"All the Dreams to Light the Way . . . "

[Kogenta]

Plot:
Many years ago, the lands of the Pokemon world were divided by strife and stricken by chaos. During this time, both Pokemon and their human partners fought?not as trainer and Pokemon, but as equal warriors in battle. For hundreds of years, such was considered the typical partnership between Pokemon and human. However, as the land grew more peaceful, Pokemon became used more for sport than war. Because of this, it was considered unneccesary for the humans to fight. So it was for many more years until the ancient battles had seemed entirely forgotten. But, as of late, the older form of battling has again been popularized. Pokeball manufacturing has ceased and the function of the PC has been reduced to the holding of items. Thus the world has been for almost two hundred years . . .

You will play the part of a character in this world. As with previous trainers, you travel about in search of adventure, earning badges, and sparring against those you may come across. However, all is not right with this land. Unknown to many, in a place known only in legend, named as "The Hidden Lake", a strange force has emerged--signaling the birth of a chaos that threatens the entire world.

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Details:
At the beginning of the roleplay, your character will probably not be aware of this "force". However, as the roleplay progresses, a number of events will occur that alert the characters to this unknown enemy. Eventually, the identity of the enemy will be revealed, and the "young heroes" will find themselves in a situation in which only they can save the world.

Typical, ne?

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Setting:
The world has become somewhat of a blend of fantasy/medieval/feudal and modern/futuristic technology.

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Rules: (I hope I am not requiring too much . . . )

1. Please use reasonable spelling and grammar in your posts (use commas, periods, spaces, capitalization, etc.). Being that my writing is far from grammatically perfect, I will assuredly not expect perfection.
2. I realize this is in the general RPG rules, but, as a reminder, make your posts at least four lines long.

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Character Sheet:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality: (Optional)
History: (Optional)
Weapon(s):
Skill(s):
Pokemon: (Limit, two. Please, no legendaries. Also, remember that there are no longer any Pokeballs. So, do not to forget to factor convenience when selecting your Pokemon.)
Other: (Optional)
Roleplay Sample: (To be fair, not optional)

This would be the first Pokemon Roleplay I have created, so I hope that at least one person will join. ^-^;;

I will post my character profile later.

 

[Neko]

Name: Neko
Age: 13
Gender: female
Appearance: light brown hair and light green eyes. Has on a simple pair of oversized dark blue jeans, held up by a silver belt, and a tight black T-shirt. About 5'4"
Weapon(s): Kunai, Shuriken
Skill(s): Has really fast speed, endurance, and is very acrobatic
Pokemon: Pikachu, Eevee
Roleplay Sample: (I know you've seen me rp but oh well..)

Yumi walked down the dirt roads of New Bark Town. 'Hmm..I wonder where it is..' She kicked up dirt out of boredom as she went along. She gazed up at the many buildings towering above her. 'I guess its that one.' She thought, turning her gaze toward a huge white building. She walked up and read to letters that were engraved in the Elm door. 'Yep, this is it.' Yumi opened the door and walked in. She looked to the center of the room and saw a boy sitting down on a sofa/bench next to a coffee table. He had a Pokeball in his hand.

"Ahh, so I see you've come" Yumi heard a voice and turned her head left as she saw Proffesor Elm approach her. "Come with me" He said smoothly. Yumi followed him to a room in the back of the lab.

The room was filled with all different kinds of maching that were lining the walls. In the center of the room sat a desk table. On that, sat many, many Pokeballs, each neatly placed next to eachother, in straight lines going across and up. "Wow..There are so many" Yumi said to Proffesor Elm, staring in awe at all the Pokeballs. One stood out though. It was placed in the center of the table, ontop of a place mat and covered by a glass case. The Pokeball was a dark blakish blue color, with a silver ting to it. It had an electric bolt at the top of it. 'Aah..' She took off the glass cover and quickly handed it to Proffesor Elm.

"Uh, w-wait I d-don't think you sh-should do tha-!" He stopped short when Yumi shoved the glass case in his hands and picked up the custom Pokeball. He sweatdropped.

"Wow.." Yumi stared in amasment at the shiny Pokeball. Seconds later a huge grin spead across her face. She threw the Pokeball into the air. "GO!!!!!"

