dream's-epilogue
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[FONT="](Finally, here it is; the chronicles of Dream's Epilogue, Dark Pikachu and Commanding Officer of Black Hole. I've been itching to do something like this for awhile. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I do writing it...)
[FONT="]First [/FONT]of all, a note. I am not writing this to chronicle Black Hole; that is a task that will deal with itself. Nor am I writing this to brag of my own exploits; my accomplishments are minor and inconsequential in the eyes of a single world, much less two.
I am writing this to share a story. A story of a young nation, a brilliant mastermind, a bratty genius, a slithery fool, and a mindless brute. A story of a loner, an outcast in his own world, who finally found a purpose, and even a kind of home. A story of great ambition, of a grand dream to bring not only one world, but ALL worlds under a single banner, and usher in an era of unchallenged peace. A story of Black Hole, the soldiers and officers who form it, and one tiny, insignificant mouse who ended up a commander in the greatest army of all time.
Now, where to begin? The best place would be, I suppose, the first time I learned of Black Hole. An ordinary day, where a chance encounter and a subsequent abduction transformed my life and gave me purpose.
Why, you ask, do I not start at the beginning? Simple; because there is no story to tell there. I was unhappy in the wild, ended up in the hands of a trainer, quickly grew tired of that, and ran from trainer to trainer, until the day in question. There are no tales there; I cannot recall the names of those trainers, the others who fought alongside me, or whom we fought. The only thing that had any meaning to me was the fighting, and even that was pointless and ungainful. In all honesty, I was perfectly content with being taken from that world.
Now, where was I? Oh, yes. Time to begin...
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"Damn, it's hot..."
Jared tore off his helmet, savoring the cooling breeze that swept his brow. He lifted a thick arm and wiped a line of sweat from his face, and slung it upon the grass. The sun was beating down, and the summer air was thick enough to cut with a knife. Thin patchs of flowers sprung up from the earth in rare groves.
His partner walked alongside him, encased in an identical uniform. The suit's thick padding was made to stop high-impact shells but was not, unfortunately, made for comfort. The suit retained heat like a sauna; in particularly hot climates, it was unbearable. Or rather, it would be, if not for the suit's built-in air conditioning system. Every suit came with one standard-equipped. Jared's partner had a functional one. Jared himself was not so lucky.
The man walked along casually, and gave a cheery answer.
"Really? I hadn't noticed. Actually, I think it's pretty nice out today, don't you?"
Jared paused for a moment to shoot his squadmate a searing look. "You're an ass, you know that?"
"Thank you. I try."
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The night before, I had made yet another flight from yet another nameless trainer. This one was perhaps more diligent than the others; he called out search parties to look for me once he realized I was gone. From what I learned later, the poor fool had actually deluded himself into thinking I'd been kidnapped. Rather ironic, actually, considering the events of the following days.
In no mood for another disastrous confrontation, I'd made every effort to get away before I was located. It was late, and this left me quite exhausted; once I was confident I was far enough away, I decided to rest for awhile. I found myself in a forest, and decided to take a nap under a nearby tree. I laid down and soon fell asleep...
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Jared wiped yet another pool of sweat from his face; it must've been his fourth one in fifteen minutes. The summers here were sweltering, and the suit wasn't helping much.
He'd been thinking of asking, but hesitated. Now, encouraged by the thought of another patrol in this heat, he did.
"Hey, can I ask you something?"
"Eh?"
"I don't suppose...could you loan me some money? Enough to get the suit's A/C fixed?"
"What're you, nuts?! Just ask the techs."
The techs were in charge of maintaining the various machines and hardware, and were notoriously underpaid. They'd look for any excuse to part a man and his money. A desperate man, even more so.
"Do I look stupid to you?"
"Well, actually..."
"Answer, and you're dead."
"Yeah, yeah...whatever."
"..."
"..."
"You're still an ass."
"I know."
Some time passed. Then,
"Hey, look at that."
Jared turned to follow his squadmate's finger. He saw what looked like some sort of mutant rat, lying underneath a tall tree.
The two had never encountered anything like it before. Although, truth be told, they'd only been on this planet for a matter of weeks now, and save for the occasional patrol, had never ventured outside of HQ.
