Any suggestions before i get too far?

[PatJamma]

Ok so I don't do EV training so don't suggest i kill a million of whatever pokemon
Trading is also unavailable to me as I'm playing this on an actual Crystal cartridge
So here's my team so far:

Typhlosion@Charcoal lvl 40
Ember (will replace with flamethrower)
Smokescreen (probably replace with sunny day)
Flame wheel
Thunder punch

Espeon@Amulet coin lvl 40
Psybeam
Tail whip (I want to replace this but i don't know what would be good)
Shadow ball
Bite

Electabuzz@nevermelt-ice lvl 40
Thunder punch (will be replaced with thunderbolt after the E4)
ice punch
dizzy punch
Fire punch

Crobat@King's rock lvl 40
Confuse ray
wing attack (someone want to tell me why wing attack is so bad?)
bite
fly

Lanturn@mystic water lvl 40
thunder wave
spark (will be replaced with thunderbolt after the E4)
surf
confuse ray (will be replaced with ice beam after the E4)

and then the future member of my team will be:
Snorlax@leftovers
Body slam
Hyper beam
Zap Cannon (I'm not changing this)
Flamethrower (or this)

So what moves do you guys think should be changed? If any moves are TMs please tell me what TM it is and where i can get it

 

[_.-C~a~R~d~I~a~C-._]

Well that's pretty good. For your Espeon I would suggest something like Toxic or Calm Mind. I don't have many suggestions for this team. It's very good. Last thing. I would put a stronger electric move on my Electebuzz then Thunderpunch. Something like Thunder..Good team though.

 

[PatJamma]

Well that's pretty good. For your Espeon I would suggest something like Toxic or Calm Mind. I don't have many suggestions for this team. It's very good. Last thing. I would put a stronger electric move on my Electebuzz then Thunderpunch. Something like Thunder..Good team though.

uhh thanks but this is in Crystal version Calm Mind didn't exist in generation II also I said I was replacing thunder punch with thunder bolt

 

[gamefan1]

well heres some change you can make

Typhlosion@Charcoal lvl 40
Ember (will replace with flamethrower)
Smokescreen (probably replace with sunny day)
Flame wheel (since you have flamethrower change it for fire blast for a powerfull attack)
Thunder punch

Espeon@Amulet coin lvl 40
Psybeam
Tail whip (why not put psychic)
Shadow ball
Bite

Electabuzz@nevermelt-ice lvl 40
Thunder punch (will be replaced with thunderbolt after the E4)
ice punch
dizzy punch
Fire punch

Crobat@King's rock lvl 40
Confuse ray
wing attack (IDK why wing attak sucks but i suggest a poison attack that would be great)
bite
fly

Lanturn@mystic water lvl 40
thunder wave
spark (will be replaced with thunderbolt after the E4)
surf
confuse ray (will be replaced with ice beam after the E4)

and then the future member of my team will be:
Snorlax@leftovers
Body slam
Hyper beam
Zap Cannon (I'm not changing this)
Flamethrower (or this)


Then again overall you have a good team :)

 

[PatJamma]

Crobat can't learn any poison tpye moves besides toxic. so would Return be a good choice to replace Wing Attack?