Above my Reach

GodofPH

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    Above My Reach

    There you are, standing there, all alone...seemingly
    But alas, you are beyond my reach. Taken you claim to be

    Are you really? Can it be?
    Was I too slow? Stupid me...

    He's never there, like a ghost
    When its I, who want you most

    Must I wait, while my desire is chaste
    A spectator I am, how long will it last?

    Day in and ay out, yet still it thrives
    Pain stings my heart, a thousand bee hives

    When will come the day
    when things are not this way?

    A week? A month? Maybe a year?
    However long, I'll still percervere

    You say you're happy when he's not even there
    when I'm always here for you, it isn't fair.

    Should I let go? Should I move on?
    I tried, I can't, my destinys drawn.

    Above my reach, thats what you are
    but with my ambition as a boost, I shall go far...
     
    *is shocked that no one has commented yet*

    I love this poem. It ryms!! Yaya!!

    I can't wait to see more of your work.:D

    Raiting: 9.8/10:P
     
    Well, I only posted it last night at 10, so I can see why nobody has commented on it until now. Thanks for the comments.
     
    I agree with Raven's Phoenix. Strange this has only gotten one review. ^_^ I saw a couple of typoes but it's no biggie. I think it's very good. I give it a 9.8/10 as well. :rambo:
     
    Sorry for the typoes, I write my poems in notepad, rather than Microsoft Word. But thanks for the good words.
     
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