[WIP] Groudon EX

Hi all ... Im a noob at Card faking and now i started to fake them :O
This is my first card and it is still Work in Progress ! PLZ feedback and so on :O
Sorry for my english -> I am german ;)
greetz Pain
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Of Course it is :O
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Since it's a WIP, I'll give it a 7/10. Placement is good, wording is fair, and style is ok. I can't wait to see it finished, it's gonna be a cool card. Anyways, try to be more original with the attack names.

ELGONZO!!!

the card is okay
but u missed so many things that go on the card
in the illusrater illus. By ??? isn't right thats a picture from a real card so have the proper illus

So ... Now Beta 2 is available .... Its still WIP but i changed some things ... And now Groudon is Fire/Fighting ;)
Greetz Pain

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That Groudon Card Has Few Problems In It.

Heavy Quake 80
This attck does 20 damage to Groudon EX
OR
Put 2 damage counters on Groudon EX

Wow.. that has some pretty neat art.

Your making good progress.

Keep it up.