3rd Verse to Dynamite?

[dooku01]

I really like the song Dynamite, so one day I was sitting and came up with a third verse. It has the same cycle as the first two, and then it goes to the ending, and blah blah blah. Well, here it is.

If you think that I,I,I,I
Am gonna dance till' I hit the sky,sky,sky,sky
Baby, I'm not your average guy,guy,guy,guy
I'm gonna dance beyond the sky,sky,sky,sky

I think it could use some work. But you guys can give me your opinions. Or give a revised edition/another third verse.

 

[Mr Cat Dog]

This... isn't really worthy of a thread, to be honest. For one thing, it's way too specific for any kind of discussion. You're more than welcome to make a more general thread about adding verses to other songs, but to just do one isn't that great. I'm gonna close this now.

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