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Moth

Trance and Moss

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    • Seen Aug 24, 2012
    Fly to the Light
    the Warmth is growing
    closer to the Energy
    feeling Safe and Content
    ZAP
    Pain...
    I'm going back again.



    -Trance and Moss (Dec. 2011)
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    Palladium

    2012 FTW!
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    • Nice poem, but isn't that a little too short? I know that the poem is describing the moth's "story" but even so, it could have been larger; well, I like it simple, so ought to give you points for that. But really other than the fact that you capitalized some words when you didn't need to (safe, content, warmth, light) the poem is great as it is. Congratulations and keep up like that.
     
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