This is my first sprite comic.
https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/Peeki/Day_atthepsychicschool.gif
Enjoy and comments, please...
https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/Peeki/Day_atthepsychicschool.gif
Enjoy and comments, please...
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"A Day at the Psychic School"
- Thread starter Peekimon
- Start date
may_flower
Lover of all Pokemon
- 36
- Posts
- 20
- Years
- Age 31
- Spring time flower
- Seen Mar 20, 2005
it good no it great! And it little funny.
Logmon1
The one of many...
- 1,242
- Posts
- 20
- Years
- Age 32
- In my room.
- Seen Sep 2, 2005
You really want my honist opinun?
Logmon1
The one of many...
- 1,242
- Posts
- 20
- Years
- Age 32
- In my room.
- Seen Sep 2, 2005
I hate it. 3/10 sorry. :(
armadilloHD
FE style by sykora.
- 688
- Posts
- 20
- Years
- Age 32
- *Insert something witty about stalkers etc.*
- Seen Jan 2, 2024
To give my honest oppinion...
Pros:
The text boxes are great! I have to say you have good spelling.
Cons:
The recolering job needs work even If it's a splice. Looks like you used irfan view. Irfanview is a VERY limited program you should know. Wheres the background? Not even a few desks to brighten the place up? That also needs some work. The sweat is to deformed and has a black outline making it look unnatural. Use a light shade of blue to fix that. The pokemon trainer sprites are VERY VERY VERY limited and look like they are some kind of cardboard cut out. There is no plot. Not even a cliched "Main character is late for school gig" Finally, the pokeball dissapears in the last panel. One more thing, The panels move around a lot and a rounded rectangle is NOT I repeat NOT A good shape for panels.
If you take these tips your next comic will be A LOT better...
Edit: Oh and log...give some advice to make it better next time...just saying you hate it isn't going to help you like it
Pros:
The text boxes are great! I have to say you have good spelling.
Cons:
The recolering job needs work even If it's a splice. Looks like you used irfan view. Irfanview is a VERY limited program you should know. Wheres the background? Not even a few desks to brighten the place up? That also needs some work. The sweat is to deformed and has a black outline making it look unnatural. Use a light shade of blue to fix that. The pokemon trainer sprites are VERY VERY VERY limited and look like they are some kind of cardboard cut out. There is no plot. Not even a cliched "Main character is late for school gig" Finally, the pokeball dissapears in the last panel. One more thing, The panels move around a lot and a rounded rectangle is NOT I repeat NOT A good shape for panels.
If you take these tips your next comic will be A LOT better...
Edit: Oh and log...give some advice to make it better next time...just saying you hate it isn't going to help you like it
Goatman56
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- 2,881
- Posts
- 20
- Years
- Age 33
- Seen Oct 21, 2019
Logmon thats not very nice its good humor is ok but what you need is a background. Don't let Logmons review put you down a rule of the 10 rules of sprite comic making would be never give up if you like making sprite comics keep doing them.