His partner gave him a nudge.
"Go poke it."
"WHAT?! Are you insane?! I have no idea what that thing is! What if it's, I dunno, poisonous or something?!"
"Only one way to find out, right?"
"Dude, there's no way I'm going to poke that thing."
"Alright, then; how about this. I'll agree to pay for your A/C repair if you do."
"Hey, you serious?"
"BUT, it has to be a hard poke. Enough to wake it up."
"I repeat: you're crazy. Not gonna happen."
"Fine. Have fun boiling out here again next patrol."
He waited a few seconds, then,
"Fine. I'll do it." Jared selected a long stick from a nearby pile. "If I die, you're paying for my funeral."
He approached the small creature carefully, eying it. It had yellow fur, and a bizarre-looking tail; there was something odd about it, but it was partially hidden beneath the creature, so he couldn't quite place it. It had two sharp ears with black tips, and brown patches along its back.
He was close enough now.[/FONT][FONT="] He lifted the stick and gave the creature a soft jab in the back. It twitched, and he instinctively recoiled. Once he was sure it was safe, he reached forward and gave it another jab, this one much sharper...
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[FONT="]I woke to a sharp poke in the back. At first, I thought it my imagination, and went back to sleep. A few moments later, however, another, sharper poke came. This one actually stung.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I didn't really feel like moving, so I simply directed a strong charge along my back to the source of the jab. I heard a loud yelp behind me...[/FONT]
[FONT="]----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner stared in awe. One moment, his squadmate was innocently jabbing a tiny rat, the next, he's lit up like a fireworks display. He gave a sharp cry of pain, and a few moments later, he was hurled back onto the ground. Steam lazily curled up from him. He was twitching slightly.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner's soldier instinct took over. Whatever this thing was, it was clearly dangerous. It had to be eliminated. He ran over and leveled his gun at the creature...[/FONT]
[FONT="]-----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]I felt a sudden sense of danger, and a prickle of annoyance; I was still tired and lazy, and really didn't want to deal with anything just yet. But I'd learned long ago not to ignore these kinds of feelings.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I groggily climbed to my feet, and turned, rubbing one eye with a paw. I froze.[/FONT]
[FONT="]At that time, I honestly didn't know what to think of the bizarre...thing standing in front of me. I suppose it reminded me of a cheap space-monster flick; I felt a ridiculous urge to say "take me to your leader!" though I realized that it probably wouldn't understand me anyway.[/FONT]
[FONT="]But, it wasn't the thing's outfit that made me freeze. It was the strange, horizontal bar attacked to it's right arm. I might not've known what it was, save for that telltale barrel at the end...[/FONT]
[FONT="]-----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner had his gun trained on the creature, but he still felt a cold sweat as it slowly got up and turned to look at him.[/FONT]
[FONT="]It had a round, rodent-like face with glossy black eyes and two bright-red cheeks. Now that it was standing, he could see the tail in it's entirety; it was shaped like a lightning bolt. A pretty obvious sign, but fat lot of good it did them now.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Jared had regained consciousness, and was cursing.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Sonova...bastard shocked me!"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"You alright?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Other than the...shooting pain and...partial numbness, yeah...I'm fine. Thanks for...the concern..."[/FONT]
"Hey, take it easy. I got my gun on it. It moves, it dies. S'no threat anymore."
Jared climbed awkwardly to his feet. He panted heavily, and managed to take a good look at the creature. He eyes moved to the tail.
"Son of a...would've been...good to know before..."
He managed to level his gun...
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Two on one. I didn't like those odds. Two with guns on one, I liked those even less.
In all honesty, I'd gotten quite fast in my training, but not quite fast enough to outrun bullets. I'd really hoped to avoid a fight, but it looked like the only way out of this particular situation...
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(It's late now. I'm going to put up the next part tomorrow.
No, I'm not done with LDA. I'm going to alternate between that and this.
Like before, I'm open to criticism. Just keep it to a flame-minimum.
I know it's slow for right now, but this is still exposition. Trust me, it gets better shortly. After all, I get to meet Lash for the first time soon...)
