Battle Frontier Azami CG-ness~

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Battle Frontier Azami CG-ness~

    Fun-ness~ This is my first *real* CG in months. Well Crits? It's my first time shading like this. It comes out pretty good. I used Paint Shop Pro 7 since Open Canvas crashed but I like PSP. Lineart was real fast since I wanted to color. XD

    For more art visit my sheezyArt Account at https://tsuji.sheezyart.com

    so C&C please :3
     
    The shading is cool, but u need to work more on the line and her proportions.

    Her arms are too think and short at the same time. Left arm is nearly double sized compared to right. Also try to make the face thinner (same with the neck), as anime girls tend to have think necks and thinner faces too.

    Details on the model are good thought :)
     
    Very Cool Brandon ^_^
    I really like the shading , keep it up, You keep getting better
    :)
     
    A very good attempt, the perspective issues have been pointed out...but that comes with time and practice.
    Grrrr..perspective and backgrounds are my mortal enemy...

    I don't remember how well I could draw when I was 13, I'm going to have to rummage through some old sketchbooks now! ^_^ Keep practicing, though!
     
    Wonderful shading, especially on her clothes. ^_^ I really like the background, too! The blind effect works really well. :) I really like the lineart, too!

    The only problem I can see is that the arms look a bit too thick for the size of her body. :) Other than that, it looks great! :D
     
    PichuSecretBase said:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Battle Frontier Azami CG-ness~

    Fun-ness~ This is my first *real* CG in months. Well Crits? It's my first time shading like this. It comes out pretty good. I used Paint Shop Pro 7 since Open Canvas crashed but I like PSP. Lineart was real fast since I wanted to color. XD

    For more art visit my sheezyArt Account at https://tsuji.sheezyart.com

    so C&C please :3
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    That's really cool art. I like it very much. Keep up the good work.
     
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