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Hello everybody. This is a new fanfic I've created starring Red and Pikachu as they go on a journey through Kanto (but they have already been around once). Feedback is appreciated.
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Red woke up in his bed on monday morning. Like his name, his bed was also red. He liked the colour red because of his name. He had brown hair and dark eyes like the knight. He rubbed his eyes and yawned because he had just awoken from being asleep throughout the night. S he had a pokemon with him called Pikachu. Pikachu was the first pokemon he had ever owned. He had got it from a professor called professor oak for his flirt pokemon, because they had run out of other starter pokemon, because Red was too late to the event were professor oak was handing out starter pokemon to new trainers, because Red was a lazy person who slept a lot and liked to relax too often, because his dad was also like that.
Red got up and got dressed in red. He switched on the nearby radio that was on the dark brown wooden bedside table by using his right hand (he was right handed) to twist the nob to the right and listened to what was on the radio that morning. The radio was made of plastic that was black and had a matt finish on it. Red started rapidly moving his mouth because he was laughing very hard at the radio. He laughed like someone who found something very funny. He was laughing at the song that was currently on, which was one of those cheap pop songs that the musical business makes for money or something.
"Haha" Red said, laughing. "It's one of those crappy pop songs." "They keep churning out this rubbish don't they?" He asked rhetorical.
Pikachu was stood next to Red and it was also laughing with him because Pikachu and Red had good repore with each other but that was not always the case due to Pikachu not always liking Red, because he did not like his face when they first met. It just thought that Red was a rubbish trainer when they met together at first.
"Pika Pik!" Pikachu laughed with him.
"How do they manage to make such rubbish music and sell it?" Red asked, a little perplexed. "It doesn't even sound good. It's a joke. A musical joke!"
He turned the black plastic radio off by twisting it to the left with his right hand, and then let go of it after the nob had twisted all the way until it would not twist anymore leftwards, and then went downstairs to have bacon and beans which his mum had made him about 3 and a quarter minutes before he had woken up (and he had woken up because his mum had called for him to come and get the bacon and beans she had just made), then after he finished his meal he said by to his mum and walked out of the front door with Pikachu and the rest of his Pokemon, which were held in small poke balls about the size of golf balls (but red and white instead of just white.) on his belt.
He travelled to Viridian City and then through the forest while rebattling weak bug trainers who had weedles that were about lv 2 and then arrives at Pewter city and went to heal his Pikachu at the PC because even though Reds Pikachu was lv 50ish, it still took some damage so felt that it should be fully replenished. Then he went to Brock and said hello before beating him, and afterwards he walked to the next route which led to mt moon.
"Oi, weak kid! I wanna challenge you to a pokemon battle. I'm the greatest trainer in all the land, I will one day rule the world in fact, so it would be foolish of you to think you could possibly beat me!"
It was a member of team rocket who said that. Team rocket was wearing a black suit with a red 'R' on it, which somehow got red confused about whether or not they were actually supporting him, because not only was it an 'R', the first letter of his name 'Red', but the colour of the 'R' was also in red.
"No, I am supremely confident in my abilities, so I will accept your challenge and then beat you because I'm the best trainer there ever was!" Red said back.
"You will be sorry you ever said that!" The member of team rocket replied. Then the team rocket member moved his right arm towards his belt and used his hand to grab at a Poke ball that was attached and then threw it about two metres in front of him, and the ball opened up in half horizontally, and with a blinding white flash a pokemon appeared where the ball had been (the ball had flew back towards the team rocket member), and Red saw that it was a raticate. He pulled out his red pokedex to collect the data on the raticate, but realised he had already caught a ratacate and had info on it, so he put it back in his left pocket. He then released Pikachu off his shoulder, calling him to battle. It proudly walked over to the battle arena.
"Watch this all-powerful attack as I defeat you in two attacks! , said the team rocket member "raticate, use super fang!" After this, raticate opened its mouth and ran towards red's Pikachu and got to it before he could run off, and sank its long teeth into pikachu's left yellow leg, who squealed in pain.
"No, Pikachu ! " Red cried.
Red ordered Pikachu to used thunder shock on the rat-like raticate, and it hit, causing raticate to quiver in pain, and it damaged the raticate.
Just at that moment a sound was heard coming from the team rocket members right trouser pocket. It was the same pop song that ash had heard earlier. The team rocket member put his hand in his pocket to get his white and blue Nokia lumia 520 out that was making the noise as someone had called him whilst in the middle of this pokemon battle with Red. He quickly answered it by saying "Not now!" and put it back.
"Haha, I can't believe you listen to that rubbish!" Red laughed hard. Pikachu also laughed. The two got an ego boost due to how the member listened to such rubbish, and because of that defeated him very easily. "That was a quicky!" red exclaimed as delightfully as a happy guy
Red and Pikachu walked on, ready for their next adventure in mt moon..
