OK, this...sucks. No offense Zaiku, I know you're in my RP, and yay I got Pokemon XD, but this has to be expanded. Let's see what your grades are:
1.Grammar
Terrible. You can't spell very well at all. And don't try making the excuse "Oh, I'm so terrible at typing" because there's Mavis Beacon CDs for typing (which I think are very fun, so you shouldn't get bored), and you probably have a computer class in school. I don't even have school and see how well I type? I'm homeschooled ^0^ But you really need to capitalize, fix grammar, etc.
2.Plot
Now...this is odd. OK, so this is 25 years after Wes and Rui beat Evice and the whole criminal indicate Cipher. OK, I got that. But what if the others don't? There are some people who have no idea what Cipher, Wes, Rui, etc. are. And don't say "Well then, they shouldn't join this RP" because what if they want to join really badly, but have no idea what you are talking about? You need to expand. As well, Ash shouldn't have a lv.100 Pikachu. First of all, there's no levels in the show, so we wouldn't know whether or not it's lv.2 or lv.88 by Pokemon: Advanced Battle. So you should leave that part out. Secondly, how would this...person...capture something that was so darn powerful? Surely it would have burnt his legs or arms off before he was captured, and Ash would have sent out his strongest Pokemon (i.e. Charizard, Blastoise, Venusaur, Espeon, etc.) before he would have let Pikachu be handed over to Cipher.
Also, if Michael had beaten Shadow Lugia/captured him, Greevil's son wouldn't have tried again, beacuse he would fear that the next Shadow plan would turn out terrible. He would know that there was no way that he could make another Shadow Lugia type Pokemon, and that he would eventually be beaten in the end. I mean, Greevil's sitting there in jail and his little son is on the bench next to him and he opens his photo album and points to a picture that has Shadow Lugia getting captured (how he got the picture is a mystery to me ^_^). He says to Ardos, "Look son, this is how I got defeated. So I don't ever want you to try making Shadow Pokemon, or you'll be defeated like me." Then Ardos goes off and creates more Shadow Pokemon? I don't think so.
3.Signup
If you had Jirachi, it would be asleep. And then wake up ONE THOUSAND YEARS LATER. I doubt you'd be doing any serious battling with that thing. Because...Jirachi is just a suckish Pokemon, that's why. OK, it's cute, but come on! It's awake for a week. Then you die and move on, and Jirachi wakes up to find your great-great-great-great-great-grandaughter or grandson reminiscing about you, and it starts crying because it'll never see you again, and it's only awake for a week before it goes to sleep and misses a great relationship with your relatives...
Your appearance...well, it's OK, but you could expand more. Does the shirt have any writing on it at all? What about having a design on the jeans, not girly but some boyish logo? What brand are the sneakers? Does he also have six waving tentacles growing out of his chest? Really, you need to expand on this.
Your personality: seems power-playish to me. I mean, OK, he has endless courage. Does that mean that if he was faced with an eighty-foot towering mechanical spider, he would say "Ooh, this looks like fun. Let's go defeat the giant spider now shall we?" and then start punching it? And since he considers enemies fun, does that mean that if he saw a giant Shadow Rayquaza or whatever, and it was slowly killing one of the group, would he say "Ooh! FUN!" and start attacking it?
Your relatives: OK, so you're related to Micheal's family. Does that mean that Lily is your sis? Your mother? Your niece? Your cousin? Your UNCLE? Expand on this, like what shadowfuse did. His signup is terrible too, but at least he put that Lovrina was his little sister instead of saying lovrina and not having whether she was his mother, sister, etc.
Your hometown: So now Pokemon HQ Lab is a town, huh? Weird. Just say "Where were you born?" or whatever so that we can get this over with. And I don't see how anyone can live at a lab like that =P (not talking about you, talking about Micheal)
That's all I can find, except for the fact that you have no surname -_-
shadowfuse, I'm not the leader of the RP, but I would say expand your signup very much. At LEAST to match that of Zaiku's, because right now all we can see is that your name is Nick and you have an Altaria. That's all we can see, not even appearance.
Well, if this gets better, here's my signup:
Name: Tori Ishiyama (I don't even make up these last names, I type random letters on the keyboard and it comes out looking somewhat Japanese)
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Personality: Tori doesn't like to be disturbed, she'd rather sit in a tree all day. She doesn't really like people, but when she's in a good mood she'll be social and interact. However she's hardly ever in a good mood, so you'd have to be a miracle worker to make her smile. She likes reflecting on her life and looking up at the moon, as well as swimming and flying. She thinks flying is very fun, and usually goes off to do it.
Appearance: Tori has light blue hair that falls to her shoulders, and she has the pigtails that kinda stick up like Ratiosu's ears (Latios). Like Bianca, basically, with no hair ties but just sticking up. If you need a pic, I'll give you one (of Bianca, I can't draw Tori to save my life). She wears a completely white shirt, with nothing on it, and has Mudd Jeans with little pink flowers on the top left leg. She wears Saucony white sneakers that seem to have been run in a lot. She has two dragon wings on her back, coming to a sharp point at the end. She also has a long dragon tail, and the dragon wings really do fly her though they're just a costume she bought. From living with Absol her bones have turned somewhat more hollow than they were before, and allow her the power of flight. The tail just twitches a lot, and when she sits around the group she'll make it touch someone's shoulder, scaring them for fun. She has small fangs that she never uses.
Pokemon: Deoxys (although he likes to stay in superattack mode a lot)
Pokemon moves:
1. Psycho Boost
2. Extremespeed
3. Mist Ball
4. Flamethrower
Hometown: Agate Village (the greenish one with the Relic Stone)
Relatives: she is rumored that her mother is Rui, but no one knows for sure (yay, I get Big eyes!! =P)
OK, well, there's my EXTENSIVE signup. Make yours look similar to mine and this could stay open.
