(Re-done) Pokemon Savior ~ Reprise (PG-13)

Renee was cold and shivering,er clothes still soaking wet.Renee knew if this kept on she was going to die.So she kept walking along quietly hoping to find someone,but she was aimlessly lost.Renee sighed quietly and sat down on a beach, her body felt like ice. "I guess I'm going to die,I wonder where the others are..I bet they;ve forgotten about me anyways" She said putting on a fake smile even though she could feel tears welling up in her eyes.

"Why am I crying?...I;ve got nothing to cry about..I knew what it was to have friends,but I must have not been help to anyone..Oh well!" She said still having a fake smile on.Renee knew she was decieving herself, she didn't want to die with sadness in her heart.Before Renee knew it tears were streaming down her face."Stop it stop it!" She mumbled trying to hold back the tears. Renee soon against her will started crying.She wished she was home or that she had her friends with her.Renee felt herself getting weaker and weaker. "I-I'm cold.." Renee mumbled with a slight sob through her tears. "But who am I kidding no ones gonna find me..I'm all alone..again...." She said once
through her tears and sobs.Just then she smelt something that she had long for since she had woken up on the beach..food. "I wonder..if whoever is cooking can give me something to eat.." Renee mumbled following the smell of the food.She soon came acroos a house that had food. She quickly opened the door not caring if she was being rude or not.
"Please whoever you are..help me.." Renee mumbled before her weak body gave out and she passed out.

After hearing the door open, Jack decided to take a look on who it was. He assumed it was either the three who left the house, "What in... since when did you get here miss?" Jack said in shock. He quickly took some large thick towels from the closet nearby and covered Renee with them, "Just what, when, and how did you get here? A little miss like you shouldn't be walking around this area, it's dangerous," he said, glad enough to see that Renee was still breathing in this world, "Well you can tell me later, you seem pretty tired out miss, it would be wise for you to rest... follow me and I'll escort you to the guest room and give you a nice and comfortable bed."

OOC: Hi everyone! I just talked to NessStar....hope you don't mind an addition...?

Name: Zalitz Tiburon (sometimes just called Zee)
Gender: Male
Age: 18

Appearance: Zalitz is a young, thin boy of around the height of 5 foot 7 with typically peachy Caucasian skin tone. He is very thinly built but has solid visible muscles. His hair is a dirty white/gray color that spikes downward from the center root in his head. The hair droops almost over his narrow, Jade Green eyes. His eyes, although thin, have a soft and gentle look to them. Zalitz wears a long, open, gray, sleeveless trench coat that drapes down to his feet and is tattered at bottom. Underneath the trench coat he wears a tight fitting black tank top which drapes over the belt loops of snug fitting black cargo pants. His feet are covered by a pair of solid looking combat boots. Around Zalitz's neck, he wears a pair of goggles which he pulls over his eyes when working with the many machines he enjoys spending his time on. Behind him underneath his trench coat, he keeps his weapon of choice as concealed as possible, it tends to attract attention.

History: Zalitz has been out on his own since the age of 12 when he was separated from his family during the times of the attacks against Kanto. The group of people attacked his home town of Vermillion. Many people were harmed during these attacks but Zalitz survived by escaping and hiding in Diglett cave. Of course the Diglett left at the slightest hint of danger, leaving him alone. For months he stayed in seclusion, only coming out to find food and water then rushing back to avoid danger. In the free time of his life, he would sneak out and grab scrap metal from the boat yard and around town and bring it back to the cave to work on. It was in this way that he became very well versed in the ways of mechanics and welding. His intelligence began to grow exponentially as a result of his constant studies of machines.

As he grew through his teenage years he began to use his mechanical expertise to devise a weapon to protect himself. He decided that the day he finished this weapon, he would travel out of Diglett cave and make an attempt to right the wrongs where ever he could around the world, and hopefully bring down the people who destroyed his once happy childhood.

Personality: Zalitz's looks sometimes cause confusion when he first meets people. His life of solitude has given him a very rugged and dangerous appearance but he is quite the opposite. His whole life all he wanted was someone to share his time with. Zalitz is quite shy when meeting anyone, and as a result of being alone, takes him a while to warm up to people. He learned to speak from the mechanic manuals he reads to further his own knowledge, so when he speaks, he has a very proper and technical tone to his voice. He tends to not understand most average slang, but tries his best to understand native dialogs. His shy personality is quickly vacated and replaced by rage at the mere mention of the incidents of the attacks on Kanto by the group. He speaks about those days with passion as he can vividly remember the pain and sorrow he suffered. Aside from that, Zalitz is a very friendly person. He is always offering to fix broken or malfunctioning electronics and always returns them working better than they did before they broke. The only thing he does not like is when people touch his pride and joy... his weapon of choice. That being said, his battle skills are only average, he mostly relies on the strength of his weapon, not knowing proper swordsmanship.

Other: Zalitz's mechanical abilities are second to none, he can dissect the complex insides of any machine just by looking at it. Re-wiring automated systems and security cameras come almost as a 6th sense to him. He can do anything with machines from building small useful tools from scratch to listening to a machine and being able to know whats wrong with it. When he begins repairing, his hands work like lightning and while he is working he is COMPLETELY focused.

