The power of the Eevee

Here go my first role-play
All know there are five evolutions to eevee. Flareon, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Espeon, and Umbereon. Well long time ago there was 6 Eevee who save the world from evil but, now there more evil coming to the pokemon world. There hope that 6 six eevee will come to save the world from darkness again. (Now I need 5 more eevee and if you want to join just sigh this :
Name:
Appearance:
Personaltiy:
eevee:
Gender:

here is my:
Name:Fira
Appearance:
Personaltiy: smart, nice,and sweet
eevee:Flareon
Gender:f

Name: Aqua
Appearance:A Vaporeon with strange aqua skin and is very slippery. Has a blue flowing cape and a blue gem attached on the forehead.
Personality: Sweet and kind but when angered BEWARE!
Eevee: Vaporeon
Gender: Female

Name: Drift
Appearance:
Personaltiy: She calm and sarcastic at the worst of times. She is almost always cheerful and carefree. She is friendly and cares very deeply about all of her friends. She loves adventure and is rather stubborn and tough. She will always help those who need it and never backs down from a fight even if she knows she can't win. She is intellegent and always willing ot make sacrifices for those she cares about. Though at times she can be shy.
Eevee: Umbreon
Gender: Female

Name: Rukki
Appearance:
Personaltiy: Very shy. However, he is very interactive with friends and family
Eevee: Eevee
Gender: Male

Name: Thunder
Appearance:Jolteon with a shiny coat with eyes that makes it look mysterious
Personality: Likes to keep to its self but will protect really good friends
Eevee: Jolteon
Gender: Male

Alright now we got six people. Should I start?

I watched the clear blue sky turning dark as night. Clouds covered the sky. Thunder roared into my ears. Wind blew my flowing cape. I bolted into the plains below. Evil men were laughing and drinking wine. With ease I tackled one of them and retreated just in time before they notice me.

i think we should of waited but oh well
I could hear the thunder, and feel the lightning. The amazing power of electricity through each bolt that hit the ground. I draw my energy from the lightning bolts dashing around trying to get close enough. I could feel a presence close. I hid in the bushes waiting. Zoom, a blue figure with a cape dashed passed, i knew it was a vaporeon i chased it without it noticing. It had hit a human and ran away, i lost site of it but the humans must of mistaken it for me, a large lightning bolt hit the ground i drew energy from it to paralyze the near by humans and set off in search for the mysterious vaporeon.

Rukki stood there, staring upon the great wide sky. He smiled. Thunder roared in the sky. Such great sounds of nature always fascinated the Eevee. Suddenly, a blue caped fugure dashed out of nowhere. It attacked some men with furiosity. With the men slowly backing away, the silver Eevee, curious, slowly approached the Vaporeon.

I watched as the silver Eevee, Jolteon and Espeon slowly aprroached me. I felt annoyance rushing up inside me, but this time I kept control. In the corner of my eye I saw two men rushing up the hill. Soon they will arrive, but I just sat there. I didn't respond to the other Pokemon. Instead I ran off, ignoring the rain starting to fall. I wanted to be alone.

I saw the whole scene. The man is coming closer to the espeon. I leaped in and a cold rainbow beam came out of my strange blue gem. It had knocked the man out cold.

Drift moved slowly through the grass. She saw an Eevee, a Vaporeon, an Espeon, and a Jolteon standing around then the Vaporeon left. She was surprised at their color as she thought she was the only oddly colored Pokemon. She kept her distance not wanting to intrude on their conversation. But she was curious and wanted to talk to somebody. OS after a while she slowly approached.

I watched as the Umbreon shyly walked to the Eevee, Jolteon, and Flareon. I stood silently. Without hesitation I ran off.

Rukki stared at the approaching black figure. An Umbreon. Rukki blinked at the ankward silence. He looked around. A strange man, seemingly drunk, was approaching the Umbreon from behind. Rukki quickly raced towards the man, giving him a good Headbutt to the mid-section.

Drift howled in alarm and spun around. SHe spotted the man and snarled her fur bristling. "Thank you." She said to the white Eevee. She then opened her mouth and released Shadow Ball at the man to make sure he stayed away. "My name is Drift."

its a great fic keep going

I leaped in the air, almost flying. I was challenging the men from the plains below. One of them angrily threw a stone at me. I yelped as a large stone hit my hind leg. It was a good shot, despite the man's long arms.

nice..continue on with the fic