.

    OC: Ahahahaha! Mosquett is just awesome I love him! I don't know why I never used him before! You guys be good people and get him out of there plix.
     
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    OoC: I love it so far!

    IC: The sun was pouring over the open volcano into the deep pool within. Mizujin was laying on the edge of the pool, hands behind his head, hoping that the girls were watching him. He gave a little smirk as he jumped to his feet to see no one looking.

    "Why don't I ever get any attention from the ladies? I'm not ugly am I?" He said as he stared into the pool glowering at his reflection. "I wish that I could at least get one girl...."

    He decided that taking a dive into the pool would be nice, so he ran up to the highest point inside the volcano, and dove towards the waterfall that was directly in front of him. As he fell, he closed his eyes and spun in the air, his pearly scales glimmering in the sun. The splash in the water rejuvenated his drying skin, making him fill with confidence. Now let's see who can ignore me. He thought to himself. He came out of the water like Pamela Anderson on Bay Watch, except more masculine, and showed off his cool scales. No one looked.

    OoC: I usually write more, it's just this in somewhat of an intro to his character and where he is.
     
    The green feelds of the land of Hyrule
    Are created within the Goddesses' law
    As time turned many rightous Kings ruled
    Leaving the lands without a flaw

    Then from the dessert dry and grand
    Came a man on a black horse' back
    Crossing with Darkness the holy land
    creating dispair and painting gold black

    While the land was suffuring under the cloud of Darkness
    And all races of the Hylian lands were shrouded by weakness
    From the over the hills came unknown to anyone
    A hero clothed in green and holding a sword seen by no one

    He slayed the king and sealed him away
    In the realm of Darkness far from humankind
    But now time has passed and deep within
    the evil power has woken again

    Now He's ruling the land from the castle
    Sending his mignons all over the land
    Ruling with his dark, but gifted hand
    Gifted and cursed by Triforce of Power

    Where is the hero now, who pledged to the princess' hand
    That he would come whenever he was needed
    Now that Darkness has once again covered the land
    Stand up, Hero or Heroine, and take your place in legend


    While singing these words, a female danced on one of the squares in the one of the distant quarters of Castle Town. Her red hair and scarves floated around her tanned body as she waved her hips in sync rhythm with the music played by three of her comrades. She was a Gerudo, one of the dessert and one of the many who had fled their homelands in order to seek shelter from the evil ones who had attacked many of the villages around Hyrule. There were even villages which had disappeared from the map completely and within the years nature, good and bad, had taken over the ruins where once people lived. The Gerudo woman sang about things like that, about legends that were almost forgotten by those who lived today.
    Few people threw a rupee in the little box by her feet and no one stopped these days to really listen to her words, no one except for a young man laying on his back on one of the flat rooftops. With his eyes closed he listened to her sweet voice, enjoying the remaining warmth of the late afternoon sun. With a T-shirt a few sizes too large and trousers that were too short for his long legs. He had a smile on his lips, and not only because of the yellow rupee he clenched in his right fist. His name was Dark.

    OC: I'm so happy we finally started this. <3 And I only wrote a short intro. =) I just felt like writing a song. XD
    Keep on writing everyone
     
    Wow xD; Everyone is in different places! I am gonna be where Dara is at... xD;

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    Rael entered the market town that once flourished with millions of people. It was so empty now, and there wasn't a person in sight. He sighed to himself as he realized that finding a good deal for something was going to be difficult. The market looked so much more darker then he had pictured. He had heard that something terrible had happened, but he never knew what it exactly was that destroyed the town. Rael's ears perked up as he heard a voice, a soft, quiet voice. Were there still people here? Rael quickly ran to the voice that had spoken and saw the most beautiful girl. Rael couldn't speak up, he wanted to talk to her. To find out why someone as cute as her would be in this hell hole, and to find out her name. Words wouldn't leave his lips though, and when they did, they were too quiet to hear and understand. Finally, he got some words to come out.

    "Um... Hello there! I'm Rael." He smiled, his face was turning a dark crimson.
     
    Dara was still staring at her reflextion in the fountain's water. She twirled a strand of her hair and smiled. Once she finally realized someone was speaking to her, she turned around and smiled sweetly. "Hello. My name is Dara. Nice to meet you. I haven't seen anyone around here at all lately. It's great to finally meet someone."

    Once again, she gave her warmest smile. "So your name is Rael huh? That's a pretty neat name. What're you doing around here?" Dara asked, finally moving away from the fountain and approaching Rael.
     
