Hey, about time we had someone that wasn't just posting colorless "i like ur game and ur fakes keep it up" posts Flattery won't get you further than the moon.... And you raise some interesting points; I'll do my best to answer them as well Ohhh, so I get a two-for-one deal? Guess that made that post worth it....
First off, let me say that I am in the process of rewriting the summary Oh, excellent... to be a little more updated (since we've done some work on the story since that summary was posted). So some of your comments, in particular the ones about grammar ...I never point out anything about grammar. You must have misunderstood me..., won't pertain once I'm done. But I'll do my best to answer the rest of 'em...
-Tandor actually does have one active volcano If it didn't, that'd have to be changed, wouldn't it?. The rest of the mountains are, for all intents and purposes, extinct Soooooo, can I take a 'Peak Fossil' to a scientist and get a Mountain revived for me?. Just so we don't get into a debate about the geological history of the region (like in the Mercury topic Geologicasl history can be important (especially when legendary pkmn are involved).): the region is situated on a fault line where the plates were pushing up against each other; however, millions of years ago the plates stopped shifting ..., so they are simply at a standstill with only one existing passage to the core of the earth It would be interesting if the 'active' volcano were to, uhhh...erupt...and cause damage as an added mess to whatever else you got goin' on.. Good enough for you? No.
-Not Aliens, although that would be cool If it would be cool, then why not just do it? YOU hold the power to control what's in your game.... =P The power plant once provided energy for three cities, but after the meltdown it was understandably abandoned And what about the surrounding civilisation? If it was bad enough, the entire island would have ended up desolate....
-What JV is trying to say is this: Uranium isotopes will continue to emit radiation until they become stable, correct Why, yes.? But since radiation is the source of this Pokemon's power, it doesn't want to become stable and so seeks new sources of power Wow, that's good.... When normal Pokemon get afflicted with radioactivity, they react differently than humans How big of a physiological difference REALLY could there be? I s'psoe it's arguable since pkmn centers and hospitals are not the same and that pkchow tastes awful to humans...: it infects their elemental nature until they become as single-minded as the legend So it's only thought is to infect whatever it sees? Wouldn't there be environmental consequences you must consider? Undoubtedly there would be environmental activists who foolishly try to stop the spreading of the U-DNA, and there would probably be modified tiles to reflect the damaged nature, right?. There is a cure for the normal Pokemon, but only applicable in the early stages of infection. Infection? These aren't viruses...wouldn't contamination be a better term? How do they cure it? Is there some kind of pk-serum that reacts with the U-DNA to remove it from the system so long as it has not spread much?
-Aotios and Mutios TWO new Latis?! C'mon... are actually not light and dark, as JV said-- they're wind and water That's still lacking any originality., passive and agressive A'rrrrrrright..., coexisting guardians of the isles that usually have little to do with people... but of course, this new disruption has changed that rather How? Why?.
-The professor's name there is a typo. xD It's actually supposed to be Bamb'o. ...you sure it's still not a typo and meant to be Will'o? Just saying...
-"Team Yin" and "Team Yang" are the rather more outdated part of this. xD First off, those names are obsolete I already established that... (we have new ones), and second, to call them evil teams would be a misnomer-- they are neutral organizations ...if they have 'Team' in the name, the fanbase will assume otherwise. that would ordinarily be unrelated to the problem, but unfortunately with Aotios and Mutios involved Hmmmm...so that means they must be a religious/historical group or something. they can't be So, for in-game purposes, they are still cliched evil organisations? Seems like just semantics....