Another Way of Battling

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    Another Way of Battling

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    He was ready. This year, he would be triumphant and claim the title of being a Pokemon Master. With all the harsh training that he had gone through with his Pokemon, nothing could stop him?

    He was invincible.

    He adjusted his limited edition red and white official Pokemon League cap, twitching his long, yellow, pointy ears. Six red and white spheres known as Pokeballs were safely attached to his belt, with all of its inhabitants eager to battle and win the title. As everything was ready, he walked out into the stadium?

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    ?And there he is folks! It?s Pikachu from Pallet Town!? applauded the announcer Meowth, who was up in the control tower, watching over the Pokemon stadium. His golden charm on his forehand glittered as the crowd roared. The stadium was full, with every seat in the dome occupied. Who didn?t want to take a look at the final showdown for this year?s Pokemon League?

    ?Pika pika!? replied Pikachu to the excited crowd. He waved to the audience with his short stubby hands. But soon Pikachu fixed his gaze upon the other side of the rectangular battlefield, waiting for his victim to come out into the field.

    ?Me-owth! And here we have a powerful Pokemon trainer all the way from Hoenn! Please welcome, Treecko!? exclaimed the announcer as the audience looked down at the dirt-floored battlefield. A trainer in green calmly walked out into the light, with a small twig in its mouth and hands crossed in front of him. His eyes were shut as he continued the short walk to the trainer?s assigned position in the field. He opened his yellow lizard eyes, and spat out his twig as he glared down at Pikachu, his opponent.

    ?Humph!? grunted Treecko as he wagged around his green tail in Pikachu?s direction, mocking his opponent. Pikachu retaliated by sticking out his tongue and doing a ?thumps down? sign with his hands? err or so it seemed to be a ?thumps down? sign as all four of Pikachu?s fingers looked identical anyway. Treecko started to insult his opponent, while Pikachu did the same.

    ?This is truly exciting folks! The trainers are even trashtalking to each other! This will be one exciting ---?

    ?Wobbaffet!!!? Meowth?s speech was soon interrupted as his sidekick Wobbuffet popped out of nowhere and screamed into the microphone. The interruption confused the crowd. Regardless, the trainers took a step back, and soon the crowd fell silent, waiting for the display of true Pokemon training skills soon to be demonstrated by two professional trainers. The battle looked very promising.

    And the battle started off as the trainer from Hoenn took out a Pokeball and threw it up high into the sky directly above him. As the ball was on its way down, the trainer jumped up and whacked the ball towards the battlefield with his tail in an elegant manner, earning a few ?wow? from the audience. Upon contact with the dirt-floor, the sphere opened and red energy was unleashed. A Pokemon appeared into the scene, wearing a green t-shirt with a pair of glasses that was horrible in taste of fashion. The Pokemon looked at Pikachu, and then turned his eyes away in an arrogant manner, as if battling Pikachu would be a waste of his time.

    ?And what a predictable move! Treecko chooses to lead off the battle with a Max, a Pokemon given as a starter for all trainers in Hoenn!? Meowth announced, with Wobbuffet popping out and shouting ?Wabbaffet!? against the microphone again. The announcer?s sidekick seemed to be agreeing with what Meowth had just said.

    Pikachu grinned as this was all within his prediction, and now he?ll prove Treecko that he wasn?t the only one with Hoenn starters. The trainer from Pallet reached down to his belt to take out a Pokeball, twisting his cap around backward on his head as he raised the Pokeball, and threw it to the battlefield with all his strength. Another Pokemon, wearing a red bandana with brown hair materialized before the crowd. The Pokemon got ready to battle, dusting off her red jacket and dark colored pants in the mean time.

    ?Pikachu uses a May, also a starter Pokemon from Hoenn! Me-owth this will be a display of power between two Pokemon from Hoenn!? declared Meowth from the control tower. But this time the audience could no longer hear irritating voices from Wobbuffet, as his mouth was duck tapped by the announcer who could no longer tolerate those annoying interruptions time after time.

    At the hand signal of her trainer, May took the initiative to begin the Pokemon match. She walked towards Max a bit, but then suddenly fell down to the floor on her knees. What could she be doing?

