bad girl

[yuuka]

ever since I lost somthing I loved
Ive been nothing but a bad girl
talking back to my parents
fitghing in school
thats just not cool
Ive been such a fool

But I just dont care!

between two friends who hat each other
not listening to my mother
life is just so.......... :(
Im just nothing but a bad girl

 

[Agent9]

short but ok. Not what I expected really from you yuuka. It's great though.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

It's alright for a poem. ^^ Decent job here.

 

[Caroline]

It's pretty nice. ^^;
It's quite sad too... and I can see that you have been able to put the emotion into it so that the readers can feel what the song is wanting you to feel.
Keep up with the great work.

 

[Envy]

It's very nice!I liked it,anger,sadness,impulive too!^^