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WARNING: Bloodshed and death are common themes in this story. There will be onscreen deaths, possibly in imaginative ways.
Okay, so this is the third story Ive begun writing (I finished the first two, but they were a load of crap so I dont intend to let anyone see them for the time being), and I mainly began writing it because I wanted to write a story about a mans descent into evil. I realise that the descent has already begun before the events taking place in this book, but hopefully theres enough humanity left in him to destroy over the course of this book. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. As of this post, Ive currently written three chapters, with a fourth being in progress. Ill only be posting the Prologue for now, though XD.
PrologueCobalt's forehead creased slightly as he bent over his notes. He would often claim he hated being behind a desk, that he hungered for the action of a hunt, but it was a white lie almost everyone saw through. He enjoyed scheming, marking everything up, calculating losses and making educated decisions. He was one of those people born to lead, and he loved every part of his job, even the monotonous calculations and effort put into a kill. Even now, as he bent over to cross a name off his list, he had a faint smile on his face, and his eyes glimmered happily behind his reading glasses.
It was a wonder, he thought, with all the hate people had for each other, that people were still alive in this city. He was often sought out by even legitimate businessmen, and sometimes he would accept their offers. He understood that a good ruler must make sacrifices for his land. Even then, though, it got to him, the constant scandals, hate, revenge plots that took place in his city. He had managed to limit the chaos to a scale which he found acceptable, however. True, there would be even less chaos if he abolished his business, but there was a certain thrill in holding the lives of millions of people in your hands that he wasn't ready to give up. Not yet, anyhow.
He considered a file with a photo of a fat man in a suit on the cover. The name ANTHONY BUDIERRO was printed in the white space below. There were stacks and stacks of notes in the file, mostly names and financing agreements, but the occasional email as well, printed neatly. Tony Budierro was one of the city's elite, and men only got to that position if Cobalt wished for them to get into that position. He had, in fact, pulled the trigger that had killed Budierro's predecessor. That wasn't to say there wasn't room for improvement. Tony was very stubborn, and often went against Cobalt's desires, but Budierro had his blessing nevertheless.
"Cobalt?"
He looked up, annoyed at being disturbed in the middle of his work. There was a thin man standing in the doorway of his office.
"What is it?" he barked in his raspy growl.
"We found him. The one you were after."
Forgetting his annoyance in an instant, Cobalt broke into a large smile and stood quickly, leaning over his desk, ignoring the fluttering of the papers in the now-open file.
"Excellent….. Is he secure?"
"Yes."
"Bring him in."
Cobalt watched with relish as his men dragged in a man wearing a straightjacket into the room. He had a gag tied over his mouth, and was thrashing and kicking as he was brought in.
"Enough." He commanded.
The man relaxed for a moment to consider Cobalt. He had long, scraggy hair stained with blood, and the skin around his left eye was blacked and shriveled up, as if it had died. But his eye remained intact, large and blue, and gazing into Cobalt's eyes with not anger or hate, but more of a shrewd curiosity.
The men dragged the man into a chair in the room and tied him securely. They left, making sure to close the door behind him. Cobalt looked at the man with a calculating gaze, one the man returned with equal intensity. They stayed like that for a few minutes, until Cobalt spoke up.
"So….you're the one who's been killing all those men….I thought you'd be fatter."
The man made a noise. Cobalt thought it might be a scoff.
"I'm going to take out your gag now. You can scream if you like, but no one will hear you."
The man waited till the gag was untied, then sneered. "What do you want?"
"What do you think I want?"
"You obviously don't plan to hand me over to the police, so either you want to kill me or give me a warning." He smiled, incredibly relaxed. "Since this would be a bit extreme for a warning, I assume you're going to kill me."
Cobalt smiled. "Actually, I'm going to do the opposite. What's your name?"
The man paused, considering Cobalt. Then, slowly, "Joseph Donnelly."
"Joseph, is it true that in the past month you've murdered ten men?"
"It was three weeks, actually." Joseph grinned. There was a wild gleam in his eyes.
Cobalt whistled. "Quite a resume."
"I'm a hard worker."
Silence fell over them.
"So what exactly is it you want from me?" Joseph asked.
