A Day in School

Chelay06

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    • Seen Dec 21, 2010
    Just a simple poem I wrote about school.

    A Day in School

    It was cold, I slept like a shrimp.
    A gentle pat, arose me from slumber.
    It was 5:30am., time to prepare.

    Gurgle, bad breath gone.
    A gentle push, bowel gone.
    Lukewarm water and soap, bad smell gone.
    No bath, friends gone.

    Tocino and plain rice.
    Fruit and water with ice.
    Kept my mind active.
    On all subjects till recess.

    We all rush and fall in line.
    Eat hurriedly to find sometime.
    Little play and chat.
    Before classes resume.
     
    Not bad at all.
    Though I find the first stanza's structure unfamiliar to the others. And "A gentle push, bowel gone." :cer_confused:
     
    Thank you very much. Appreciated compliment.
     
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