    ?Oh we?ve walked around for so long already! It has already been a whole hour! Can?t we go take a break now? I mean, look I?m just so tired, hungry and thirsty! We should go take something to eat and drink!? wailed May. Max began to take a few steps back, seeming to be confused at the situation, not knowing what to do.

    ?Amazing!? shouted Meowth. ?May?s signature move, Whine Attack, is working! Max is now confused!? Treecko who also realized this, looked worried. He took out Max?s Pokeball and stretched out his arm, but then after a few seconds, crossed his hands in front of him again.

    ?And Treecko decides to stick with Max! Let?s see if da Nerd Pokemon can break out of confusion!?

    Seizing this opportunity, Pikachu quickly ordered his May to attack Max to try to score a quick knockout. However, May just stood there, looking out at the endless sky, ignoring the commands.

    ?Now Pikachu pays the price of using a May in battle! May?s ability, Daydream, does not permit May to attack consecutively!? exclaimed Meowth, as the audience was shocked. May just stood there with her eyes gleaming, daydreaming. While May was being idle from her Daydream ability, Treecko?s Max had shook himself out of confusion! It looked like it was ready to battle once again.

    ?Oh May you?re just so stupid! You have never won a Pokemon battle without amazing luck! You?re such a loser!? said Max as he pointed at May, staring at her with accusing eyes. May was startled and horrified at the harsh comments. She stumbled backward and lost her balance, falling to the ground.

    ?There it is! The Put Down attack of the Insult Element! Looks like May was badly injured by that attack!? said Meowth, amazed at the attack?s power. Pikachu countered as he decided to use a Super Potion on his Pokemon. May?s health was restored. However, Treecko and his Pokemon kept up the pressure on Pikachu and May, as Max started talking to himself.

    ?It is obviously a grass type! Who doesn?t know that? ?I also know that it weighs exactly 18.7lbs being 2?07? tall! See, I know everything!? said Max as May stared at him at complete confusion. She tried her best to understand, but to no avail. Then her eyes started to turn into swirls and she was getting dizzy.

    ?Me-owth! And Max the Nerd Pokemon live up to his name with the ?Useless Facts? attack! Can May survive this one??

    Pikachu was worried as sweats rolled off his forehead and his red cheeks. He tried to call out to his Pokemon but the disorienting words from the Useless Facts attack clogged up May?s mind, making the command useless. Soon after, the female Pokemon fell over and collapsed.

    ?Pika!? said Pikachu; angry at how he lost the first round as he returned the fainted May. His opponent Treecko laughed at him as he put his twig back into his mouth.

    ?And the first round goes to Treecko! The Nerd Pokemon?s training is top-notch!? declared Meowth as the audience roared in approval. Then everyone looked at Pikachu to see what would he use to counter Max...



    To Be Continued =)
    Reviews and comments would be appreciated!
     
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    lol, very creative and I wouldn't have though of that. Pokemon using their trainers to battle. Very, very creative! XD I don't know why people read some other fanfics and not the good ones.. XP (If only you could've posted two chapters immediately so that I had a choice to put up as FF of the week...)
     
    Digi's Comments
    1. pretty original(considering the fact that no one dares do this XD)
    2. also very comedic...i was laughing thru the entire chapter...not...my parents r asleep XD
    3. Cant wait till next chapter
    4. Its against the law 2 insult a Mod's Fanfic XD
     
    Just as Pikachu stood there, thinking of a possible strategy to counter Max?s Useless Facts attack, Treecko made a decision that surprised the crowd. He recalled his Max even though it got the upper advantage. It seemed that the trainer wanted to preserve the Nerd Pokemon for later uses.

    ?And Max is recalled into his Pokeball! What are the trainers going to use?? exclaimed Meowth, with Wobbuffet trying his best to rip off the tape stuck on his mouth with his fingerless blue arms. The crowd chattered among each other, trying to figure out what Pokemon are coming up next. Could Treecko possibly use a Drew, a valuable Pokemon from his home region? Or perhaps Pikachu could use a Jhoto Pokemon, like? an Elm?

    But the guesses from the audience were wrong, as Treecko unleashed a strange looking Pokeball. Instead of the usual red and white sphere, this one was black and white, with a red ?R? printed on it. The strange Pokeball opened, and a blue haired Pokemon wearing a white uniform came out. A red ?R? was also printed on his uniform, just like the strange Pokeball. The Pokemon gave a small whimper as his green eyes blinked. It stood on all fours, getting ready to battle. Immediately recognizing the Pokemon, the crowd gasped in major surprise.