    OC: Oh, well, that was obvious that you'd meet. =3
    There I go

    IC: Dark held his hand up to the sun, looking how the light reflected in the facets of the rupee he held between his thumb and index. His 'hunt' had been good today. It was rare that he could a yellow one, usually he only managed to snatch green and blue rupees. Dark grinned as he brought his hand back to his face. As if he had suddenly made a decision, Dark shot up straight. With his left hand he removed his purple hair from his eyes and stood up. With a final glance at the dancing Gerudo Woman who was now singing in some dessert thongue, he jumped on a lower terrace that was part of the house whose roof he had been lying on. There, he grabbed one of the thicker branches of an almost dried-out plant which was growing agains the walls and Dark jumped down on the dusty street. He nodded a short hello to the man who was living in the house and then rushed away.
    On his sprint trough the capital of Hyrule, he met few people. What once had been the flourishing centre of the world was now an almost deserted city. He slowed down as he crossed the main market square, he refrained from looking towards the Castle Gate, which only lead to a dark and heavily guarded fortress. Once again few people were outside. Only a few who were looking around the few stands and those who were taking a rest next to the fountain which bore a broken sign which used to be on Hylian flag. A Phoenix instead a dark, black fire-spitting snake nowadays.
    Dark sighed. He had never known the blossoming Hylian culture, yet everywhere there were signs of what it used to be. He wondered if he would ever see the day that the world turned around again.
     
    OoC: This is amazing so far! ^^ I'm going to use my character as comic relief if that's ok with everyone. xD

    IC: Mizujin was defeated at not being noticed. Little did he know that a shy Zoran girl was watching him from behind a jagged boulder. He took no notice, not being able to see her. As he glumly dragged himself back inside his cave-like home, his mother greeted him warmly offering him lunch.

    "Would you like some halibut?" His mother asked with a large smile on her face.

    "Meh...." Mizujin said, taking a seat at the table staring at the bowl of halibut stew. "Mom? Do you think I have a purpose in life at all?" He asked, thinking heavily about the amount of stress that he was dealing with.

    "Honey, everyone has a purpose in life. Perhaps your's is just not in the Zoran Domain. Maybe you're meant to be a trader in Hyrule. Maybe even become the first Zoran King even. I honestly can't tell you what your purpose is, just that I know there is one," His mother said to him showing how much wisdom she has gathered in her young life. She just smiled at him, and turned back to the fire pit, stirring the stew to get it ready for his father.

    I guess she's right. Mizujin thought to himself. Everyone must have a purpose in life, or else there wouldn't be a point in life. From this moment on, I'm going to figure out what that purpose is.

    Then it hit him. The water in the Zoran Domain was polluted with some strange black substance. It was almost like evil tendrils were leaking into their water. It has killed at least five Zoras by now. That's it! I'll save our race from this dark pollutant! I'll tell mom right now and head off to Hyrule and ask around about this.

    He told his mom his idea, but she was hesitant. "I can't let you go...at least not without your father's consent. He should be home fairly soon, ask him then," Her personality changed from cheerful and full of wisdom to somewhat fearful and unsureness. This question shocked her, and she didn't know what to do.

    About an hour later, Mizujin's father arrived at the cave. "Hello Mizujin. Your mother told me that you wanted to talk to me. What's it about?"

    "You see, I was wondering if I had a purpose in life...." He continued his story about what he had thought of as his dad listened intently, almost approving of what he was doing.

    "I can't let you go..." He said looking at the ground.

    "B-but dad!" Mizujin began to yell at him.

    "Shhh. I didn't finish. I can't let you go without protection of some sort. I was prepared for you to eventually leave the Zoran Domain, so I had the blacksmiths begin work on a weapon for you," His father reached into a chest on top of a ledge and opened it revealing a large seashell axe. "This was made just for you." He handed it over to Mizujin with a smile.

    "Thanks dad!" Mizujin shouted as he hugged his father with a radiant smile on his face. He told his family goodbye as he left skipped outside the cave, and dove into the pool. He swam towards the waterfall leading out, and kicked himself out of the water performing an amazing acrobatic move down the length of the waterfall.

    "I'm finally on my way to finding my purpose," His eyes held a sense of pride in them as he began thinking deeply about what he'll do when he arrives at Hyrule.
     
