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Turtle Lover
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- A little town in Texas
- Seen Apr 6, 2010
Work in progress!
You may critique, but don't be too harsh ;D
Editor's Note: Rated "T" for mild violence.
ALSO: My sig will have the 4 main chapters of the 4 part series :D
The links to every chapter in each separate series are at the bottom of each chapter (Lol wut?)
Click on them to jump to the desired Chapter without having to look for it in my topic :D
Somewhere amongst the vast emptiness of the night sky, a small, dying star glows dimly.
A small, pink, catlike creature flies swiftly to the star. It knows that if it doesn't move quickly, the only source of light will disappear forever. It empties its mind and envisions itself feet away from the celestial object and ebbs. Within seconds, the pink creature rematerializes a few feet away from the star. It fearlessly dives into the star and melts into a massive, dimly lighted, secret room.
Inside the room are very large, pillar made out of ancient white rock which holds up an enormous white roof that has a sharp indent in the middle. The floor is made of a smooth, white, mirror-like substance. The walls are covered with pictures of ancient events that lead up to the creation of life. In the middle of the room is a huge golden bed with elegant bed poles on all four corners of the bed. The sheets were made of superiorly soft silk unobtainable to man and the mattress was made of strange material as soft and delicate as clouds. Resting on the bed was the God of all living creatures, both Pokemon and non-Pokemon alike. It appeared to be sleeping; all four of its long legs were tucked neatly beneath it and its elegant head lay on a large, white pillow.
The majestic deity stirs, raises its head from a pillow, and looks down at the tiny creature at the entrance of the large room. The pink Pokemon quickly floats to the front of the bed, bows deeply to the powerful being, and waits for permission to speak.
The God nods its head, "You may speak Mew." its rich voice rumbled.
Mew looks up at the God with its bright blue eyes, "Thank you, Arceus. I bring good news My Lord." Mew replies
Arceus rises from its bed "You have found the child that will bring life and light back to this world?" Mew nods. Arceus closes its eyes "Are you absolutely certain Mew? If you are wrong, then life as we know it will cease to exist." Arceus opens its eyes and stares intently at Mew
Mew meets Arceus's gaze fearlessly "Yes My Lord, this is the child we seek. The Pokemon the child comes into contact with are showing signs of life."
Arceus nods "This sounds promising. However, I want to give the child one final test. There are five souls in Johto that I trust and will see if the child is the one we seek." Arceus elegantly gets off from its bed, beckons Mew to follow, and guides the small pink Pokémon to a hidden opening in the room.
The two legendary Pokemon walk to the end a long, winding hall and stop at the end of the hall where a small chest was hidden. Arceus elegantly lifts one of its long legs, slowly brings it down to the top of the chest, and gently taps it with its hoof. The chest opens and reveals a small, brownish-gold egg.
Arceus slowly puts its leg down, turns its majestic head, and looks at Mew. "Mew, take this egg and give it to one of the five. I trust you know who I am referring to." Mew nods and floats to the chest, bends down and gently grabs the egg, cradles it in its tiny arms, and vanishes.
Once Mew's psychic light vanishes completely, Arceus looks back at the chest and sighs.
"In the beginning, when the 'Creators' ambitions were just beginning, there was only a small, concentrated area that played Pokemon games. I was created from the very first game the 'Creators' made and became the light for Pokemon and Man when the 'Players' would turn off their games or would set their games aside for long periods of time. I gave the creatures of the Pokemon world a soul and they lived on, forgetting that their world was a 'game'. The captured Pokemon would gather with their Trainers and sat happily together beneath my light.
Now, the 'Creators' have made many new games and have stretched my powers to the limit. I once could light the whole Pokemon world, and now, my light cannot shine brightly enough to reach everyone. I only have the power to give life to the 'Legendary' Pokemon and a select few humans. Through them, I am searching for any signs of life. I have foreseen that a child from the 'Creators' world would bring back life to the Pokemon world and would give me enough power to light the Pokemon World for many centuries to come.
I would search for the child myself, but the 'Creators' forced me to create this star and hide within it when they created my 'body' and gave me a name. If I venture from this star, I will disengage and vanish forever. My only hope now is this child that Mew found."
Arceus swiftly turns around and calmly walks back to the entrance. It elegantly walks to the side of the large bed and stops for a moment. "For the lives of all the creatures in the Pokemon world, I pray this child is the one…." Arceus climbs up onto the bed, lowers its head onto a pillow and sleeps.
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'Words' = Thoughts
"Words" = Player's Thoughs
Darkness.
That's all I could see. I got up from a sitting position and put my paws out in front of me to try and see if anything else was in here with me. I stumbled over my own feet and fell on my stomach.