"I want you to put your….talents to good use."
"You want me to kill someone?" He frowned.
Cobalt pursed his lips. "Well…. Someone implies one person only."
Josephs frown turned into an insane smile as he understood Cobalt's intent.
"You want me to be an assassin?"
Cobalt smiled. "Aye."
Okay, so this is the third story Ive begun writing (I finished the first two, but they were a load of crap so I dont intend to let anyone see them for the time being), and I mainly began writing it because I wanted to write a story about a mans descent into evil. I realise that the descent has already begun before the events taking place in this book, but hopefully theres enough humanity left in him to destroy over the course of this book. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. As of this post, Ive currently written three chapters, with a fourth being in progress. Ill only be posting the Prologue for now, though XD.
Prologue
It was a wonder, he thought, with all the hate people had for each other, that people were still alive in this city. He was often sought out by even legitimate businessmen, and sometimes he would accept their offers. He understood that a good ruler must make sacrifices for his land. Even then, though, it got to him, the constant scandals, hate, revenge plots that took place in his city. He had managed to limit the chaos to a scale which he found acceptable, however. True, there would be even less chaos if he abolished his business, but there was a certain thrill in holding the lives of millions of people in your hands that he wasn't ready to give up. Not yet, anyhow.
He considered a file with a photo of a fat man in a suit on the cover. The name ANTHONY BUDIERRO was printed in the white space below. There were stacks and stacks of notes in the file, mostly names and financing agreements, but the occasional email as well, printed neatly. Tony Budierro was one of the city's elite, and men only got to that position if Cobalt wished for them to get into that position. He had, in fact, pulled the trigger that had killed Budierro's predecessor. That wasn't to say there wasn't room for improvement. Tony was very stubborn, and often went against Cobalt's desires, but Budierro had his blessing nevertheless.
"Cobalt?"
He looked up, annoyed at being disturbed in the middle of his work. There was a thin man standing in the doorway of his office.
"What is it?" he barked in his raspy growl.
"We found him. The one you were after."
Forgetting his annoyance in an instant, Cobalt broke into a large smile and stood quickly, leaning over his desk, ignoring the fluttering of the papers in the now-open file.
"Excellent….. Is he secure?"
"Yes."
"Bring him in."
Cobalt watched with relish as his men dragged in a man wearing a straightjacket into the room. He had a gag tied over his mouth, and was thrashing and kicking as he was brought in.
"Enough." He commanded.
The man relaxed for a moment to consider Cobalt. He had long, scraggy hair stained with blood, and the skin around his left eye was blacked and shriveled up, as if it had died. But his eye remained intact, large and blue, and gazing into Cobalt's eyes with not anger or hate, but more of a shrewd curiosity.
The men dragged the man into a chair in the room and tied him securely. They left, making sure to close the door behind him. Cobalt looked at the man with a calculating gaze, one the man returned with equal intensity. They stayed like that for a few minutes, until Cobalt spoke up.
"So….you're the one who's been killing all those men….I thought you'd be fatter."
The man made a noise. Cobalt thought it might be a scoff.
"I'm going to take out your gag now. You can scream if you like, but no one will hear you."
The man waited till the gag was untied, then sneered. "What do you want?"
"What do you think I want?"
"You obviously don't plan to hand me over to the police, so either you want to kill me or give me a warning." He smiled, incredibly relaxed. "Since this would be a bit extreme for a warning, I assume you're going to kill me."
Cobalt smiled. "Actually, I'm going to do the opposite. What's your name?"
The man paused, considering Cobalt. Then, slowly, "Joseph Donnelly."
"Joseph, is it true that in the past month you've murdered ten men?"
"It was three weeks, actually." Joseph grinned. There was a wild gleam in his eyes.
Cobalt whistled. "Quite a resume."
"I'm a hard worker."
Silence fell over them.
"So what exactly is it you want from me?" Joseph asked.
"I want you to put your….talents to good use."
"You want me to kill someone?" He frowned.
Cobalt pursed his lips. "Well…. Someone implies one person only."
Josephs frown turned into an insane smile as he understood Cobalt's intent.
"You want me to be an assassin?"
Cobalt smiled. "Aye."
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