    Oc: wonderful, Sabaku =3

    Ic: Finally Dark reached the district of the town where he lived. There were more people here than in the center of town, but most of them were dressed in old, almost worn out clothes. Children of all ages rushed through the streets without waiting for their parents, as they had none. With a strange melancholy Dark looked at them, as it reminded him of the days he had nothing on his mind. A little before dusk they would return to the orphanage a few blocks away, since at nightfall the monsters would come out to sweep the streets clean of anyone who still roamed the dusty roads.
    Dark sighed and opened the door of what seemed to have once been a stable squeezed between two houses. It was partly made out of bricks and wood and like most houses it was partly covered by almost withered plants.
    Dark sniffed, the warmth of the day was still roaming inside his little house. This was the place where he had been living since he became sixteen, since he became too old to live under the guardiance of the old lade from the orphanage. Yes, Dark had been one of those children that roamed the streets without parents. He was brought to the orphanage when he was a little older than one year, he barely remembered of those days.
    He walked towards a small table in the corner of his house and threw a packet on the table. AFter that he grabbed a box from the only closet his house had and dropped the blue rupee (as it was all that remained after buying a loaf of bread) with the overal green others. He would have enough to pay this months rent, wich was oviously way too high for this kind of environment.
    He groaned and took a bit of the bread. It would become night soon...
     
    OoC: I have an idea on how to save Mosquett! xD

    IC: Mizujin kept swimming along the river until the great Hyrule gates were in sight. His eyes sparkled with amazement and wonder and he hopped out of the water and onto the cobblestone path to the gate. A guard was standing tall and expressionless in front of the gate, holding a large mace in his hands. Mizujin became fearful of Hyrule when he saw this guard. He dark armor was haunting, his gaze, piercing. He truly wondering whether or not he should continue on he journey.

    Staring past the guard, he noticed that a few townspeople were gathered by the main fountain in the town square. With confidence at seeing some happiness, he charged towards the gate hoping the guard would take no notice.

    The guard angled his mace in the way of Mizujin, "State your purpose, son," said the guard in a deep, gravely voice.

    "Uh...my name's Mizujin and I'm here from the Zoran Domain. I want to figure out what's polluting the water so I thought that the King of Hyrule would know," Mizujin said while trying not to show his true fear.

    "Ha! You think that he could tell you? Well he can't, follow me."

    Mizujin was slightly confused by why the guard was telling him to follow him if the King didn't know about the pollution. This made him sick to the stomach as he thought he was getting a premonition of something bad....He followed the guard holding his head high trying to look official. Nobody stared in his direction. He found this surprising because usually when someone is escorted by guard, heads turn.

    They traveled around the fountain and then towards the castle. Mizujin felt the weight lift as he looked at the castle which was pearly white and had a purple roof. "We're almost here," said the guard as he turned right before the stairway to the door.

    "Where are we going?" Mizujin asked hoping that he would go through a secret entrance or something.

    The guard gave a little smirk as he opened a door nearby. "C'mon, get inside," The guard said. The underground pathway was damp and very dark. The guard lit a torch that was hanging on the wall and pushed Mizujin inside. "Now, take those stairs at the end, I'll be following you," The guard and Mizujin kept moving then reached the white tiled stairs.

    Atop the stairs was a large room with multiple cells. "What are you doing?" Mizujin asked now not giving a care about showing fear. He stared into a cell to see a man hanging by chains. His black hair was covering his face until he stared up at Mizujin. He mouthed the words "help me" when the guard wasn't looking.

    Mizujin shivered wondering what he would be jailed up like. "Now listen here, Jizumin," the guard said.

    "It's Mizujin...sir," he said adding the sir more politely than he should have.

    "Whatever, it doesn't make a difference. A few of your Zoran race have come here looking for the same answers. One of them got way to close to finding it all out, so we decided to lock him up. He's long gone now though," the guard gave a demonic smile from under his helm,"You see, it's difficult keeping this all a secret, so anyone who asks about it is locked up. Since you asked, looks like it's your turn."

    He threw Mizujin into a cell where he fell to the floor. The guard stepped in a chained him to the wall just like the man who was seeking help. "No! You can't do this!" Mizujin shouted with tears in his eyes. His dream was being crushed right in front of him.
     
    Oc: No way! Poor Mizujin. T_T
    I'll guess I have to let Dark to something... go out again or something, much depends on Dara and Lo-chan... I have no idea what you're plotting, Saba-kun... but i'll post my idea in the club. :)

    IC:

