Sunlight

Started by Dizzy August 7th, 2004 3:22 PM
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Dizzy

My Father is a Baron!

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Sunlight

Sunlight is the story of a girl named Orange, who is from Cinnabar Island. One day, she leaves Cinnabar to go to Pallet Town, to see the Professor. When she gets their, shes interrupted by a rude girl, Purple, who is the granddaughter of Professor Oak. Upon coming to Pallet, she runs into an evil Organization, Team Rocket, of course, who is searching for clues on how to gather all three Legendary Birds in their possession again. Lets take a look at Oranges Journey through this wondrous land of Kanto.


Prologue Bienvenue



It was a very sunny day on Cinnabar Island. Cinnabar Island. The Island is home to more than 5000 people, it was also declared an active volcano. Most people on Cinnabar Island leave home to go see the Professors of the world when they reach certain ages, the others study in the Cinnabar Laboratory School. The Town was very small, and was able to support such a population. Everyone looked up to Blaine, the Mayor and Gym Leader of the Island, but he had a very dark past, my sources didnt say what it was, but one day I want to find out. Thank you. A young girl said, holding a paper labeledReport on Cinnabar Island.

Very good, Orange! This work deserves an A+! A Woman, her teacher declared. Really, do you think its that good? The Young girl known as Orange replied. This is very good work, dont you agree, class? The teacher stated. Yes Miss Ruby. The class replied monotonously. I thought it was good, anyway The teacher went on. Orange, I think youd be worthy of seeing the Professor! He just came back from Johto a few days ago, and is in his lab in Pallet Town. You should go see him soon. The teacher demanded. How can I? I dont know how Ill ever get there, you know. Lately, my family has been going through major hardships, and I can barely pay tuition for schooling. Orange replied to the Teacher. Well, I can help you out, all you have to do is take the boat to Pallet and youre all set! It leaves tomorrow morning, Saturday, the Fifth. Her teacher exclaimed. Although the boat isnt free, Im sure you can come up with the money since its a very meager price, If notI could always help you pay it. She offered. That would be wonderful, I really appreciate all this! Orange gratifying stated. I just have to say something, though, if you plan on going to the Professor, that means that youll have to fulfill the requirements of a Pokmon Trainer, and that means battling intimidating and terrifyingly strong trainersIm sure you can do it though, I have faith in you! Her teacher supported her by saying.


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Act I: Sunny Days, Sunny Ways?
Can Orange carry out what she was planning to do without messing up?


The morning light from the sun shone all over the island, bathing all the buildings in a wonderful glow. The sun just hung in the sky like a golden pokball sitting on top of a League Championship trophy. People were already up and ready on the Island, and the weather on the island was perfect. The sun shone brightly on the roofs of the houses of Cinnabar.

Welcome to Pokmon Talk! With Professor Oak A TV reporter finished saying on TV. Today we are going to interview Fuschia Citys newest Gym leader! Janine! Professor Oak added. How are you doing today? The report included. Im very good, thank you. Being a Gym Leader is harder than it looks, its a very fun profession, My father left the gym in my possession just a few years ago. Janine said to Professor Oak.

Orange turns her TV off, looking at the clock. 5:58AM she said, sighing and getting up. I really should hurry, the boat leaves at 6:30. If Im late Ill have to wait a whole week and Im really not for that. She continued. She opens her closet, and likely, her favorite color isnt orange but Pink. She wears her long, orange hair straight, and sports a pink skirt with a white Clefairy printed track-jacket. She makes her way down the stairs of her small home, running out the door being stopped by a man with brown hair, who is tall, and holding something for our Orange.

Hey kiddo, youre all ready for this big day? The Man said to her. Ready as Ill ever be, Dad. Orange nervously said to her father. Thats great, do you want me to drive you to Cinnabar Pier? Or do you think you can make it there, because if you think youre gunna be late, let me just drive you. Her father offered. No, No, I think Ill be just fine, I need a little fresh air anyway, Ill see you soon Dad. She said as if in a hurry, kissing her father on the cheek and making her way out the door.

Well I really have to be there so I should just run! She said, running down towards the cape, but again, being stopped by someone. Orange! You werent even going to say bye to me, huh? A Girl with eyes as blue as the sea and hair as gold as the sun hanging over Cinnabar. Diamond, I was just going to go see you, really I was! She said, quickly trying to make her way to the pier. Uh-huh, sure, I just wanted to give you this before you left! Diamond said, flipping her hair and handing something, a small blue wristwatch-like device. You see, that there is the 2005 Model of the Pokmon Gear! They brought it back since the older models seemed to malfunction a lot. She said giving her the advice. Awww, Orange I really hope you come back soon! How about a hug? Diamond said, hugging her best friend. D (Oranges special Nickname for Diamond) Ill really be back before you know it! I promise! Orange said consoling her friend. Thank you so much for everything, D, Ill make sure to call you as soon as I get there! Now I have to go, I cant afford to miss the boat! Orange said running off, leaving her friend.
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May I see your ticket, miss? A man wearing a sailor outfit with red (like the color of cinnabar) trim. Here you go! Orange said, handing the boarding pass to the sailor. Perfect, please, step right in, for we shall make our departure shortly. Thank you for sailing Le Cinnabar please enjoy your passage. The sailor said, directing her inside.

