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June 1st, 2012 (7:53 PM).
Yeah, thanks for the review, the "it" was just a spelling mistake, I was just gonna correct it. Also, the adjectives could use a little editing as you pointed out. The ... is just a bad habit i developed in posts, i don't exactly count the dots and end up overdoing it! Also about location, it is currently unknown, from the story point of view (i'am obviously not gonna reveal where he actually is as it would be a spoiler!)Anyways, thanks again for the review, the next chapter is gonna be from Hilbert(the protagonist from black and white)'s point of view!
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