"Gaah~!" Proffesor Elm suddenly ran out of the room. A huge white light flashed a moments later, a weird colored Pichu appeared in its place. It had light silver fur and dark bluish silver fur where the black should have been. It had crimson red cheeks and dark blue eyes that shined. Yumi smiled warmly at the little Pichu "Well hello littl-" Suddenly the little Pichu's crimson cheeks lit up.

"PICHUUuuu" Lighting surrounded it and Yumi.

"Gaaah~!!" Yumi quickly reached for the custom Pokeball and held it up to the Pichu. "R-r-return!!" A red light flashed suddenly, and the Pichu was back in it's ball. 'Arrg..hyper little thing..' Yumi got up. "Well, he doesn't seem so bad..i'll make friends with him later" Yumi smiled again at the thought. 'My first Pokemon!!'

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Yumi walked back into the main room. She saw Professor Elm on the couch next to the boy. He was curled into the feetle position, shaking a bit. Yumi giggled at the sight. She slipped the custom Pokeball, which was now in the smaller size, into her jean's pocket and walked over to the couch. She sat between Professor Elm and the boy. She turned to the boy. "Hi" Yumie said to him in a friendly tone. "My name is Yumie. Whats yours?"

^One in a different rp X)

 

[shadow keeper]

ok...
Name: Jack
Age: 12
Gender: male
Appearance: white hair, black eyes, black pants, black long-sleeved shirt, white cape white gloves, scar on cheek that reaches to the chin
History: when he was three his parents were in a battle and brought him along. His parents were killed and that's also how he got the scar.
Weapon(s): double-sided dagger
Skill(s): a good thief
Pokemon: treecko and sneasel
Roleplay Sample: Jack sat on a icey hill near a lake. he was freezing and he knew his options. they were bad ones.Jack sighed. he knew that he would either get up or die.
he sat up and lokked in the ice. a boy about 15 white hair white long-sleeved shirt blue eyes and a tauros belt holding two pokeballs looked up at him. he grabbed one of the pokeballs. "Go cloyster."
in a flash of light a giant shell pokemon looked up at him. "guess we gotta leave now don't we" i asked. then a rush of cold air hit him as a shivering dragonite flew downwards torwards him.

The Dragonite pulled out a small card and handed it to her. A hologram of a young woman appeared. The woman bowed then spoke, ?Greetings. This message is for highly promising Pok?mon trainers. You are invited to a party hosted by my master, the world?s greatest Pok?mon master.? The woman vanished and a map appeared. The woman started talking again. ?This is the location of the party. It will be held at the Pok?mon Palace on New Island. A ferry at the wharf will take you to the island tomorrow afternoon.? Some blue lines marked the rout from the wharf to the island.

The image disappeared and the woman returned. ?Please send us your reply with the postcard. If you decide to attend bring the invitation with you or you will not be admitted.? She vanished. The Dragonite then pulled out a post card with yes and no written on it. Jack took it. He thought for a moment then shrugged. He marked the square for yes and gave the card back to the Dragonite. The Dragonite then spread its wings and took flight. He watched it go. he sighed. "i guess it's off to the wharf for us Shell."

 

[Saboten]

Name: Miku Nakano/Nakano Miku
Age: 14
Gender:Female
Appearance: shoulder blade lengthed dark blue hair and a marine blue eyes. Fair complexion and fairly tall for her age. She wears a sleeveless turtle neck light blue sweater and a creamy short skirt. She has a small hopp earrings with small amethyst stone dangling on both sides. She also has a blue bead bracelet on right arm.
Personality: Cheerful, but selfish at times. She hardly get depressed and tries to calm people down.
History: Middle child of the owner of small restaurant. She loves training to use her Katana. Her older sister works at the bakery and her younger brother still in kindy. She helps at the restaurant, but decided to leave to travel when her parents suggested that she can do what she wants to do.
Weapon(s):A sharp Katana.
Skill(s): Can slice even a metal with her Katana.
Pokemon:Arcanine (she rides on its back when she wants to) Ivysaur
Other: Hates bugs.
Roleplay Sample:

This sample has nothing to do with this RP:

Aya walked towards the quiet and lonely road towards her destination. It had been a few hours since she saw a pokemon and were hoping to see at least ONE. But no, there weren't any. She wondered why, but she can't possibly find a answer to it, well... how can she? There were no people in sight, Absolutely no ONE. She sighed.
" Unlucky me... No one to talk to... No pokemon to catch... Huh? What's that?" There, in a not so distance place were a cave. "A cave? But there aren't any cave around here, weel, according to my map..." Aya walked forward and squinted her eyes to see the sign, and couldn't help but, to laugh at what it said.