As Orange walked on the walk to the ship, she looked at the ferry, a brand new, shining white boat, with large blue letters that read Le Cinnabar, there were already people on the boat, socializing and looking over at the horizon. The gentle breeze of the sea caressed her face, as she looked down, seeing schools of Goldeen, and Seaking swimming.

Please take your seats, for the ferry will discharge towards Pallet! A man with a rugged beard said. Orange walks around after the captain says its all right to move. Peering through the windows, she sees many Water-Type Pokmon, ready for catching, but then she also sees a black submarine, with a Red R in the middle. I wonder what that could be? She said, looking carefully through the window. She looks down at the sea, and sees three people in water-suits, taking Pokmon by nets. I wonder what they are doing She said, looking at the people in uniform. The Three people scurry with the netted Pokmon into the Submarine, and make their way. She then looks out through another window, and sees land. Pallet Town was a small town, being home to only a few hundred people, it was mainly famous for Professor Oaks research lab, which was located at the end of town. Will everyone please take their seats once more and wait until our boat comes to a complete stop! Once this has been achieved, please exit to your right, thank you for choosing Le Cinnabar Travels! The Captain directed once more.

As Orange made her exit, she looked over at the town, it seemed to be in the midst of a parade, and Professor Oak in the center, waving to the people of Pallet. Look theres the professor! a little girl said, running towards the crowd of people. Ahhh, the professor, I must see him! I should go to the lab and wait for him there. Orange said to herself, looking around for a clear street to the lab. As Orange walked to the Lab, a rude girl bumped her into with Purple hair in a pony-tail. Hey! Watch where youre going! The girl meanly stated. Well, if you didnt bump into me Orange replied. I dont feel like fighting, really. My names Purple, glad to grace you. Purple said, as if she was better than Orange. Mines is Orange, and I guess Im also glad to make youre acquaintance. Orange replied, with a friendly look. Are you here to see Professor Oak? Purpled asked.

Yes, actually I am, how about you? Orange stated, with a haughty remark. Well, hes my grandfather, of course Id be here to see him. Im from Fuschia City, but I came to Pallet because today the Professor is giving away Pokmon to starting trainers, so I decided to come get one and see my grandfather at the same time. Purple explained to Orange, Cool, Im from Cinnabar Island, and I took the ferry to here so I could speak with the ProfessorI had no idea he was giving Pokmon to starting trainers Orange explained to Purple. Well, do you want to walk to my Grandfathers lab? Purple offered, holding out her hand. Sure, that would be great! Orange said, shaking Purples hand.

So, like, how old are you? Purple asked. Im 14! How old are you? Orange replied. Im 14, too! Thats so freaky. Purple answered back. What do you like to do for fun? Orange asked, looking around at the scenery. Wellback in Fuschia, we had the Safari Zone, my Older Brother, Green always took me there, also, Im a beach-brat so I would always go to Fuschia beach and watch the Surfing Contests! Purple exclaimed. Wow, me too, on the beach thing I mean. Orange replied.

As the two took their walk, they went up a hill, and around a spiral staircase that led up to the Professors lab. In the moment that they stood at the door, an elderly man, with hair the color of off-white yelled to Purple. Purple-dearest! He said. Grandfather! Purple replied. How have you been, oh have you brought a friend along? Oak replied to Purple, looking at Orange. Well, sorta, I just met her, Grandfather meet Purple said, but was interrupted by Orange. Orange! My name is Orange, and Im from Cinnabar Island. Orange rudely-but-innocently put in. Ahh Yes, you are the one Professor Ruby informed me about, how are you Orange. Professor Oak explained. Im fine thank you! Orange replied. Why dont you girls come in and well pick the Pokmon you both would like. Professor Oak offered.

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Wow! There are so many Pokballs in here, Professor what do you do with them all? Orange asked. Well, I study them, thank you, it is quite a collection isnt it? The most basic I have over on that table, lets go and see them. The Professor pointed out, walking over to a table with three shiny brand new Pokballs. I wonder what are in these Pokballs? Purple asked, looking over at the table. Underneath each of the Pokballs was a data report of the Pokmon. Orange, you can go first, please go ahead. The professor offered.

