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    Deep within a dusty corner of my brain...
    *drumroll*
    ...THE BEST POKEMON FANFIC IN THE WORLD IS IN THERE!!!
    *dunDunDUNNNNN!!!*

    Okay, I'll stop now. But I really do have this great idea for a fanfic.

    There's, like, this Umbreon Pokemorph,and she ran away from this evil Pokemorph prison/lab, and she escapes, along with some other freaks. But then, she starts having visions.
    *I have to stop now because the person on the next computer keeps staring at my screen.* So anyway...

    Free samples anyone? ^?^
     
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    .::t w i l i g h t::. said:
    Deep within a dusty corner of my brain...
    *drumroll*
    ...THE BEST POKEMON FANFIC IN THE WORLD IS IN THERE!!!
    *dunDunDUNNNNN!!!*

    Okay, I'll stop now. But I really do have this great idea for a fanfic.

    There's, like, this Umbreon Pokemorph,and she ran away from this evil Pokemorph prison/lab, and she escapes, along with some other freaks. But then, she starts having visions.
    *I have to stop now because the person on the next computer keeps staring at my screen.* So anyway...

    Free samples anyone? ^?^
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    problems

    -bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic

    -Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time

    -plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.
     
    frostweaver said:
    problems

    -bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic

    -Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time

    -plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.
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    ...Sorry. v-?-v I thought it was good, I thought....I don't know... v0?0v
     
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    It could be good, just work on it further. And it's best if you don't go overboard with it, I think that's what Frosty meant. XD Your plot is a bit...blunt, and Umbreon is I admit, overused. But it depends on the writer's style...

    ^___^
     
    Also, announcing is against the rules in this forum

    This is now closed. If you want to brag your fanfic, there's the fanfiction lounge.
     
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