There in a clear dark pink sign were 'Iggly Cave! WARNING: Vicious Igglypuff ahead! Do not go in!' 'A vicious Igglypuff!? As IF! How can those pink puffy cute thing can be so visious! I mean, they can't even hurt a fly! Gee... Someone must really hates Jigglypuff... Or maybe it was some stupid person not wanting me in the cave...' Aya scratched her head, but shrugged, proceeding to go toward the cave, while unknown to her, what the sign said might be a reality...

 

[MegaFuz]

Looks pretty good, but I'm gonna wait to see how many n00bs fill this up. :\

 

[Neko]

Hey! -0- You better not be calling me a n00b, n00b.

Look, either join or don't post at all cause making that kinda post is gainst the rules~


(By the way, when are we going to start?)

 

[MegaFuz]

Hey! -0- You better not be calling me a n00b, n00b.

Look, either join or don't post at all cause making that kinda post is gainst the rules~


(By the way, when are we going to start?)

For your information, I wasn't referring to you. And I'm sorry if I offended you, but I just hate it when I join a sweet-looking RP and then it sputters out because n00bs fill it up and kill it with their lack of posting. :\

 

[ShieldWolf27]

STOP SPAMMING!

Name: Shou
Age: 17
Gender:male
Appearance:https://vegetafan2.tripod.com/goten3.jpg
Personality: n/a (for now)
History: n.a (for now)
Weapon(s): fist
Skill(s): speed, fighting monk style
Pokemon: Chikorita and Kadabra
Other: n/a
Roleplay Sample:

Shou walked down the streets of the small town. Humans and other creatures were scurrying about their business. Shouts of bargains entered his ears. But Shou continued on. He was not interested in foolish items. He was a Demon. Of human appearance, yes, and he was always like that. He needed not lesser nutrients. His white Cloak and hood appeared not to be touched by the dirt and filth of the street. His face was soft in appearance and comforting. He seemed kind enough, his baritone voice kindly refusing all the offers handed to him. Thanking the shop keepers for their kindness and all.

Then, a small child ran into Shou and fell over. Shou kneeled down to pick the child from the street floor. The smile and soft features were still on his face. But the eyes had changed tone into a darker, crueler, colder yet the eyes burning with rage. The Child?ds happy face turned to that of horror and ran off like he had seen a ghost.

The villagers looked oddly at Shou, and Shou took his hood off of his head, his face was back to normal, kind and comforting. The villagers seeing the face saw nothing wrong, and thus came to the conclusion that the child had probably imagined something. Life returned to normal.

For the moment, he will allow the lesser filth to run free in the lands of Ordek. But soon, Shou will claim his true title, Kurayami no Shou, so as to declare dominance over the living and the dead alike. Control the past and the present and thus dominate the Future with the choking alliance of Darkness and Fire.

 

[Charon]

{ooc| This looks interesting! I'll sign up later, my brain hurts too much now. ^^;;;}

 

[Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses]

This looks good:D

Age: 12
Name: Edward Elric
Pokemon: Mudkip, alagazam
Weapons: pistol and katana
Appearance: Avitar
history: watch these in order
https://www.zippyvideos.com/5488116341967086/fullmetalalchemistfuerfri/
https://www.zippyvideos.com/4476549351977966/fullmetalalchemistfriendsforever/
https://www.zippyvideos.com/6331482151967236/fmathedayidie/

Abilities: Psychokinetic, martial arts and alchemy.

other- he doesnt know why he is here but as any other obstacle he will
take the challenge.

