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Old December 31st, 2012 (12:45 PM).
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Really wants shiny Porygon Z:3
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
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@Danaxe: You need to expand your SU a bit, mostly in appearence and history. Your appearence is way to short to come up with any kind of image for a character. What about his height? His figure? Think of stuff that'll make it easier for the others to come up with an image in their head or use a picture yourself. As for the history, while the history is infact ten lines, I think using dialogue to fill in the ten line quota is kind of exploiting the rule a bit. Describe the history a little more, your free to keep the dialogue though.

@WolfOfEve: Your good to go. Accepted
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