    ?Why? it?s a James, the incompetent Pokemon! This very common Pokemon from Kanto is always known for its inability to win matches! What a surprise folks. Perhaps the trainer from Hoenn isn?t so familiar with the Kanto region and the Kanto Pokemon after all!? said Meowth in surprise up in the control tower.

    Everyone stared at the green trainer questionably, yet Treecko wasn?t worried. He would prove to the world that he could handle Kanto Pokemon just as well, and what better ways to prove this but to win with the weakest Pokemon of all? With his new flawless strategy, his James would win the round along with many praises for his strategic plan that was never to be seen before. He did all the research possible about this Pokemon, and even captured it with the rare ?Rocket Ball? which he made using the ultra rare ?Rock-ricon.?

    ?Pika-ka-ka-ka!? laughed Pikachu as his face was turned to ?n_n.? Why was Treecko mocking his ability, or was he just going to give him a free win? His opponent just grunted again.

    ?Pika? chu!? shouted the boy from Pallet, as he threw out another strange ball that just looked like Treecko?s. A long red haired Pokemon who was also dressed in the same manner materialized, with her blue eyes filled with raging flame. The Pokemon gave a small screech upon entering the match.

    ?Why it?s a battle of the useless folks! It?s Jessie, James?s counterpart Pokem ? Wabbaffet! ? You get lost as Me-owth?s the one in charge here!? said the people up in the control tower. Seemed to the audience that Wobbuffet had freed himself.

    This indeed shocked the crowd, as Jessie was also a common sight Pokemon in the Kanto region. It was rumored that you can find either one of them depending on the color of the Pokedex. A trainer with the Red-Pokedex would only find Jessies, while the Blue counterpart Pokedex would find Jamess and not Jessies. One trainer must trade with another trainer with the other version of Trainer Card in order to truly catch them all? Then again a trainer could always buy another trainer card of the other color to catch them all themselves, only at a super expensive price along with the special ?link cable fee.? However, the evil organization called ?Team Gameshark? had special ways to find them both?

    The Jessie roared and terrified Treecko?s James, but Treecko wasn?t worried. Jessies were always known for their aggressive behaviors, hence the nickname ?Jessie the Belligerent.? Taming Jessies were always a difficult task for trainers despite of how common this Pokemon was in Kanto. Seemed like his opponent Pikachu had some nerves to be using this Pokemon. Treecko uncrossed his arms and pointed at Jessie, instructing his Pokemon to commence with their strategy.

    ?Oh Jessie please don?t kill me!? whimpered James as he gave out an uncanny whining voice that could not be described using onomatopoeias, with tears streaming out of his eyes as he hugged Jessie?s legs lying on the ground.

    ?James led off with a Beg Attack! It?s not like James knows much of any other attacks anyway! Let?s see what Pikachu is going to?Pikachu is snickering! He seems to know something that Treecko doesn?t know about!? gasped Meowth. The Jessie soon kicked James away from her feet, completely unaffected by the Beg Attack.

    ?Why this is incredible, me-owth! Jessie has a special immunity to her counterpart Pokemon!?

    Jessie immediately went on the offensive, and pull out a shovel. At an inhumane speed, it dug a huge hole in the battlefield and soon disappeared from sight.

    ?Amazing! It is da Dig attack folks! Meowth has never seen anything that can dig so quickly!? said Meowth, amazed once again. Jessie hid underground, waiting for the opportunity to strike. James and Treecko looked around, trying to find some signs of where that Jessie would be.

    ?Pika!?

    And suddenly there was a tremor as Jessie bursted out from the ground, giving James a direct blow. James flew into the air and crashed head first on to the ground. The blue haired Pokemon cried in pain as it struggled to the ground. Its trainer was worried that it was a one-hit knock out, but Treecko was relieved that James made it back up.

    It could wait no longer? he had to use the secret weapon, now.

    Treecko then whispered something into his Pokemon?s ear, flipping a few pages out of a blue book, occasionally pointing to some texts in the book. Pikachu and Jessie stared at them, confused at what they were doing. By some miraculous power, James was totally refreshed in spirit and went off to change into something else within a flash. It reappeared in the battlefield in a strange costume.