RP sample- I ran down the halls of the mansion escaping the remaining
homunculie I kept running till I heard a voice...
"now,now ed you woudnt be trying to get away would you?" I heard wraith say
"because that would be the wrong choice" lust said calmly
"and then how would we kill you?" sloth said with joy
"you killed me ounce but not again" I yelled transmutating a katana
I swung the katana at wraith slicing at his left arm
"I'm reclaiming my arm and leg!" I yelled slicing into his leg also my arm slicing off the left arm
"That you stole from me!" I screamed revealing my left arm and right leg
made of automail.
"to slow!" lust yelled blading her arm into my chest
"ARGHHHHHHHHH" I screamed in pain
blood started to spill rapidly from my chest
"not again" I managed to mutter
"If I die I'm taking all you out with me" I yelled tsking my spilling blood
and started to draw transumutation circles on my body
and then one on the floor.
hot tears poured from my eyes as I said goodbye to everyone in prayer
then I activated the transmutation circle and blasted my body
killing the homunculi.
next thing I knew I was in a building surrounded by other people
with weird creatures around them.
"are you alright?" a nurse asked me nicly
"yeah I think" I muttered
I walked out of the building to see where I was.
"I dont think I'm in central anymore" I said with a frown

 

[Jeudi]

Name: Tsukiko Chono
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Appearance:https://wolfsrain.free.fr/wallp/cher/cher_s1.gif
Personality: All business with clients, but will always keep a promise to never kill a person. Her demeanor shows she barely trusts many people, but her clients are treated with respect. That is, until they break their part of the deal.
Weapons: Various natural poisons that do not kill.
History: Once was involved in the pokemon league planning, but stopped after a very traumatizing event. This event is still fresh in her mind, but she does something ironic even after the event.
Skills: Hiding and poisoning without warning.
Pokemon: Nidoqueen and a Nidoking
Other: Makes poisons and sells for money. She does not make any death poisons.
Roleplay Sample:

Clients were in front of her, giving her a begging eye. The room looked dingy and really old. Her Nidoqueen and Nidoking would often be right outside the door. She looked towards them for a moment, motioning she might need their help. She took a big breath, making everything around her silent. "If you don't have enough money, I'm afraid you can't have the poison amount you want. I can give you half the order."
"Please, we're begging you. We need that poison to cure my wife and the other children!"
"I said you need all the money." The people tried to take the box from her hands, but her pokemon reacted, knocking the people back. "And that's all I said." The people begged her again, almost as if to make her feel sorry for them. "I said all the money." Her Nidoqueen silenced the few still awake. She nodded to the pokemon in front of her, leaving a piece of paper on the ground. Their order was rejected.

 

[code zerro the deluge]

may i join
sorry if i am interupting
i will leave if there are no more spots

 

[Kogenta]

This is . . . considerably more response than I expected . . .

dr.jay, there is no set limit on the number of participants in this roleplay. Provided that your sign-up sheet is of acceptable quality, you may join the roleplay.

Those who are accepted are as follows:

Kakashi and Sasuke Lover
Shadow Keeper
Saboten
Randall-Kun
Jeudi

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ash jr., while your sample seems to have good descriptions, I am afraid that the grammar is somewhat difficult to understand. As it is, I cannot accept you into this roleplay. I am sorry.

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Name: Kurogane Chain
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kurogane has dark, unkempt, mid-length hair. His uneven bangs often hang before his green-gold eyes, slightly obscuring others' view of them. A neckguard of black metal is about his neck, though it is often unseen beneath his dark cloak--clasped with a gold-coloured piece and having a Starmie "emblem". Beneath Kurogane's cloak is a sleeveless black shirt and cargo pants. About his chest is strapped a number of thick belts--partially to serve as armor. A single belt surrounds Kurogane's waist, while two crossing belts hand from either hip. Kurogane wears black fingerless gloves and forearm guards.
Personality: Kurogane is usually steady and even-tempered, though not above jesting with others. While generally relatively friendly, he often prefers to be alone with his Pokemon or alone training. Although naturally perceptive and logical, he may grow too focused and lose his reason. Overall, Kurogane is level-headed and good-natured.
History: --
Weapon(s): Large sword strapped to his back
Skill(s): Agility, Kurokaze fighting style (uses speed to produce air currents; highest techniques use speed to "slice through" the air and create temporary vaccums; while using the Kurokaze style, physical contact with the enemy is rare)
Pokemon: Scizor, Starmie (uses Minimize and appears to be a cloak clasp)
Other: Kurogane enjoys sparring with his Scizor.
Roleplay Sample: My "sample" will be the starting post for the roleplay.