*Natural Weapon: Tech Blade

Zalitz worked on this weapon for 5 years. The Tech Blade is a smooth, thick, reflective silver, metal blade of about 3 feet long. The panels along its broad side each serve a special purpose. The secret to the Tech Blade is the fact that it can simulate different elements of nature. Upon command, the plates separate from the blade and begin to orbit around the sword. Depending on the frequency of orbit, the sword generates artificial elements such as wind, fire, lightning, water, and ice. Although it has this great range of elements, they are all relatively weak in comparison to the actual things. The only one who can understand the complexities of how the weapon operates are Zalitz himself.

Favorite Pokemon: CAMERUPT!!!

hope you all would want me to join.... for RP samples, I've started many RPs. If you want me to post a sample i can, but the link in my signature goes straight to an RP I created myself.

Excellence, the blade's features are even original, awesome. Everything about your character is pretty neat too, you are ~Accepted~

OOC: Thank you very much :)

"It sure got dark quick...and I've been wandering around this forest for days..."Zalitz thought to himself as he trudged on aimlessly. The forest's thick trees had caused the appearance of an early night as it drowned out the sunlight. There was an eerie silence surrounding him and there seemed to be no sign of life for miles still. It had been a while since Zalitz had even eaten anything. His stomach growled audibly as he pushed through the bushes and thin trees of the forest floor.

Zalitz began to hear a soft pitter patter on the leaves above him. It started slow and grew faster and faster at a stead pace until it sounded like a solid wave. It didn't take long to realize what the sound was, as it broke through the forest's canopy.

"Great... rain" He said out loud.

The rain fell hard, soaking him to the bone. He moved for what seemed hours until he saw a house in the distance in the woods. The lights gave off a welcoming glow through the windows and movement could be seen inside. He didn't know who lived there but this would be the only chance he had of building his strength back. He pushed on through the trees and thick mud to the door step. He was completely soaked by now, and his clothes were heavy and cold. He finally made it to the door and gave two huge large knocks on the door that echoed through the forest's silence.

The knocks consumed the last of his energy... he couldn't go on any farther and collapsed at front door, with his arms spread wide and his sword in the mud next to him. Face down in fatigue.

"It's raining again..." Psy wasn't able to see the reflection clearly due to the ripples disortion. He agreed to himself that now was the time to get back to the house, "I think that's enough fresh air for one day, I better get back to the house or I'll end up sick from the rain," he said softly to himself, walking his way back to return to Jack's house. Little did Psy know that a creature from behind the bushes was stalking Psy's presence. As Psy walked his way, the creature followed from behind without noise.

"Now those must be one of them boys, just wait until I tell..." Jack was interrupted after opening the fron door. He saw a boy on the ground and appeared to him as if he were dead, "You aren't one of them, you're alive right?" he asked the boy, even though he was not expecting an answer.

Renee slowly got up out of the bed,she knew someone had helped her and she was grateful,she walked out of the room looking for the person who had saved her. Renee wanted to thank the person who had saved her. "Um..Hello?" Renee said looking around the house. Renee quickly saw Jack and the boy who had collapsed. "W-what happened..? Is he alright..?" Renee mumbled looking at the what seemed to be lifeless body of the young man.Renee fell silent as she looked at Jack and quickly asked "Do you know him..Do you know what happened to him..?" She said to Jack quietly.

Randy was staring at the sky when he felt little drops of water coming down on him. "Well, might as well head back to the cabin." Randy said as he got up and began to walk to Jack's cabin. "Psy, Samson and I sure were lucky that Jack was able to help us out" Randy thought to himself as he was walking down a dirt path. "Otherwise, who knows what would've happened to the three of us..." He thought again.

Randy continued to walk down the path until Jack's cabin was in sight. "Well, there's the cabin." Randy said as he protected his hairdo from the rain sonone of the gel or coloring would wash out. Randy entered the cabin without any hesitation, seeing as how Jack already knew who he was. "Jack? You here?" Randy asked as soon as he entered the cabin. Then Randy looked downward in disbelief. He saw Jack was there, but also saw not only a boy who he's never seen before, but also the girl who was on the cruise ship. "That can't be..." he thought to himself. Randy quickly snapped out of it. "Are they gonna be okay?" Randy asked Jack as he walked toward the three.

Through closed eyes, Zalitz rolled over onto his back. He could feel the mud caked onto him and strained to open his eyes. His vision was fuzzy at first, an obvious side effect of his fatigue. His vision slowly began to focus. As he began to regain consciousness, a flurry of voices could be heard floating over his body. His eyes finally shifted into focus revealing 3 people standing over him. Instantly and defensively, he snapped forward, sitting straight up and trying to take in his surroundings. His body suddenly gave out and he collapsed backwards onto the floor again. It was no use, he didn't have enough strength to sit up yet.

