Ex:DNA

This is just the ex's from the set, I haven't made a full card list, as of yet :

Name : Claydol ex (img : https://img136.exs.cx/img136/2876/claydolex1ym.gif )
HP : 150
Type : Psychic
Pokebody/power : None
Moves :

PP Cosmic Power
Does 10 damage to all of your opponents pokemon, on your next turn, prevent an amount of damage on claydol equal to the amount of damage inflicted on your opponents pokemon.

PPC Super Psy 50

Weakness : G
Resistance :
Retreat : CC



Name : Seviper ex (img : https://img136.exs.cx/img136/2531/seviperex5ut.gif )
HP : 100
Type : Grass
Pokebody/power : None
Moves :

GGG Lethal Sting 30
The defending pokemon is now poisoned, Put 3 damage counters on it between turns instead of 1.

GC Bite 40

Weakness : P
Resistance :
Retreat : C



Name : Zangoose ex
HP : 90
Type : Normal
Pokebody/power : Poson Resistance (Can't be poisoned)
Moves :

CC Slash 50

CCC Double Team 30
Zangoose cannot be hurt by any attack from stage 1 or stage 2 evolutions on the next turn.

Weakness : F
Resistance : P
Retreat :



Name : Jolteon ex
HP : 120
Type : Electric
Pokebody/power : Charge Voltage (Add 10 damage to each of jolteon ex's moves for every L energy attached to it.)
Moves :

TCC Thunder 30

TTTC Thunderbolt 90
Discard 2 basic energies attached to jolteon

Weakness : F
Resistance :
Retreat :


Name : Vaporeon ex
HP : 110
Type : Water
Pokebody/power : Acid Armour (Each turn you may flip 2 coins, if both are heads, Vaporeon ex may not be affected by any effects of attacks, including damage done to it by your opponents active pokemon)
Moves :

W Bubblebeam 30

WWW Hydro Pump 60+
Does 60 damage plus 10 more damage for each W energy attached to Vaporeon.

Weakness : E
Resistance :
Retreat : C


Name : Flareon Ex
HP : 100
Type : Fire
Pokebody/power : Furnace (All energy attached to flareon ex counts as F energy)
Moves :

F Ember 30

FFF Fire Blast 150
Discard 2 F energy attached to Flareon ex

Weakness : W
Resistance : G
Retreat : CC


Name : Breloom ex
HP : 160
Type : Grass
Pokebody/power : Trip Up (If an attack does damage equal to more than half of Brelooms remaining hp, then you may place 3 damage counters on the Opponents active pokemon)
Moves :

F Mach Punch 20

GG Mega Drain 40
Remove 4 damage counters from Breloom ex

FFFG Root Punch 120
Place 2 damage counters on Breloom ex.

Weakness : P
Resistance : E
Retreat : C

Name : Grumpig ex (img : https://img30.exs.cx/img30/9795/newultimetgrumpigex2rf.jpg )
HP : 100
Type : Psychic
Pokebody/power : Damage Control (see card)
Moves : (see card)
Weakness : G
Resistance :
Retreat : CC

Grumpig doesn't come up.

Firemaker said:

Grumpig doesn't come up.

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Edited, please give feedback on these :)

Added 2 new cards! Claydol ex and Seviper ex.

All are great, but on the Claydol, u put a sentence twice in a row.

Claydol ex repeats a setence at Cosmic Power, and Seviper ex energy positioning is just wrong... And Lethal Sting description should be: "The Defending Pok?mon is now Poisoned. Put 3 damage counters on it between turns, instead of 1. (Even if the Defending Pok?mon was already Poisoned.)"

Anyway, 5/10

Text placement is pretty off on the two of them. The Seviper image is kinda just cut and pasted in. The Claydol is pretty awesome save the text fudging.
Not bad/awesome

ummm......the seviper and grumpig are wrong.....the energy placement is way off

Just don't like them!!!!

Since everybody has pointed errors, I'm too lazy to point them again!

Sorry if I sound rude...But....Not very good...I believe you can do better!

Artwork - 6/10
Attacks - 5/10
HP - 8/10 (Very good.)
Retreat costs - 8/10
Resistance - 8/10 (Jolteon is Resistant to Metal ;))
Weakness - 8/10
Set symbol - 0/10 (I beleive this is important)
Card number - 0/10 (I also believe this is important)
Illistartor name - 0/10 ( Looks like you didn't bother with that...It's also important! With out it, some one can claim the cards as their own!!)
Creativity - 10/10 (You're very creative! I like that.)

Over all rating - 6/10 (Creatve, yet, somethings are missing, that really make up a good fake card! Keep up the good work, though!)

In all - 59/110 D+ You can do better than that! Work hard!! Believe in yourself!!

Would love to see my favorite of those - Jolteon EX!!

Indeed. Add Illus. to Seviper please, if you don't know the illustrator, don't use the art. Thats my motto. If you don't give them credit, you are technically "stealing" there art. Please put the illus. immediately.

Overall: 7/10 ~ Mistakes have been pointed out and such.

Don't save them as GIF's next time. Save them as JPEG's or PNG's.

9.10 for the cards you have made, that's some very good work, I hope you make more.:)

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Tch. Well that's a lotta work, I must commend ya for it. 10/10 ^_^

on Grumpig- you always have the attacks in energy order, effect text looks bold
on Seviper ex- illus. and placement has been menchuned.
on Claydol ex- the name isn't 1 pixel to the right, the reatreat is over to the left by a few pixels, the picture overlaps the stage one circle, and finally the illus hasn't been moved 5 pixels left.
The ideas
the ideas are over all very good. Just use the symbole sheet!

Claydoll 8/10
I like ilustaction but the first attack is kinda weird...
Seviper 6/10
Ilustraction isn't so good and an attack like that can't exist...
Crumpig 5/10
Poor illus and generally I don't like the card...