[/FONT]
[FONT="]First [/FONT]of all, a note. I am not writing this to chronicle Black Hole; that is a task that will deal with itself. Nor am I writing this to brag of my own exploits; my accomplishments are minor and inconsequential in the eyes of a single world, much less two.
I am writing this to share a story. A story of a young nation, a brilliant mastermind, a bratty genius, a slithery fool, and a mindless brute. A story of a loner, an outcast in his own world, who finally found a purpose, and even a kind of home. A story of great ambition, of a grand dream to bring not only one world, but ALL worlds under a single banner, and usher in an era of unchallenged peace. A story of Black Hole, the soldiers and officers who form it, and one tiny, insignificant mouse who ended up a commander in the greatest army of all time.
Now, where to begin? The best place would be, I suppose, the first time I learned of Black Hole. An ordinary day, where a chance encounter and a subsequent abduction transformed my life and gave me purpose.
Why, you ask, do I not start at the beginning? Simple; because there is no story to tell there. I was unhappy in the wild, ended up in the hands of a trainer, quickly grew tired of that, and ran from trainer to trainer, until the day in question. There are no tales there; I cannot recall the names of those trainers, the others who fought alongside me, or whom we fought. The only thing that had any meaning to me was the fighting, and even that was pointless and ungainful. In all honesty, I was perfectly content with being taken from that world.
Now, where was I? Oh, yes. Time to begin...
-----------------------
"Damn, it's hot..."
Jared tore off his helmet, savoring the cooling breeze that swept his brow. He lifted a thick arm and wiped a line of sweat from his face, and slung it upon the grass. The sun was beating down, and the summer air was thick enough to cut with a knife. Thin patchs of flowers sprung up from the earth in rare groves.
His partner walked alongside him, encased in an identical uniform. The suit's thick padding was made to stop high-impact shells but was not, unfortunately, made for comfort. The suit retained heat like a sauna; in particularly hot climates, it was unbearable. Or rather, it would be, if not for the suit's built-in air conditioning system. Every suit came with one standard-equipped. Jared's partner had a functional one. Jared himself was not so lucky.
The man walked along casually, and gave a cheery answer.
"Really? I hadn't noticed. Actually, I think it's pretty nice out today, don't you?"
Jared paused for a moment to shoot his squadmate a searing look. "You're an ass, you know that?"
"Thank you. I try."
------------------
The night before, I had made yet another flight from yet another nameless trainer. This one was perhaps more diligent than the others; he called out search parties to look for me once he realized I was gone. From what I learned later, the poor fool had actually deluded himself into thinking I'd been kidnapped. Rather ironic, actually, considering the events of the following days.
In no mood for another disastrous confrontation, I'd made every effort to get away before I was located. It was late, and this left me quite exhausted; once I was confident I was far enough away, I decided to rest for awhile. I found myself in a forest, and decided to take a nap under a nearby tree. I laid down and soon fell asleep...
------------------
Jared wiped yet another pool of sweat from his face; it must've been his fourth one in fifteen minutes. The summers here were sweltering, and the suit wasn't helping much.
He'd been thinking of asking, but hesitated. Now, encouraged by the thought of another patrol in this heat, he did.
"Hey, can I ask you something?"
"Eh?"
"I don't suppose...could you loan me some money? Enough to get the suit's A/C fixed?"
"What're you, nuts?! Just ask the techs."
The techs were in charge of maintaining the various machines and hardware, and were notoriously underpaid. They'd look for any excuse to part a man and his money. A desperate man, even more so.
"Do I look stupid to you?"
"Well, actually..."
"Answer, and you're dead."
"Yeah, yeah...whatever."
"..."
"..."
"You're still an ass."
"I know."
Some time passed. Then,
"Hey, look at that."
Jared turned to follow his squadmate's finger. He saw what looked like some sort of mutant rat, lying underneath a tall tree.
The two had never encountered anything like it before. Although, truth be told, they'd only been on this planet for a matter of weeks now, and save for the occasional patrol, had never ventured outside of HQ.
His partner gave him a nudge.
"Go poke it."