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Red woke up in his bed on monday morning. Like his name, his bed was also red. He liked the colour red because of his name. He had brown hair and dark eyes like the knight. He rubbed his eyes and yawned because he had just awoken from being asleep throughout the night. S he had a pokemon with him called Pikachu. Pikachu was the first pokemon he had ever owned. He had got it from a professor called professor oak for his flirt pokemon, because they had run out of other starter pokemon, because Red was too late to the event were professor oak was handing out starter pokemon to new trainers, because Red was a lazy person who slept a lot and liked to relax too often, because his dad was also like that.
Red got up and got dressed in red. He switched on the nearby radio that was on the dark brown wooden bedside table by using his right hand (he was right handed) to twist the nob to the right and listened to what was on the radio that morning. The radio was made of plastic that was black and had a matt finish on it. Red started rapidly moving his mouth because he was laughing very hard at the radio. He laughed like someone who found something very funny. He was laughing at the song that was currently on, which was one of those cheap pop songs that the musical business makes for money or something.
"Haha" Red said, laughing. "It's one of those crappy pop songs." "They keep churning out this rubbish don't they?" He asked rhetorical.
Pikachu was stood next to Red and it was also laughing with him because Pikachu and Red had good repore with each other but that was not always the case due to Pikachu not always liking Red, because he did not like his face when they first met. It just thought that Red was a rubbish trainer when they met together at first.
"Pika Pik!" Pikachu laughed with him.
"How do they manage to make such rubbish music and sell it?" Red asked, a little perplexed. "It doesn't even sound good. It's a joke. A musical joke!"
He turned the black plastic radio off by twisting it to the left with his right hand, and then let go of it after the nob had twisted all the way until it would not twist anymore leftwards, and then went downstairs to have bacon and beans which his mum had made him about 3 and a quarter minutes before he had woken up (and he had woken up because his mum had called for him to come and get the bacon and beans she had just made), then after he finished his meal he said by to his mum and walked out of the front door with Pikachu and the rest of his Pokemon, which were held in small poke balls about the size of golf balls (but red and white instead of just white.) on his belt.
He travelled to Viridian City and then through the forest while rebattling weak bug trainers who had weedles that were about lv 2 and then arrives at Pewter city and went to heal his Pikachu at the PC because even though Reds Pikachu was lv 50ish, it still took some damage so felt that it should be fully replenished. Then he went to Brock and said hello before beating him, and afterwards he walked to the next route which led to mt moon.
"Oi, weak kid! I wanna challenge you to a pokemon battle. I'm the greatest trainer in all the land, I will one day rule the world in fact, so it would be foolish of you to think you could possibly beat me!"
It was a member of team rocket who said that. Team rocket was wearing a black suit with a red 'R' on it, which somehow got red confused about whether or not they were actually supporting him, because not only was it an 'R', the first letter of his name 'Red', but the colour of the 'R' was also in red.
"No, I am supremely confident in my abilities, so I will accept your challenge and then beat you because I'm the best trainer there ever was!" Red said back.
"You will be sorry you ever said that!" The member of team rocket replied. Then the team rocket member moved his right arm towards his belt and used his hand to grab at a Poke ball that was attached and then threw it about two metres in front of him, and the ball opened up in half horizontally, and with a blinding white flash a pokemon appeared where the ball had been (the ball had flew back towards the team rocket member), and Red saw that it was a raticate. He pulled out his red pokedex to collect the data on the raticate, but realised he had already caught a ratacate and had info on it, so he put it back in his left pocket. He then released Pikachu off his shoulder, calling him to battle. It proudly walked over to the battle arena.
"Watch this all-powerful attack as I defeat you in two attacks! , said the team rocket member "raticate, use super fang!" After this, raticate opened its mouth and ran towards red's Pikachu and got to it before he could run off, and sank its long teeth into pikachu's left yellow leg, who squealed in pain.
"No, Pikachu ! " Red cried.
Red ordered Pikachu to used thunder shock on the rat-like raticate, and it hit, causing raticate to quiver in pain, and it damaged the raticate.
Just at that moment a sound was heard coming from the team rocket members right trouser pocket. It was the same pop song that ash had heard earlier. The team rocket member put his hand in his pocket to get his white and blue Nokia lumia 520 out that was making the noise as someone had called him whilst in the middle of this pokemon battle with Red. He quickly answered it by saying "Not now!" and put it back.
"Haha, I can't believe you listen to that rubbish!" Red laughed hard. Pikachu also laughed. The two got an ego boost due to how the member listened to such rubbish, and because of that defeated him very easily. "That was a quicky!" red exclaimed as delightfully as a happy guy
Red and Pikachu walked on, ready for their next adventure in mt moon..
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