I apologize for the late start. ^-^;;

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Pale mists wreathed the dew-dampened forest, filling the cold, early morning air with moisture. Amidst the blanket of fog and otherwise still air, two shadows moved--flitting two and fro, first toward one another, then away. One shadow was tinged with crimson, while the other was made solidly grey by the white cloud that enveloped the woods.

Metal rang against metal as golden sparks broke through the dim fog and reflected in the emerald-hued eyes of the grey shadow. Then, both figures sprang away from one another, one figure calling, "Come on, Scizor! I know you can do better than that! You may not be a morning Pokemon, but this is ridiculous!"

The scarlet form responded instantly to the taunt, darting forward with an upraised claw. Launching itself into the air, the Pokemon struck downward--aiming for the human that stood below.

"Too slow!" A steel blade was instantly raised to counter the blow. At the same moment, the sword was twisted to the side in an attempt to cast the Pokemon to the ground. However, even as it was flung toward the earth, Scizor turned to place its feet beneath it while clamping one claw firmly on its opponent's weapon. As Scizor's feet met with the forest floor, a swift kick was dealt to its claw, causing it to release its hold on the blade.

A swift succession of slashes followed--some attacks dealt by the human and countered by the Pokemon, while others were dealt by the Pokemon and halted by the human. After several minutes of fierce battle, the combatants leaped away from one another. Both Scizor and its human partner inhaled and exhaled in breaths of forced measure, while a single drop of sweat ran across the human's cheek.

Smiling slightly as he readied his sword, Kurogane brushed the sweat away with the back of his hand. "Looks like this'll be a good match after all."

 

[shadow keeper]

Jack walked silently through the woods. 'I hope I find some one to fight soon' he thought, 'I'm almost out of supplies.' He was walking beside his treecko and sneasel when sneasel stopped and readied his ears. he had heard something. Jack stopped then too becuase he could sense food was near-by, he had that amazing sence, and he then noticed a lurking figuire in the background and knew instantly it was his rival Dave. Dave and Jack had been enemies sence they met 12 years ago in his hometown.

This is perfect!' he thought. he knew Dave was a glutton and always carried too much food to stuff even in his stomach. he had never figiured out though how Dave could be so skinny and fast after eating all that. ha had figiured that out last time he saw Dave.
*flashback*
The sun is setting in the background. he knew his treecko doesn't stand a chance at night and niether sneasel that good at day. Sunset was both. he looke to the side and saw dave standing there with a swalot. ' A SWALOT! THAT'S HIS POKEMON!' Jack thought. He knew that they were in no fighting condition as swalot was just finished poisening a raticate and was still fighting. 'ah a perfect balance. sneasel and treecko and I better leave now'. "Guy's c'mon, oh crud." Dave was standing over him. "reday to fight?"

 

[Saboten]

Miku sat on the rather large rock, not far away from the trickling river. She were cleaning her dirt covered Katana, with her Ivysaur and Arcanine by her side. Her fire pokemon seemed to be in a sleeping state, whilist her Bulbasaur were staring at her.

Miku suddenly growled, having a hard time trying to wipe the dirt away.
" I should have cleaned it before it got worse..." she grumbled. Though, with a hard scrape, she managed to make it as good as new.

She stod up, shaking her Arcanine. Her pokemon blinked several times, then yawned. " Come on Arcanine, Ivysaur, we had to go! I want someone to battle with!" she said. Her pokemons nodded, obeying her master's order. They followed her, as she walked of towards the dark forest ahead...

 

[Neko]

Neko sat down on a tree, along with both her Pokemon, in the depths of Viridian Forest. "Arg, this is soooo boring!" Neko complained while she shined her numerous kunai and shuriken. Placing a now shiny kunai in her pack that was attached to the side of her thigh, she took out a shuriken and started shining that. Her Pikachu stared at her, while her Eevee was contempt washing herself.

"Pika?" Pikachu's ears twitched as it turned behind her and sniffed the air.

"Hm? What is it Pika.." She turned around and immediately stuffed the shuriken in her pack. "Oh, hell yeah!!" She said as her, Pikachu, and now Eevee jumped down from the tree branch they were sitting on. They now stared at a hoard of Pinser. 'This is gonna be fun..' Neko said as she readied a kunai from her pack. Pikachu's cheeks lit up a neon red, while Eevee's tail lashed from side to side. "Ok..ready, steady...GO!!!!" Neko said as she, Pikachu, and Eevee charged toward the angry hoard of Pinser.