"How did i get here... lets think here... I was in the forest... then I found the cabin.. it was raining... i knocked.. and.. thats it! These people must own this cabin." Zalitz thought to himself. "I better try and explain myself"

He sat up again, slowly this time, and propped himself up against the wall, looking weakly at the people. A girl and two men, they didn't seem threatening at all.

"My apologies...my name is Zalitz... I have been traveling alone for some time now, but it has been days without food or water... I'm sorry to inconvenience you like this, but might I trouble you all for a spot of charity? Some food and water and maybe a warm place to rest for the time being?" Zalitz asked the group, knowing it was impolite to ask for so much. But it was such a desperate time of need that he couldn't help himself...

Renee heard a person come through the door and flinched. "That face is familiar..Randy..?" Renee thought to herself but then turned her attention to the man who adressed himself as Zalitz. "My name is Renee I recently washed up on the beach..This young man here saved me.." Renee quietly mumbled as she pointed to Jack. Renee glanced at Randy.. "You were one of the peopel on the ship weren't you..Randy was your name right?.. I'm also assuming the others are here right..? Psy, Samson and Shiro.." She said to Randy beginning to wodner why they were here and if it was just an accident if she washed up on the shore of this island.

"You kids should rest, it's been a long day and a good sleep will do best," Jack suggested to the three. Jack then quickly walked into the kitchen, picked up a basket that had still-steaming-hot chicken inside, and walked back in where the three were, "You all seem pretty hungry, you should fill up your stomachs at least, wouldn't want to go to bed with hunger on your side," he said, putting the basket down on the floor, "I made it myself, I know you guys will love it."

The rain was getting harder every minute and Psy was still trying to make his return back to Jack's house, "I better hurry up or else I'll get soaked up big time," he said to himself. He yet stood oblivious of the presence of the stalking creature, still to follow Psy's tracks.

"Wow thank you so much, sir." Zalitz responded politely, but instantly showed his other side and immediately began eating with no manners what soever. Zalitz's lack of human contact was never more apparent than when he ate. He scarfed his food, not chewing much but hunger voided his mind of all thoughts of grace and civility as he ate.

After the food was comfortably settled in his stomach, he leaned back and let out a large sigh, showing his approval. "Thank you very much for the meal." He said through happy gasps for air between chews. "I haven't eaten anything in such a long time... and it tastes wonderful!" Zalitz exclaimed.

"So... your names Renee? pleased to meet you, Renee. I'm sorry, I didn't quite catch YOUR name, sir" He said, motioning to Randy. "I apologize again...I've got a lot of questions for everyone... You seem very well acquainted with each other? Do you all know one another? Are there more of you?"

Zalitz continued his barrage of questions towards the others as the rain steadily grew heavier. Something wasn't sitting right in Zalitz's mind though, something was causing him to feel uneasy, something was coming. He stood up, now having eaten and feeling healthy. His eyes narrowed and focused on outside. His years of solitude in the cave had taught him one major survival instinct. How to sense when danger was near.

"I hate to be rude. But when I came, i had a large weapon with me. Where might that be?"

"A weapon you say? It could still be outside, follow me so we can check outside really quick," Jack said and grabbed the doorknob, "I think I do remember seeing something sharp like a small blade of some sort out here, it was right near where you used to be laying," he opened the door softly and slowly.

"Hey Jack, I think this weird metal thing belongs to you I assume?" Psy asked Jack, standing outside, fully soaked in water. Jack was glad he was able to find not only one but two things we was searching for, "There you are, hurry up and get in or else you'll become sick," Jack said and grabbed the weapon from Psy's hands. Psy ran his way to the bathroom, wanting to take a hot shower, "I hope you don't really mind me taking a quick hot shower, I'm freezing to death," Psy got in the bathroom and closed the door. Jack then said in response, "Just don't waste all the soap... forget it, by the way could this be yours Zalitz?" He asked him in a tone where you can tell when one is but slightly stressed out.

"So they are here.." Renee thought you herself. Renee looked at them suprisingly. "Well.. Thanks for saving me..and yes Zalitz.. I do know them..but I only remeber them vaguely..." She said as she turned to Jack and smiled. Renee looked out through a window watching the rain. "I guess I gotta get soem new supplies I bet mine all got lost when the ship sunk..Even my bow and arrows..." Renee mumbled quietly to herself. She turned back to the table and sat down and grabbed a piece of chicken. "Heh I haven't had anything in quite a long time..I feels something nice to have something in my stomach again..." Renee happily smiled as she took a bite of chicken. "I bet they don't even remeber me anymore.." Renee thought as she took a bite of chicken once more.

Samson woke up pretty late. He heard noises so he figured everybody was awake. He stood up and stretched, scratching the back of his head and yawning. "Guess I'll go say g'morning...."
He walked out of his room, only to see Reene, the girl from the ship. Samson's mouth dropped.
"I...I thought you probably drowned with the rest of them....." He said as he slowly walked up. "How did you get here? .....how long have I been asleep?" Samson scratched his head and then noticed another boy, one he has never met before. "Oh, and who are you?" He said while extending his hand. "Hi. I'm Samson."