    Dark laid his half-eaten piece of bread back on the table. The warmth made him feel uncomfortable. Restless, he sat on the only real chair his 'house' had and looked around if he could find anything to ease his mind. The room he sat in was not that big, surely because it was filled with a small closet, a simple bed with a blue striped blanket that was a bit ragged at the edges. Apart from that and table he sat next to, there was not much else worth metioning. There were two windows in this chamber. A small one next to the front door to see what was happening on the streets, but too small to actually see what was happening... And another one next to where Dark sat, opposite of the other one. If Dark turned his head towards the setting sun, he could vaguely see the shadow of the highest towers Hyrule castle pointing out towards the orange sky.
    There were also two doors in this chamber, the with a strong, wooden bar locked, front door and -what Dark called his- back door. It laid to a deserted stable. There was still enough space to stall a horse. Dark rarely came there. He just used it to store interesting things he found along his endless walks through town. Each time he passed one of the four gates he had tried his best to catch a glimpse of the outside world. He was jealous of the people who could get in- and outside the town with a good reason. A boy like him would never be allowed to leave the town walls. When he had been standing on the squares in front of the gates gazing towards the blue sky behind them, the guards started staring back and told him to continue his way. As if he could do something by just taking a step outside.
    Grumpy, he had turned away from the fresh breeze and had left the squares.
    What was it with those guards? Letting ABSOLUTELY no one pass unless they had a darn good reason? Dark was still wondering about it...And he sniffed everytime he thought of it.
    He had dreamed of the outside world for a long time. Leaving this town was his dearest wish. For it would not only mean leaving this prison, but also leaving his current life. He would have a chance to start over again. But in his current condition, he was a) not able to leave and b) certainly not able to survive in the fields. He sighed and stood up while stuffing the remaining bread in the pocket of his pants. He removed the bar blocking the door and left. He had to take a fresh nose before going to bed. But he would make sure to be inside again before curfew.
     
    Question for Mudkipblader xD;
    Where are you? o.o;
    And how is it up to me and Dara?

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    Rael's heart began to beat fast as she smiled warmly at him. Never had he seen such a beautyful and cute girl before. Her voice made him feel peaeful and calm. Which was something no one was ever able to do.

    "Um... Yeah, thats my name." He turned more red as she began to approach him. "Your name is pretty neat too... Uh. Why am I here?" Now he felt like he was just rambling about nothing. Rael mentaly slapped himself as he realized how much of an idiot he must of sounded. "I'm here just to travel around. Yourself?"

    Rael was trying to seem calm and collected, but was failing misbearly. Oh how the goddesses seemed to hate him at this moment.

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    Ugh.. Sorry this is so short. I am confused on whether or not Dark went by.
     
    OC:To clear a bit of your confusion: Dark rushed by indeed... for a bit didn't really stop near the fountain. Now he left his home wich is situated in one of the poorer quarters of the capital, not too far from the castle.
    And when I said it's up to you and Dara, I meant that the story partly depends on what you guys are plotting.
    My next post 'll be short.... be warned. xD

    IC:As Dark walked through the street he lived in, he saw more and more people taking their stuff back in. Everything that was loose or movable, was stored into the hallways of the houses. Because the houses here were so small, most people had difficulties stuffing everything inside and still being able to walk freely in and out. But this was also a way of preventing the night roamers to come in.
    None the less, Dark snickered lightly when he saw a lady trying to push her 3 dogs into a small basket and they didn't feel like being locked up for the night.
    As she heard him, she threw a deadly glare into the boys direction, but he had already passed her. As he came to an intersecton, he stopped in his pace. Where would he go now? At pure instinct he turned right.
     
    OC: I can't plot anything if only Lo-chan is near me. ._.; Everyone is in 390825023 different places. I don't know how to push this plot forward if someone doesn't at least come to talk to us. >>

    Dara giggled slightly as she watched the teenager become confused with his own word choice. He seemed so nervous and jumpy around her, but Dara didn't have the slightest idea why. Maybe it was her appearance, or maybe she was just strange to be around. Mentally, she had to admit, it had been a while since she had actually been around people her age. Most of the time, she was cooped up inside her home, waiting til the right moment to get up and leave. Rarely, did she even bother talking to the adults around her.

    "Oh, you're here to travel? That sounds nice. I've wanted to travel myself. It's just, I've always been a tad too nervous to actually leave. The fact I don't own a sword or anything like that also drags me down. I've been trying to think of a way to get one." Dara rambled.

    For a moment, she had completely forgotten what his original question was. She kept babbling on about her interesting it would be to travel and see the world. As always she kept approaching the fact she didn't own a weapon.

    "OH! Why am I here you ask?" Dara paused for a moment to think. Ironically, she hadn't put much thought into the situation. She wasn't sure how to answer it without sounding strange.