"OUCH!" I yelped. I got up awkwardly and tried to balance myself with my tail. I fell down again and landed on my left hip. Suddenly, I heard a noise behind me.
I turned around "Is anyone there?" I asked in a shaky voice.
"Yes" a female voice answered, "Where are you?"
I managed to get up and followed the direction of the voice "Keep talking! I'll try and find you!" I shouted and took a few wary steps forward with my arms stretched out in front of me. Suddenly, there was a blinding light that filled the void. I squeezed my eyes closed and froze.
"Wow! I didn't know I could do that!" a squeaky male voice chirped, "Hi, I'm Cyndaquil! Who are you?"
I blinked several times in an effort to get used to the harsh light. I put a paw in front of my eyes and looked in the direction of the voice. I saw a weird black and yellow Pokemon with a long nose and tiny eyes whose back was on fire. My heart raced and I lowered my paw in shock 'He's a Fire Pokemon! I-I don't know why I know this, but…'
Cyndaquil tilted his head curiously "What's the matter? I know you two can talk, I heard you a while ago" he took a few steps towards me.
"Stay back!" the female shrieked. I turned around and saw a weird green, four legged Pokemon with a large leaf on its head. She took several steps back, obviously scared of Cyndaquil. 'She's a Grass Pokemon! Why do I feel afraid of her? Better yet, why's she afraid of Cyndaquil?'
Cyndaquil held his small paws up "Whoa sister, I mean you no harm! I just wanted to know who was in this big box with me"
My eyes widened and I instantly looked around. There were four large walls surrounding us; there was even a wall on top. 'Whoa, we ARE in a box! There's no way out of here!' I walked around in a small circle with my jaw wide opened.
"W-where are we?" The female stammered and inched closer to me.
Cyndaquil shrugged "I'd tell ya if I knew sister, but, I'm just as confused as the two of you" He faced me "Now, what's your name blue?"
I gulped "Totodile" I mumbled. Cyndaquil and I both turned to the plant Pokemon.
She looked down nervously "I-I'm Chikorita…" She whispered.
Cyndaquil smiled "There! That wasn't so hard! Now then, Chikorita's obviously a Grass Pokemon, you, Totodile, must be a Water Pokemon, and I'm a Fire Pokemon" He put his paw to his chin thoughtfully, "I wonder why I know that…"
'So it's not just me!' I scratched my head and moved closer to Chikorita and Cyndaquil "Why are we here?" I thought out loud
Cyndaquil shrugged "I don't know brother, I was about to ask you the same question" He sat down and beckoned us to do the same.
Chikorita warily lay down and I clumsily flopped down right next to her, my tail accidently slapping her on the side. She jumped in alarm and I held out a paw "I'm sorry!" I gasped, "I-I'm not good at controlling my tail" She glanced at me warily and reluctantly lay back down a few feet away from me.
Cyndaquil chuckled "You need to gain control of your body brother" I glanced at him and blushed
Suddenly, I felt a sharp tugging on my tail "Hey stop that!" I cried out and quickly turned around only to find that no one was there.
"What's wrong?" Chikorita asked
"Something was pulling my tail!" I answered without facing her.
Cyndaquil jumped up "OW! Something's pulling my foot!"
Chikorita yelped and jumped up "Mine too! What's going on?"
The tugging got stronger and started pulling me towards the far right corner of the room. I looked at Cyndaquil and Chikorita and saw that they were having the same problem.
I winced "I-I don't know, but it's getting worse!" I pushed my body forward and tried to take a few steps away from the mysterious tugging. I saw Cyndaquil dig his paws on the ground with his left foot in the air; Chikorita was doing the same thing. It looked like an invisible hand was trying to pull them off their feet.
I squeezed my eyes shut, threw myself on the ground, and dug my claws in the ground as well. The tugging intensified and literally pulled me off my feet. My claws were slipping 'I can't hold on…Much…LONGER' I grinded my teeth and tried to dig my claws in as deep as I could. I could feel my claws slipping, it wouldn't be long until I lost my grip and was dragged into the abyss.
I heard Chikorita squeal and instantly opened my eyes and looked at her; she lost her grip and was flying into the darkness. I opened my mouth to say something when I heard Cyndaquil yelp. I turned my head but it was too late, he crashed into me and we both flew into the darkness.
Realization Chapters: (Click on them to jump to desired chapter!)
Chapter 2 - DONE
Chapter 3 - DONE
Chapter 4 - DONE
Chapter 5 - DONE
Chapter 6
Chapter 6 part 2 - DONE
Chapter 7 - Under Construction
You may critique, but don't be too harsh ;D
Pocket Monsters
Editor's Note: Rated "T" for mild violence.