    ?I am the flame that burns brightest!? In the background, a strange machine hung James up by his costume?s collar. ?I am James the mighty Moltres! Ahaha, haha!? announced James as he flapped his hands like a flying firebird within his orange-red bird suit that covered him from head to toe. He was flying in circles (with the help of the strange machine of course.)

    ?James you?re outta your mind!? insulted Jessie as she was confused along with her trainer.

    ?James suddenly went through a power bonus! Its powers are rising! Whatever Treecko and his fortune-telling book said, it boosted James?s confidence to the max!? said Meowth. And then James suddenly threw out 3 small objects in a quick motion towards Jessie, using the attack Bottle Cap. Jessie ducked on the ground to dodge Bottle Cap as the projectile hit the empty air, except for slashing off a part of Jessie?s long curling hair.

    ?Ahh! My hair!!!? cried Jessie in shock, as she realized that half of her hair had been cut off. Pikachu seized this opportunity and shouted out that James was responsible.

    ?Why, you little? RRAAWWRR!!!? screeched the Jessie, as she let out a raging stream of fire into the air with anger. Her fists were unrolled to reveal sharp long nails, and started thrashing around. The scene was truly terrifying as the Pokemon went berserk. The belligerent Pokemon increased in size until she towered over the poor James who was crying in fright. Her blue eyes turned to red like the color of her lost hair, and her face turned dark.

    ?Pika Pikachu!? commanded Pikachu, as his Pokemon wasted no time and leapt up into the air, sharp claws crossed in front of her. In one single Slash attack, James was unhooked from the machine and fell into the ground. In pursuit, Jessie charged James and began clawing James?s face, shrieking in a terrible voice at the same time. The scene was brutal and terrifying. The audience covered their children?s eyes, as the children were horrified and some started crying. They could even hear ?Eee!!!? ?Ahh!!!? and ?Waabaa!!!? from the control tower, obviously that the announcer and his sidekick were also afraid. Before Treecko could even use a Super Potion, James had fainted on the spot.

    ?It stood no chance! The poor James stood no chance against those continuous Fury Swipes and Metal Claw attacks!? cried Meowth, as the match came to a draw? but this would be one long and frightening battle, as both trainers had 5 Pokemon left. Who would claim the title of being the next Pokemon Master??


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    Please read and review! ^^; Thank you for all of the readers' support and comments! Feel free to post out any flaws or criticism.

    *wonders if anyone can pick up every single allusions in the fanfic*
     
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    The moltres one was from teh episode with the fake day care center. The evil jessie because she lsot her hair was from when she caught Seviper. Those are the ones I found. That was pretty funny, epsecially since you used actual occurences in teh show to support what yo've written. :D
     
    That was hilarious!!! Good job on the funny attacks XD
     
    u know frostweaver u out did urself this time
    the fanfic was entertaining and kept u reading throughout its course thus far
    it was funny and highly original....

    Keep up the good work and IMO this is fanfic of the week nay the month..
     
    Ice demon said:
    u know frostweaver u out did urself this time
    the fanfic was entertaining and kept u reading throughout its course thus far
    it was funny and highly original....

    Keep up the good work and IMO this is fanfic of the week nay the month..

    Well it could have had if he could have had posted it a bit more earlier. XP

    And the fanfic that I placed there is my first fanfic that I placed as Fanfic of the week myself. My other two fanfic of the weeks were chosen by Shadow when I wasn't a mod yet... XP I made my own work as Fanfic of the week because I had no choice but when I finished stickying it, Frostweaver posted his story...
     
    And there was another Pokeball launched by Treecko from Hoenn, and the red-white sphere revealed the third Pokemon for this trainer. As the Pokemon dressed in a blue uniform and a similarly colored skirt, the Pokemon saluted her trainer.

    ?Yee! And the next Pokemon is an Officer Jenny, the police Pokemon! Treecko must be planning to use its type advantage in order to destroy Jessie! Will she survive Jessie?s rage??

    The crowd cheered and roared again as this round of the battle was about to begin. Officer Jenny got into a stance to be ready for battle, though the stance was uncanny due to the skirt limiting her movement. The police Pokemon placed her red eyes on the thrashing wild Pokemon.