    "I'm... trying to avenge the village I was born in that was destroyed by the Evil King's minions. As far as I know, I'm really the only one left of my people. I haven't gone back to the remains in years, and I don't intend to." She was almost tearing a little bit as she tried to recall her past experiences.
     
    oc: okay... =3 You guys can plot things together, let's complicate it a bit, shall we? XD

    Ic:
    With no real idea where he was heading, Dark turned right and now and then left or straight forward. He met few people who took the same direction as him. They all went where he came from; away from the center, away from where -according to the stories and rumors- the seed of evil had been planted. He kicked a loose stone out of his way and followed it with his eyes as it bounced all the way to the other side of the road where it was picked up by a young child who was quickly called in by his mother.
    Suddenly the houses next to him moved away, he had reached Castle Square. It hadn't changed much since he passed here an hour and a bit ago. Only it was less crowded (as far as you could call the few people crossing it a crowd). Dark walked up to the fountain. The two youngsters from before were still having their conversation. Not wanting to bug them, Dark walked to the other side and sat down on the white stones of wich the edge of the fountain was made. His feet were a few inches above the ground.
    As he placed his hands next to him on the once white rock, he felt a little bump in his pocket.
    His bread! He had almost forgotten about it. Now that he was sitting here, he could as well finish his evening meal.
     
    OOC: Controling Mosquett I see.... no biggy. Ok on to the goings on.

    IC:

    Mosquett was slightly surprised by the way the Zora had been treated, he had seen them throw anouther Zora in here many years ago, that Zora's name had been Tatul and he had been the only friend Mosquett had for many years. Mosquett blinked a few times before the guard finaly left the room laughing like a dog with a bone, he turned to the Zora then and asked, "Are you alright?"

    He shook his head for a moment then blew his hair from his face, "How can you be younge Mizujin? If you are in here, then you did something that was against regulations..." he chuckled to himself, "Or like I... just something very very wrong..." as though forgetting that the Zora was there Mosquett continued happy that he could finaly get all this off his chest, "I saw when they brought the other Zora here... his name was Tatul... fine young man...in years he had but ten and three." Mosquett sighed very uncaricteristic of himself, "Good man... he and I talked long into the night... the poor thing didn't last more then five days... then he dried out and died of thirst... There was nothing I could do do help him." Mosquett turned to the Zora in the cell, "I don't want that to happen to you..." He smiled, "We're getting out of here... tonight..."
     
    Dara nearly jumped out of her skin as she noticed someone dash right by her in such a mannor. For a moment, she thought about grabbing Rael's arm, but dismissed the thought. She wondered why she even had the idea to begin with. Maybe when she was younger, she would have not hesitated as much. Now, however, things were much different for her.

    "I wonder who he is.." Dara whispered, peering over the side of the fountain.

    The person looked to be in his late teens. Since it was nearly dark out, she couldn't quite place his facial features or his hair color. The only thing she notcied was him snacking on what she thought was a loaf of bread. Being her talkative, yet friendly self, she approached him.

    "Hi there. My name is Dara. Are you from around here? What's your name?"

    So many questions at once! Dara had forgotten she had the tendacy to not let people answer one question at a time, but throw multiple ones in at once.
     
    Rael's body was becoming filled with jealousy as Dara began to speak to this mysterious man. Rael didn't understand why Dara couldn't ask or wait for him to go with her. He walked over there, his heart feeling a little broken. He examined this man.

    "Pfft. He's nothing special." Rael mumbled as he stood next to Dara.

    The jealousy was getting worse as Dara asked multiple questions to this man. He wanted to keep her to his self, and never ever share her. He realized what he was thinking and felt stupid instantly. Why was he even worried about this? It's not like Dara and him were actually dating, and they probably would never even date. She would never think of him like that, he knew it. Still, he didn't like all the attention going to this guy, so he decided to interrupt.

    "Hey Dara." Rael said, acting calm and collected. "What's up?"
     
    Oc: I KNEW IT. 83

    Okay, here I go. :)

    Ic: Dark looked up as he heard a bright, female voice talking to him. He noticed it was the girl who had been standing on the other side of the fountain. Her male companion followed her, yet reluctantly. Even in the fading light, Dark could see by his way of walking that he didn't like this girl talking to him.
    The girl introduced herself as Dara. She seemed very joyous and cheerful, eager to get to know him. Dark smiled. Her eyes were sparkling in the light of the setting sun. It had been a while since he had met or even seen such a person. They became rarities these days. He laid his hand that held the last piece of bread and after swallowing everything, it was his turn to introduce himself and to answer to all her questions. But he didn't mind to do so.
    "Hi, my name is Dark" he started. "You're right, I live in this... town." Dark had almost said 'prison', but that would be unapropriate.
    He twitched his triangular ears as he heard the other one mumble something, but he didn't understand it.
     
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