ALSO: My sig will have the 4 main chapters of the 4 part series :D
The links to every chapter in each separate series are at the bottom of each chapter (Lol wut?)
Click on them to jump to the desired Chapter without having to look for it in my topic :D
Somewhere amongst the vast emptiness of the night sky, a small, dying star glows dimly.
A small, pink, catlike creature flies swiftly to the star. It knows that if it doesn't move quickly, the only source of light will disappear forever. It empties its mind and envisions itself feet away from the celestial object and ebbs. Within seconds, the pink creature rematerializes a few feet away from the star. It fearlessly dives into the star and melts into a massive, dimly lighted, secret room.
Inside the room are very large, pillar made out of ancient white rock which holds up an enormous white roof that has a sharp indent in the middle. The floor is made of a smooth, white, mirror-like substance. The walls are covered with pictures of ancient events that lead up to the creation of life. In the middle of the room is a huge golden bed with elegant bed poles on all four corners of the bed. The sheets were made of superiorly soft silk unobtainable to man and the mattress was made of strange material as soft and delicate as clouds. Resting on the bed was the God of all living creatures, both Pokemon and non-Pokemon alike. It appeared to be sleeping; all four of its long legs were tucked neatly beneath it and its elegant head lay on a large, white pillow.
The majestic deity stirs, raises its head from a pillow, and looks down at the tiny creature at the entrance of the large room. The pink Pokemon quickly floats to the front of the bed, bows deeply to the powerful being, and waits for permission to speak.
The God nods its head, "You may speak Mew." its rich voice rumbled.
Mew looks up at the God with its bright blue eyes, "Thank you, Arceus. I bring good news My Lord." Mew replies
Arceus rises from its bed "You have found the child that will bring life and light back to this world?" Mew nods. Arceus closes its eyes "Are you absolutely certain Mew? If you are wrong, then life as we know it will cease to exist." Arceus opens its eyes and stares intently at Mew
Mew meets Arceus's gaze fearlessly "Yes My Lord, this is the child we seek. The Pokemon the child comes into contact with are showing signs of life."
Arceus nods "This sounds promising. However, I want to give the child one final test. There are five souls in Johto that I trust and will see if the child is the one we seek." Arceus elegantly gets off from its bed, beckons Mew to follow, and guides the small pink Pokémon to a hidden opening in the room.
The two legendary Pokemon walk to the end a long, winding hall and stop at the end of the hall where a small chest was hidden. Arceus elegantly lifts one of its long legs, slowly brings it down to the top of the chest, and gently taps it with its hoof. The chest opens and reveals a small, brownish-gold egg.
Arceus slowly puts its leg down, turns its majestic head, and looks at Mew. "Mew, take this egg and give it to one of the five. I trust you know who I am referring to." Mew nods and floats to the chest, bends down and gently grabs the egg, cradles it in its tiny arms, and vanishes.
Once Mew's psychic light vanishes completely, Arceus looks back at the chest and sighs.
"In the beginning, when the 'Creators' ambitions were just beginning, there was only a small, concentrated area that played Pokemon games. I was created from the very first game the 'Creators' made and became the light for Pokemon and Man when the 'Players' would turn off their games or would set their games aside for long periods of time. I gave the creatures of the Pokemon world a soul and they lived on, forgetting that their world was a 'game'. The captured Pokemon would gather with their Trainers and sat happily together beneath my light.
Now, the 'Creators' have made many new games and have stretched my powers to the limit. I once could light the whole Pokemon world, and now, my light cannot shine brightly enough to reach everyone. I only have the power to give life to the 'Legendary' Pokemon and a select few humans. Through them, I am searching for any signs of life. I have foreseen that a child from the 'Creators' world would bring back life to the Pokemon world and would give me enough power to light the Pokemon World for many centuries to come.
I would search for the child myself, but the 'Creators' forced me to create this star and hide within it when they created my 'body' and gave me a name. If I venture from this star, I will disengage and vanish forever. My only hope now is this child that Mew found."
Arceus swiftly turns around and calmly walks back to the entrance. It elegantly walks to the side of the large bed and stops for a moment. "For the lives of all the creatures in the Pokemon world, I pray this child is the one…." Arceus climbs up onto the bed, lowers its head onto a pillow and sleeps.
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Part 1: Realization
'Words' = Thoughts
"Words" = Player's Thoughs
Chapter 1: The Box
Darkness.
That's all I could see. I got up from a sitting position and put my paws out in front of me to try and see if anything else was in here with me. I stumbled over my own feet and fell on my stomach.