    ?Pika! Pika!? ordered Pikachu as he pointed at the Officer Jenny with his small yellow paw. Even if he was at a type disadvantage, with Jessie?s attack boost the battle should be fine. However, his Pokemon just thrashed around and ran in circles. Pikachu was beginning to get worried, and once again tried the command yet it failed just like before.

    ?Pikachu pays the price of using a Pokemon whose level is too high! This is a lesson for all of you trainers out there that you shouldn?t raise a Pokemon?s level so high that it?s beyond your control!? screamed Meowth as Wobbuffet popped up from behind and shouted his name into the microphone again.

    Using this precious time, Officer Jenny charged up forward despite of the potential danger of being clawed by Jessie, and used her silvery attached weapon and tied up Jessie?s hands, disabling her movement.

    ?Me-owth! And Treecko even has the rare item ?Silver Cuff? for his Pokemon! The rare item can double Officer Jenny?s attack power to a sky-high new level! And now that Jessie is even tied up by Officer Jenny?s special move Arrest, Jessie won?t be able to use any counterattack with her fierce claws!?

    Pikachu knew that Jessie had come to an end, as without her hands Jessie cannot possibly strike back. But perhaps there was a way to score a double knock out with Jessie?

    ?Pikachu!?

    And this time the command carried through, as Jessie placed a frightening gaze at Officer Jenny?s eyes, using a Glare attack in an attempt to paralyze her opponent. However, the police Pokemon just avoided eye contact and Glare was ineffective. Treecko definitely trained his Officer Jenny well to counter any attacks in a strategic manner!

    ?You?re under arrest!? shouted the blue haired Pokemon, and at the call of Officer Jenny, the raging Jessie fainted at the shock. A red beam emerged out of the Rocket Ball and sucked Jessie back in. The crowd gasped quietly, seeing that Pikachu was losing once again at a score of 5-4.

    Pikachu hissed at his opponent, who was still holding the dirty twig in his mouth, with his Pokemon standing still waiting for Pikachu. This battle was a lot harder than he imagined. It was obvious that Treecko deserved the title of being one of the best trainers in Hoenn. But Pikachu won?t give up now, not after he had come so far all the way into the Pokemon League finals.

    ?Pi-ka!?

    ?And? and why here Pikachu sends out Brock, the perverted Pokemon! It is said that Brock has a major advantage over female Pokemon!? stated Meowth as the Treecko fans in the audience started to get worried. Treecko might have a hard time in order to win this one.

    And as the battle began, Officer Jenny got into defensive position again, but to Treecko and his Pokemon?s great surprise, Brock was gone. He was nowhere in sight. Pikachu just grinned at Treecko before giving out an evil laughter.

    ?Will you please go out with me?? In the speed of lightning, Brock appeared right beside Officer Jenny, kneeing on the floor and wrapped his arms around her. His face was red unlike his darker skin color, and Brock had eyes that aren?t just two straight lines, there might have been stars in his eyes.

    ?Meowth has never seen a Pokemon moving this fast before! In a mere second, Brock was already using his Glomp Attack on Officer Jenny!?

    ?How about giving me your address, phone numbers or maybe even email!? asked Brock as he ignored his victim?s constant kicking and other various struggling method. It was either his green jacket projecting him from all those kicks with the high hells, or he was just immune to all of it. The Officer Jenny gave a terrified shriek and she fainted, before Treecko could even react fast enough to switch out his Pokemon.

    ?In just one Glomp Attack, Pikachu?s Brock scored a knock out from Treecko with ease! Its Glomp Attack?s power level is raised to the fullest!?

    As the crowd cheered on for Pikachu at the amazing comeback, something strange was beginning to happen. The brown spiky haired Pokemon began to glow, and soon light was emitted from this Pokemon. The crowd gasped and wondered what was happening. Even Meowth and Wobbuffet up in the control tower were amazed.

    ?Why folks, Brock? Brock is evolving!?



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    Thanks for all of your reviews! <(^-^)>

    This chapter was a bit short... but then hope that it's still ok ^^;
    Still a lot more to come in later chapters, featuring more new Pokemon such as another Rocket member, a girl from Jhoto, and an old rival, and so on!
     
