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Answer of Destiny

Grammar mistakes, spelling (even though you used MSWord, it still has some. I.e. "Bean" should be "been"), some tense trouble, Lack of overall description, and the length is poor.

*Plants a big, fat, red arrow pointing to a certain stickied thread that says: "READ FIRST."*
 
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