"OUCH!" I yelped. I got up awkwardly and tried to balance myself with my tail. I fell down again and landed on my left hip. Suddenly, I heard a noise behind me.
I turned around "Is anyone there?" I asked in a shaky voice.
"Yes" a female voice answered, "Where are you?"
I managed to get up and followed the direction of the voice "Keep talking! I'll try and find you!" I shouted and took a few wary steps forward with my arms stretched out in front of me. Suddenly, there was a blinding light that filled the void. I squeezed my eyes closed and froze.
"Wow! I didn't know I could do that!" a squeaky male voice chirped, "Hi, I'm Cyndaquil! Who are you?"
I blinked several times in an effort to get used to the harsh light. I put a paw in front of my eyes and looked in the direction of the voice. I saw a weird black and yellow Pokemon with a long nose and tiny eyes whose back was on fire. My heart raced and I lowered my paw in shock 'He's a Fire Pokemon! I-I don't know why I know this, but…'
Cyndaquil tilted his head curiously "What's the matter? I know you two can talk, I heard you a while ago" he took a few steps towards me.
"Stay back!" the female shrieked. I turned around and saw a weird green, four legged Pokemon with a large leaf on its head. She took several steps back, obviously scared of Cyndaquil. 'She's a Grass Pokemon! Why do I feel afraid of her? Better yet, why's she afraid of Cyndaquil?'
Cyndaquil held his small paws up "Whoa sister, I mean you no harm! I just wanted to know who was in this big box with me"
My eyes widened and I instantly looked around. There were four large walls surrounding us; there was even a wall on top. 'Whoa, we ARE in a box! There's no way out of here!' I walked around in a small circle with my jaw wide opened.
"W-where are we?" The female stammered and inched closer to me.
Cyndaquil shrugged "I'd tell ya if I knew sister, but, I'm just as confused as the two of you" He faced me "Now, what's your name blue?"
I gulped "Totodile" I mumbled. Cyndaquil and I both turned to the plant Pokemon.
She looked down nervously "I-I'm Chikorita…" She whispered.
Cyndaquil smiled "There! That wasn't so hard! Now then, Chikorita's obviously a Grass Pokemon, you, Totodile, must be a Water Pokemon, and I'm a Fire Pokemon" He put his paw to his chin thoughtfully, "I wonder why I know that…"
'So it's not just me!' I scratched my head and moved closer to Chikorita and Cyndaquil "Why are we here?" I thought out loud
Cyndaquil shrugged "I don't know brother, I was about to ask you the same question" He sat down and beckoned us to do the same.
Chikorita warily lay down and I clumsily flopped down right next to her, my tail accidently slapping her on the side. She jumped in alarm and I held out a paw "I'm sorry!" I gasped, "I-I'm not good at controlling my tail" She glanced at me warily and reluctantly lay back down a few feet away from me.
Cyndaquil chuckled "You need to gain control of your body brother" I glanced at him and blushed
Suddenly, I felt a sharp tugging on my tail "Hey stop that!" I cried out and quickly turned around only to find that no one was there.
"What's wrong?" Chikorita asked
"Something was pulling my tail!" I answered without facing her.
Cyndaquil jumped up "OW! Something's pulling my foot!"
Chikorita yelped and jumped up "Mine too! What's going on?"
The tugging got stronger and started pulling me towards the far right corner of the room. I looked at Cyndaquil and Chikorita and saw that they were having the same problem.
I winced "I-I don't know, but it's getting worse!" I pushed my body forward and tried to take a few steps away from the mysterious tugging. I saw Cyndaquil dig his paws on the ground with his left foot in the air; Chikorita was doing the same thing. It looked like an invisible hand was trying to pull them off their feet.
I squeezed my eyes shut, threw myself on the ground, and dug my claws in the ground as well. The tugging intensified and literally pulled me off my feet. My claws were slipping 'I can't hold on…Much…LONGER' I grinded my teeth and tried to dig my claws in as deep as I could. I could feel my claws slipping, it wouldn't be long until I lost my grip and was dragged into the abyss.
I heard Chikorita squeal and instantly opened my eyes and looked at her; she lost her grip and was flying into the darkness. I opened my mouth to say something when I heard Cyndaquil yelp. I turned my head but it was too late, he crashed into me and we both flew into the darkness.
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Realization Chapters: (Click on them to jump to desired chapter!)
Chapter 2 - DONE
Chapter 3 - DONE
Chapter 4 - DONE
Chapter 5 - DONE
Chapter 6
Chapter 6 part 2 - DONE
Chapter 7 - Under Construction
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