A new generation

[fango pango]

So I have been writing a story since about mid-november
And i've decided to show you guys it



Hope you enjoy and review :)
Chapter one will be up soon :D


Prologue
Loyalty before life, that's the way they were taught to live,always,no matter what.Help the injured and elderly before yourself,they were taught to do that too.If an injured rabbit came into their territory for help,they were helped,no matter what,they were taught that too.But the most important rule they were taught was to stay inside the territory of their warren.Bad things happen to rabbits outside their warren.Inside the warren,there are always rabbits to help you in a hard task, and there's always something to do inside the warren.But outside the warren,alone,you're vulnerable to anything.So under no circumstances,should you ever be caught outside territory,may the heaven's have mercy,because the other animals won't.All animals are after a rabbit for food.But the rabbits have speed,cunning and strength.If any animal catches a rabbit,it will kill them.But first,they must find a way to catch the rabbit.Stay in territory,and it will never happen.

 

[fango pango]

I've decided to put chapter 1 up too
Enjoy and please give me feedback on how I can improve (well i've wrote up to chapter 8 as of now....so just review it and I will intend to improve)

Chapter 1​

This story is ofcourse based on a warren of rabbits,a certain warren of rabbits.They were proud to be a warren together,but they lacked one vital thing for a surviving warren.A female.This was an all male warren,their mothers and fathers hadn't given birth to any female kits.Sounds sad,but it's true.

Anyway back to the story.

Rowan lay on his stomach,looking for anyone from other warrens.There were no other rabbits around but him.
Or that's atleast what it looked like.

Out of the bushes came a larger rabbit with black fur,Rowan knew he would lose a fight against him anyday,so he simply asked "what do you want Ash?" Ash stood next to Rowan and replied "It's my shift on watch now,so piss off." Rowan understood,and hopped off along the green hills.He had a thought about why he was told to stay on this hill when he was younger.

All that changed for him soon after,he never thought about it after.

He got back to the centre of his warren's territory and started to eat some grass.That's when his brother,Thistletoe,walked in.Simply saying "can you see the blood?" over and over.Rowan was a mix betwen scared and confused after the 5th time he said it.Rowan stopped Thistletoe in mid-question and told him in a stone cold tone "what do you mean?" Thistletoe rolled his eyes into the back of his head,and shouted "This warren is in peril.The doom of this warren is sealed by the bloodline of traitors !" Thistletoe passed out after that.Rowan looked pale,like he'd been sent into a cruel twisted nightmare.

But this was reality.

Rowan had so many questions spinning in his head...Why did his brother shout what he said,why did he keep asking if Rowan saw the blood,and what did he mean by the bloodline of traitors.But he thought some sleep might solve his problems.So he chose a comfortable spot and fell asleep.