Bit O' Poetry

theowlmanlives

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    (Bad as it may be I'm still posting it 'cause I want some constructive criticism.)
    (Also, yes its acrostic)
    Storms
    Thunder clashes
    Outside lightning strikes
    Rain falls violently
    Mothers quiet scared children

    Here's another:

    When Guardian of Black,
    and Guardian of White,
    meet each other there begins a fight,
    and a gray horizon is formed.
    And lo, the end of man is born.
    Only one can stop this destruction.
    One partnered with one imbued with lightning.
    And there man's destiny is decided,
    with a battle ending in a clash of lightning    .
     
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    I'm supposing that your second poem is referring to Black & White. Correct?
    Anyway, it's pretty neat. Nothing awesome, but nothing bad either. So it's an all-round good poem.
    Keep going, you may have great talent.
     
    Though I doubt you'd remember TJgamer but I posted the second poem before at meerfall's pokemon poem thread.. at least I think it's meerfall's thread... It was my first shot at Poketry.
     
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    Oh yeah, I remember now!
    Thanks.
    And good luck on your future writings.
     
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