 

[Jeudi]

A yawn escaped Tsukiko Chono's mouth. It had been awhile since any worthwhile orders had come into her train of thought. As much as she was a trainer, she was considered a 'doctor.' However, there was one poison she was always against. Even at this moment, she never made poisons that killed anyone. Her own parents had been a victim to poisons of natural death, so she was against any such poison. Her eyes darted to her Nidoqueen. The pokemon looked at her with a nod, handing her a few herbs to grind into poison. "Thank you, hopefully we'll get this order done by next week." The pokemon smiled at her.
"Nidoking...nido..."
"What is it?" She turned towards a sound, a few beedrill were mad she had stolen the few tips they had left in their nest. Her nidoking was being rather annoyed at the fact he had put so much effort not to disturb them. "You are welcome to fight them, Nidoking." The male smiled.

 

[CyBeastSaber]

Oooo. Since you put it that way, I guess I'll join too. However, I'm at school and I have only a limited amount of time left for lunch so I'll post mine as soon as I get off school.

 

[Kogenta]

Blade and claw clashed as human and Pokemon repeatedly launched attacks toward one another. Dodging a slice, Scizor rammed its head into Kurogane's stomach. Locking one arm about Scizor's neck as he fell, Kurogane twisted to one side, causing Scizor to fall beneath him. Then, springing back as the scarlet Pokemon's claw snapped dangerously near his neck, Kurogane slashed his weapon through the air--launching a blade-like air current toward his opponent.

Scizor vanished, leaving the attack to scar the ground and escaping, itself unscathed. Materializing behind Kurogane, the steel type dealt a blow toward the human's head. Kurogane instinctively dropped down, swinging his leg around in a kick that collapsed Scizor's legs and cast it to the ground. However, Scizor regained its stance as swiftly as though it had never fallen--driving its claw upward and knocking Kurogane's sword from his hands as it stood.

As his weapon landed some distance away, Kurogane quickly raised one arm, using the speed of his movement to form a stream of air that blocked a blow from Scizor. Fleetingly casting his emerald-gold eyes toward his blade, Kurogane noted its position before blocking a second attack with a similar "air shield". Again and again, Kurogane blocked Scizor's strikes--the human's clenched hands moving with incredible speed. Then, as Scizor thrust a claw directly toward Kurogane's head, the male flitted one side and grasped Scizor's wrist, using the Pokemon's momentum to cast it forward.

Releasing his hold of Scizor as the bug Pokemon fell, Kurogane dashed toward his weapon and firmly grasped its hilt. In a single, seamless movement, the warrior wrenched the sword from the ground and brought it about in a swift slice that directed a massive air current toward Scizor.

Though Scizor raised both arms to block the attack, the force of the strike slammed it against a tree. Across the forest clearing, Kurogane was thrown against a thick tree trunk by the recoil of his attack.

For several minutes, the battle partners remained as they were--partially sprawled on the grass and partially supported by their respective trees, but both limp and gasping for air. Between breaths, Kurogane called, "Seems like . . . " He swallowed a mouthful of air. ". . . A draw again. Eh, Scizor?"

The steel Pokemon murmured an agreement. "Sci . . . "

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Finally, Scizor and Kurogane staggered into an unsteady stance--not fully erect and still panting slightly, but in considerably better condition.

Placing his blade in the earth and leaning on its hilt, the human turned his gaze skyward. The forest mist had almost fully dispersed, revealing a sky of clear and bright azure above. "Looks like it'll be another sunny day . . . " Kurogane smiled as he turned to the scarlet Pokemon that approached him.

"What do you think, partner? Where should we go today?"

"Sci, scizor . . . "

"Alright, then. West it is."

 

[Jeudi]

Her Nidoking looked happy with what had happened, coming back triumphantly with three more beedrill needles. "Well, I guess it'll go in our reserves, eh?" The male happily nodded to her with a smile on its face in a sort of way. She stood, stretching her legs. Her skirt felt almost stained completely against her. "I better go and take a bath." Nidoqueen followed her, covering the woman's place in a pond.