pokemon no name yet

hack name: none rom base: pokemon ruby
STORYLINE You and your family just moved to america and you decide to go on a adventure. this game features real life peireods from the time of the origanal thirteen colonies. Featuring The boston tea party. washington at vally forge. the battle of lexington and concord and more
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THANKS TO TOOL Makers MAPS bosten harbor. READ THE PART OF THE MAP ON THE RIGHTWILL BE CHANGED!!!!






starting town no name

You need to expand your story and add a list of features if you want this to stay open.

the maps look really bad no offense.

um you really need to add to the story, theres barely any story.

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I edited the storyline and some maps BOSTEN APART OF BOSTEN READ: THE PART OF THE MAP ON THE RIGHTWILL BE CHANGED!!!! STARTING TOWN ( NO NAME ) Featurs: The boston tea party. washington at vally forge. the battle of lexington and concord and more

I think that maps aren't that square, but yeah mate you need features :)

Edit- :I er ok those features could work <-< >->

those maps still look really empty. and I don't see how this relates to Pokemon....

and you say you edited the storyline? please i would like to hear...


PS: Storylines consist of more than one sentence. Most storylines i have seen are at least a paragraph.

Edit: and when you are trying to advertise a hack, it would be nice if you used better grammar and spelling...but that's just imo.

BananasGoMoo said:

and I don't see how this relates to Pokemon....

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This is just ROM Hacking. It doesn't have to be a Pokémon related hack or anything.

The maps are really bland and rather dull though. And you shouldn't release maps - just screenshots. :\

BTW, it's Boston, not Bosten.

Oh, you need better English.

Ninja Caterpie said:

This is just ROM Hacking. It doesn't have to be a Pokémon related hack or anything.

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but he named it "pokemon no name yet"