A Quick Haiku

Very nice. Good work.
The pauses may be a flaw, but no huge deal.
Also, I just love haiku! I don't know why. I just do.
 
Brilliant.
The commas show how scared the narrator is, and talking to him/herself shows loneliness.
That's what I get from it anyway.
 
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