"WHAT?! Are you insane?! I have no idea what that thing is! What if it's, I dunno, poisonous or something?!"
"Only one way to find out, right?"
"Dude, there's no way I'm going to poke that thing."
"Alright, then; how about this. I'll agree to pay for your A/C repair if you do."
"Hey, you serious?"
"BUT, it has to be a hard poke. Enough to wake it up."
"I repeat: you're crazy. Not gonna happen."
"Fine. Have fun boiling out here again next patrol."
He waited a few seconds, then,
"Fine. I'll do it." Jared selected a long stick from a nearby pile. "If I die, you're paying for my funeral."
He approached the small creature carefully, eying it. It had yellow fur, and a bizarre-looking tail; there was something odd about it, but it was partially hidden beneath the creature, so he couldn't quite place it. It had two sharp ears with black tips, and brown patches along its back.
He was close enough now.[/FONT][FONT="] He lifted the stick and gave the creature a soft jab in the back. It twitched, and he instinctively recoiled. Once he was sure it was safe, he reached forward and gave it another jab, this one much sharper...
[FONT="]----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]I woke to a sharp poke in the back. At first, I thought it my imagination, and went back to sleep. A few moments later, however, another, sharper poke came. This one actually stung.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I didn't really feel like moving, so I simply directed a strong charge along my back to the source of the jab. I heard a loud yelp behind me...[/FONT]
[FONT="]----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner stared in awe. One moment, his squadmate was innocently jabbing a tiny rat, the next, he's lit up like a fireworks display. He gave a sharp cry of pain, and a few moments later, he was hurled back onto the ground. Steam lazily curled up from him. He was twitching slightly.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner's soldier instinct took over. Whatever this thing was, it was clearly dangerous. It had to be eliminated. He ran over and leveled his gun at the creature...[/FONT]
[FONT="]-----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]I felt a sudden sense of danger, and a prickle of annoyance; I was still tired and lazy, and really didn't want to deal with anything just yet. But I'd learned long ago not to ignore these kinds of feelings.[/FONT]
[FONT="]I groggily climbed to my feet, and turned, rubbing one eye with a paw. I froze.[/FONT]
[FONT="]At that time, I honestly didn't know what to think of the bizarre...thing standing in front of me. I suppose it reminded me of a cheap space-monster flick; I felt a ridiculous urge to say "take me to your leader!" though I realized that it probably wouldn't understand me anyway.[/FONT]
[FONT="]But, it wasn't the thing's outfit that made me freeze. It was the strange, horizontal bar attacked to it's right arm. I might not've known what it was, save for that telltale barrel at the end...[/FONT]
[FONT="]-----------------[/FONT]
[FONT="]Conner had his gun trained on the creature, but he still felt a cold sweat as it slowly got up and turned to look at him.[/FONT]
[FONT="]It had a round, rodent-like face with glossy black eyes and two bright-red cheeks. Now that it was standing, he could see the tail in it's entirety; it was shaped like a lightning bolt. A pretty obvious sign, but fat lot of good it did them now.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Jared had regained consciousness, and was cursing.[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Sonova...bastard shocked me!"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"You alright?"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Other than the...shooting pain and...partial numbness, yeah...I'm fine. Thanks for...the concern..."[/FONT]
"Hey, take it easy. I got my gun on it. It moves, it dies. S'no threat anymore."
Jared climbed awkwardly to his feet. He panted heavily, and managed to take a good look at the creature. He eyes moved to the tail.
"Son of a...would've been...good to know before..."
He managed to level his gun...
------------------
Two on one. I didn't like those odds. Two with guns on one, I liked those even less.
In all honesty, I'd gotten quite fast in my training, but not quite fast enough to outrun bullets. I'd really hoped to avoid a fight, but it looked like the only way out of this particular situation...
****************************
(It's late now. I'm going to put up the next part tomorrow.
No, I'm not done with LDA. I'm going to alternate between that and this.
Like before, I'm open to criticism. Just keep it to a flame-minimum.
I know it's slow for right now, but this is still exposition. Trust me, it gets better shortly. After all, I get to meet Lash for the first time soon...)
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