    I'm just wondering if this is going to end when the battle ends, or shall it keep going with more and more ones. Meh... anyways - to review:

    This is a very original fic, but you don't need me to tell you that. The battles are hilarious, but that's mainly because I don't watch the anime... so find the reactions to the attacks a little strange, but still funny.

    It would be nice for a bit more description. I know this isn't the type of fic where description is key (if it was... well o_O), so I won't comment too much on it, but for other people who read this and also don't watch the anime, it may be hard for them to grasp who the characters are and what they look like - especially Jessie and James (apart from is they had Yellow).

    There are also a couple of typos, and a couple of places where you end quotations with periods, but I'm sure you can fix those. Also, in one of the chapters, you said that the trainers used Super Potions to improve their health, but why would they need to? They're not physically hurting their opponents (well, maybe Jessie's an exception), so shouldn't it be something like improving their self-esteem?

    Anyways, I'm just rambling, and good luck with the next bout of human-style battling :D.
     
    Mr Cat Dog said:
    I'm just wondering if this is going to end when the battle ends, or shall it keep going with more and more ones. Meh... anyways - to review:

    This is a very original fic, but you don't need me to tell you that. The battles are hilarious, but that's mainly because I don't watch the anime... so find the reactions to the attacks a little strange, but still funny.

    It would be nice for a bit more description. I know this isn't the type of fic where description is key (if it was... well o_O), so I won't comment too much on it, but for other people who read this and also don't watch the anime, it may be hard for them to grasp who the characters are and what they look like - especially Jessie and James (apart from is they had Yellow).

    There are also a couple of typos, and a couple of places where you end quotations with periods, but I'm sure you can fix those. Also, in one of the chapters, you said that the trainers used Super Potions to improve their health, but why would they need to? They're not physically hurting their opponents (well, maybe Jessie's an exception), so shouldn't it be something like improving their self-esteem?

    Anyways, I'm just rambling, and good luck with the next bout of human-style battling :D.
    Story ends after one of the trainer loses all 6 "Pokemon" just like any other battle ^^; I got everything worked out except for how the last standoff will end... only problem.

    Yeah since I actually never watched Advanced Generation myself (because I was too scared of May and her terrible dub voice), I just had to make something up according to comments of others. That's why those 2 battle of Max and May is lacking in anime reference because I've never watched it myself. I also had to make up some of the reaction because the anime wasn't filling enough in tersm of character description (especially Jhoto seasons.)

    Description was VERY difficult to fit in. Since all attacks are made up and all of them have to fit the character from the anime, almost all attacks have to be verbal. Description is easier if there's some physical actions going on, but most of the battles here really don't have that.

    Yes indeed this fanfic is very anime reliant. Like the scene of James in the Moltres suite, if you cannot recall the Pokemon Fortune Telling episode, you really get lost, but if you do then you'll find it really funny, and you can imagine exactly what's going on at the slightest reminder of what happened in that episode.

    Regarding the super potions, I just had to make that up. The "Pokemon" will be OOC if they use physical attacks (save for a couple like Jessie) so I just had to make it verbal. Plus meh don't have to care so much about reality as this is not a long epic, nor is it anything deeper than mindless laughter XD;

    And of course, haven't gotton anyone to give criticism for awhile ^^; So certainly appreciated it, Mr. Cat Dog! Next chapter is coming along soon... the only problem with this fanfic is that I'm stuck on how the final standoff goes.
     
    ...I once read a fic almost exactly like this a few years ago, but w/o the advance characters because it was before they came out. Inspiration, plagerism, or coincidence?
     
    Iveechan said:
    ...I once read a fic almost exactly like this a few years ago, but w/o the advance characters because it was before they came out. Inspiration, plagerism, or coincidence?
    o.o; Hmm... I read something within an epic, of a character joked about how Misty would destroy everything and win every battle if only she's a Pokemon in a battle. But then they did have a whole story on it...(which was a shame because I found that part funny.) So I guess then there's at least 3 fanfics that talk of this idea then...

    And btw, long time no see too ^^

    Then again, not sure if I'll continue this fic, as school is being really annoying, along with the lack of motivation within me to write a fanfic without somebody squirming in complete agony.
     
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