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Pains of life

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Life brings pain and glory,
My life is like an never ending story,
Unwanted things happen all the time,
Not the way I like it the way that isn't fine.​

My life has brought me so much misery,
That the only thing I can see,
Is the bad side of everything,
And I can't listen to how the birds sing.​

Just a little time ago,
I was left by the ones I looked up to,
And all I had was sorrow,
I have learnt of the experience from the things I had to do,​

I got wiser but not without any sacrifice,
I had to leave my youth on the breaking ice,
Now I feel like an adult but look like an child,
No one understands and that's making me feel like going wild,​

I just can't live on my own,
It is bad just like my father and mother have shown,
I just don't want to be alone any more,
I need someone that helps me and to care for.​

Pains of Life by Satoshi Sugimori


I'm sorry if there are any spelling faults please correct me if you find them :)

A haiku:

All alone are the words
That is what you don't deserve
It's bad all alone

(this is right, right?)
 
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eevee00

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  • Seen Aug 22, 2010
A lovely poem, I only saw three mistakes, missery should be misery, whitout should with without and I think anymore is two words instead of one.

Anyway, I enjoyed this poem, keep writing. :)
 

Lady Berlitz

Cinnamon ♪
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A lovely poem, I only saw three mistakes, missery should be misery, whitout should with without and I think anymore is two words instead of one.
Actually, "anyone" is one word, if that is what Satoshi Sugimori is meaning.

Otherwise, the story is great. I hope you continue to write more.
Good luck, Satoshi.
 
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