Orange walks over to the table, and picks up the Second Pokball. This one could be a very good choice, open it! Professor Oak said to her. Pokball Go! Orange commanded as she threw the sphere to the floor, in a bright green light the shape to form and revealed to be a plant-animal combo, with a very charming look, it sported a bulb on its back. It looked around for a place to sit, and it finally called out Bulbasaur! Ohhh thats so cute, I think I want this one! Orange said to the Professor. Very well, this will be your very own Bulbasaur! The Professor replied to Orange, handing her a Pokball like she had in her hand, but with a special green top. Purple, please proceed. The Professor directed to Purple. Alright, then I want this one! Purple said, going straight for the very first Pokball. Go on Purple, open it! Her Grandfather commanded. Go! Pokball! Purple exclaimed throwing the bright sphere down. In a fiery glow, the aura took its shape as a small lizard with a flare at the tip of its tail. Its eyes were blue, and its skin was bright orange, it screamed out in a passion Charmander! Hey this is exactly what Green had when he left home, I like this Pokmon! Purple said. Well, you know why I have all three of these Pokmon? Because they are the children of the Pokmon the three great heroes of Pallet left home with a while ago! Professor Oak explained. Thats wonderful, I cant wait to show my father back in Cinnabar! Orange replied. Well thank you both for stopping by, and I hope you both have a wonderful time with your brand new Pokmon! Professor Oak replied, looking at his watch. Orange makes her way out the lab, when she is stopped by Purple. Hey Orange, wanna check out my Pokmon in a battle, Im totally sure I wont lose! Purple replied. I thought youd never ask! Orange answered.

Go! Charmander! Purpled commanded. Go Bulbasaur! Orange directed. They threw their Pokballs down at the same exact time, and in a foggish mist, came out two creatures, ready for battle. Charmander! Scratch attack! Purple demanded. The small lizard ran towards the plant-like animal baring only its claws, it pulled back and unleashed a super-charged scratch attack, damaging the Grass-Type Pokmon. Two can play at that! Give it your Tackle, Bulbasaur! Orange commanded. The Bulbasaur hurled itself towards the lizard, as it felled upon the creature, Charmander became dizzy and fell to the ground. Looks like I have the upper-hand in this battle, huh Purple? Orange yelled out to purple. NO! CharmanderTail Whip! Lets see how your Bulbasaur fares when Charmander here lowers its defenses! Purple replied back to Orange. The lizard shook its tail, while the Bulbasaur stared in awe its defenses fell. Bulbasaur dont look at that tail! Orange commanded to Bulbsaur. Bulbasaur stopped looking and awaited its next command. Give it another Tackle attack! Orange demanded. Bulbasaur, once again threw its self towards the lizard, assuring the Charmander a complete knock-out. Aww man, Charmander, return! Purple exclaimed, holding out the bright orange pokball. Good job, Bulbasuar, come on back! Orange commanded.

Wait! I forgot to give you two the 2005 Models of the Pokdex! The professor said, handing them both small red devices. Please, both of you take care! The Professor said, waving to both of the girls. Well, where are you bound to, Orange? Purple asked Orange. Im going to go back home, but first I have to call my father. What about you? Orange replied. Im going to find the first Pokmon Gym here, I want to compete in the Pokmon League. Purple replied. Thats right! Now that I have a Pokmon I can compete for badges and battle other trainers! Orange said. See you soon, Orange, I have to get going. Purple said. Bye Purple, see you really soon I hope! Orange replied.
Purple walked to the north, while Orange went back south to the Ferry station.


Next Act: Wealth Beyond Measure (II)
What lies instore for Orange? Things can change so fast, but really, how fast can it change?


[C] I made all these pictures, the story and everything else is 100% mines including ideas.
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I love the pictures you added, it's a nice change of pace. You're fanfic is really good, and I enjoyed the names you gave the characters. Diamond, Orange, and Purple are all names I would have never thought to use as Human names. (Probably because i know a cat who's name is Diamond, but that's another story...)

As has been stated, it's good to have a totally blank line between all paragraphs, including ones in dialogue.

Please keep up the good work!
To many, a Mew is but a a phantom, a legend dissapearing into thin air. For now, so too must I be. Right now, I am indeed, a phantom.

Dizzy

My Father is a Baron!

Age 33
Formentera, Espana
Seen August 26th, 2005
Posted August 26th, 2005
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19.7 Years
Thank you all for you're lovely reviews, I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, and I'll do the pictures a little later.
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Dizzy

My Father is a Baron!

Age 33
Formentera, Espana
Seen August 26th, 2005
Posted August 26th, 2005
6,377 posts
19.7 Years
Sorry for the double post and for not updating, I will be putting Act II up by tonight, if the pictures are done, and I'm currently writing Act III if that makes you a little happy. I know this fan-fic can't compare with anything The Great Oni writes but I'm trying ^_^;;.
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Dizzy

My Father is a Baron!

Age 33
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Seen August 26th, 2005
Posted August 26th, 2005
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VERY LIKELY that'll be why ;p I mean everyone have read act 1 already =)
Grammar corrections by Dizzy.

VERY LIKELY that'll be why ;p I mean everyone has read Act I already =)
Has over Had. When addressing an Act, always use Roman Numerals. Act just belongs capitalized.

...I wasn't being too mean now was I?
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It's very good and nice story! It's very great!
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