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Pokemon Star: On the behalf of brotlov

Does this look like it has good potential?

  • Almost definitley

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Probably

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  • Probably not

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  • Nup

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • No way!

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  • It is definitley going to blow this world up!!!!!!!!!

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  • Total voters
    5
  • Poll closed .

Innocence

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  • Hi! This is on behalf of brotlov, because he has limited use of the internet.(No shrewd remarks here XD) Anyway this is on my computer :P. Anyway, He doesn't have rm2k3, but i am giving him credit for starting it. Anyway, to business. The plot: You have recently moved to starjo,(Corny name but not much choice XD(Why am i putting all the Xds in brackets XD?)) on your 10th birthday. You are reluctant to get a pokemon, But your mum persuades you. "It is for protection!" she says. "And it's fun!" that remark gets you psyched. You go to Prof. oaks lab, which has a new teleporter of bill's that joins kanto to starjo. But team rocket finds the teleporter, And uses it to enter. With mewtwo, Stolen from red, They wreck starjo. Prof.Oak calls you and tells you to stop this. He gives you a Mobile phone, and a Pokemon. He says red was a great success with charmander, so he gives you the same choice. *Pants* I'll write the rest toomorow. Screenies enclosed.
    EDIT: Almost forgot. If you hate the screenies, then you know i need a mapper. If you don't, I need a mapper. Either way, If anyone wants to be a mapper, Let me know.
     

    sketch

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    Ya,you need some more stuff in them but I can't be a mapper because I'm busy with 2 games!Sorry.Nice story though,and why not make all three choices instead of just charmander.
     

    Raccoon

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    Yeah, fatten up the maps and don't make it so that you can only have a charmander.
    What happens if someone is allergic to Charmander's skin? Then they might die while playing the game.
     

    Ninja Tree

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    Might wanna take a look at Jeff's map tutorial. It's really nice.
     

    Ninja Tree

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    Not trying to be mean but maybe can you fix it up a little. Maybe add some corners.
     

    Sorye HK

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    I don't think that the font and colour match the messagebox. Those maps look like they could use some tweaking. Looks as if they're only in the beginning stage of making...
     

    Innocence

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  • Well i am working on the beginning bit then tweaking. What do you mean by corners? They aren't in my chipset i don't think if you mean those diagonal ones.

    *Two more screens*
    First one is the new toowoomba city.(That is the name of the city. Brotlov sort of nicked the idea from pokemon turquoise a hack that is discontinued) Second is that generic screen of the lab.

    P.S what do you mean by not match?
     

    Dream Illusionist

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  • I believe that the lab has two errors:

    1- The scientist event is far to the side. You should put Custom movings, or enlarge the lower part of the lab a bit.

    2-The carpet leaves the floor to the border. You should edit the tiles to make the carpet only inside the lab, or not use the carpet at all.

    besides that, and first map being a little empty, it's nice ;)

    Good luck with this.
     

    Innocence

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  • Carpet?......

    Ummm....Excouse me if i'm incorrect, but there is no carpet! Just tiled floor.
    And as for the aide, What do you mean too far to the side. And i have allready got custom movement on him.

    P.S has anyone got a decent route chipset?
     

    Ninja Tree

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    Oak's place is a bit plain...add a couple more computers and researchers. Game looks like its coming along great.
     
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