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Old September 20th, 2010 (1:11 PM).
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Before I begin, I caught one grammar mistake while reading:

"*Scribbles our "confused" writes "NOOB LOLZ"*" should be "*Scribbles out "confused" writes "NOOB LOLZ"*

Well, on the subject of the LP itself I have to admit it was a fairly good start, if you can keep the momentum going it will definitely be one to keep an eye on. Though several of your jokes fell flat (mostly the more immature ones), I believe that for the most part it was written quite well.

And I think you should choose Elekid and name him Billy, y'know? Like Billy the Kid?

Anywho... keep up the mutton chops.

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"pps new screenie" - No, really shut up yuoaman.

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Pokémon Quartz - The only one of mine really worth reading.

What about my [Un]Abridged series?
Aquaman the Unabridged Parody Series - Language warning.

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